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It's Like This Some Day's
I want him, I want to eat him
rip and tear flesh from his bones
hear him scream and moan, beg
for me to stop, beg for more
call my name in heavy breaths
gasping for air,
I want him to claw at me, leave
his mark on my skin, in my depths
give himself to me, free me from
my prison, hear me whisper
my love, my soldier of pain
take me, I am yours
With clenched teeth and a fistful
of my hair, call me your sexy
bitch, I am your queen of pain
take me, you want my delights
wrapped around you
squeezing tight
Pull and tug on me, arms, hair,
clothes just give me your
pulsing cock, my hands grabbing
your face, wrists, balls
needing you
wanting me
rip and tear flesh from his bones
hear him scream and moan, beg
for me to stop, beg for more
call my name in heavy breaths
gasping for air,
I want him to claw at me, leave
his mark on my skin, in my depths
give himself to me, free me from
my prison, hear me whisper
my love, my soldier of pain
take me, I am yours
With clenched teeth and a fistful
of my hair, call me your sexy
bitch, I am your queen of pain
take me, you want my delights
wrapped around you
squeezing tight
Pull and tug on me, arms, hair,
clothes just give me your
pulsing cock, my hands grabbing
your face, wrists, balls
needing you
wanting me
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12th Jun 2013 2:52am
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 3:40am
Wow yummy... Lucky guy it seems!
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12th Jun 2013 3:50am
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12th Jun 2013 6:52am
Straightforward appeal to strong passionate lust. Favourite lines:
Take me, you want my delights
Wrapped around you
Squeezing tight.
Take me, you want my delights
Wrapped around you
Squeezing tight.
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12th Jun 2013 9:53am
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 3:08pm
tommie,
Oh Yes!!! We all long for the days when it's exactly like that! Great visual pen! ; )
tornado
Oh Yes!!! We all long for the days when it's exactly like that! Great visual pen! ; )
tornado
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12th Jun 2013 3:11pm
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Mmmmmmm.... Yea baby, open up wider for me... I ohhh fuuuucccckkk yea, aaaaahhhhhh mmmmmmmm shut up! SMMMAAACCCKK! Beg for more u lil hott bitch! Rrroooaarr!!!uuugghhh oooollhhhhh shit fea baby yea!!! Ride that fat pole!!! Gimme more gimme more!!! Uh Hhmmm Oopsie! Did I say that aloud!? lmao... Yea baby, this was HOTT!! lol
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15th Jun 2013 00:26am
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 3:58am
Intense write tl...strider!
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15th Jun 2013 00:28am
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 11:54pm
Can I crown you hottest hottie of 2013? I'm with Solomon...this line floors me:
"you want my delights
wrapped around you
squeezing tight "
An erotic feast with creamy dessert.
"you want my delights
wrapped around you
squeezing tight "
An erotic feast with creamy dessert.
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re: Re: It's Like This Some Day's
15th Jun 2013 00:32am
Of course you can crown me hottest hottie of 20013...lmao!
Thank you....I'm glad you liked it! ;)
Thank you....I'm glad you liked it! ;)