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Stuff Left On The Side Of The Road
I'm stuck in traffic
amongst the cigarette butts and broken glass
a dog corpse lays crumbled in the street
my eyes stare upon the poor beast
what a grotesque scene
I truly hate the human race
no shovel or bag
there is nothing I can do
but hope and oh how I hate hope
that this animal found peace
though I doubt it
I imagine his horrible life
how he was treated and how he ended up here
exposed and broken on a busy road
I cry, I cry for the discarded creature
traffic remains at a standstill
feeling bad in ways I can not explain
I hold the top of my nose
pinching off imaginary pain
a horn honks
I push slowly on the gas peddle
looking back one more time
knowing I get to leave
another wave of guilt is inhaled
the dog, he will lay there
rot there
and become a piece of road leather
how many people will even notice,
no one really caring
and everyone driving away
just like me
amongst the cigarette butts and broken glass
a dog corpse lays crumbled in the street
my eyes stare upon the poor beast
what a grotesque scene
I truly hate the human race
no shovel or bag
there is nothing I can do
but hope and oh how I hate hope
that this animal found peace
though I doubt it
I imagine his horrible life
how he was treated and how he ended up here
exposed and broken on a busy road
I cry, I cry for the discarded creature
traffic remains at a standstill
feeling bad in ways I can not explain
I hold the top of my nose
pinching off imaginary pain
a horn honks
I push slowly on the gas peddle
looking back one more time
knowing I get to leave
another wave of guilt is inhaled
the dog, he will lay there
rot there
and become a piece of road leather
how many people will even notice,
no one really caring
and everyone driving away
just like me
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Re: Stuff Left On The Side Of The Road
14th Jun 2013 2:04am
Reality Bites .....and I see an introspection coming out of you that is heavy reflective and poignant....
I don't know what your going thru Nikki
Just keep writing!
This was masterfully done!
Fire
I don't know what your going thru Nikki
Just keep writing!
This was masterfully done!
Fire
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re: Re: Stuff Left On The Side Of The Road
14th Jun 2013 2:08am
Thank you Fire :) I'm just living life same old same really I just socialize a lot more than I was, I took some time from the grind working on a lot of stuff on the creative side of things :)
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14th Jun 2013 2:41am
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Re: Stuff Left On The Side Of The Road
14th Jun 2013 3:30am
Sad that is, whats left life is gone (not saying it's right ...HOW)...all You can do is help WHERE you KNOW You can...sometimes that's hardest--and emotive write-pen excellence to the careless society at large!!!
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14th Jun 2013 4:56am
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Re: Stuff Left On The Side Of The Road
14th Jun 2013 1:31pm
Love and compassion throughout this write. I found it a metphore for the way in which we treat some of the vunerable people in our society too, but maybe I'm just reading that in where it wasn't intended.
Thanks for sharing Nikki
Thanks for sharing Nikki
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14th Jun 2013 8:58pm
Re: Stuff Left On The Side Of The Road
15th Jun 2013 2:47am
I haven't been around in awhile...glad I didn't miss this one of yours...love the details in the scenery surrounding the dog...excellent imagery..you did a good job of depressing me...so thanks....:)
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Re: Stuff Left On The Side Of The Road
15th Jun 2013 10:30am
Dog's got a poem now, must count for something.
Here's to the dog! (And the bit of us that ends this way.)
Here's to the dog! (And the bit of us that ends this way.)
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Re: Stuff Left On The Side Of The Road
15th Jun 2013 3:51pm
Very close to how I go through all that, a lot of roadkill here, too much. Good work, nikki.
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16th Jun 2013 1:51pm
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