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Sunbeams & Rain
Golden shoulders glisten
while warm rain drops fall
sun peeks through breaks
in the clouds beaming to
the ground
Behold such grace and beauty
spilling all around as the sky
feeds the soil and
the flesh
Hands wrap around me with
gentle kisses to my neck
I tilt my head back
exposing more skin
Reaching behind me with one
hand I hold your back and
pull your head into me
with the other hand
Tasting my wet sweet skin
on your lips the rain keeps falling
over us as we lower ourselves
to the ground
Deep in the throws of our
passion with sunbeams through
clouds, rain pouring down
it's just you and I
while warm rain drops fall
sun peeks through breaks
in the clouds beaming to
the ground
Behold such grace and beauty
spilling all around as the sky
feeds the soil and
the flesh
Hands wrap around me with
gentle kisses to my neck
I tilt my head back
exposing more skin
Reaching behind me with one
hand I hold your back and
pull your head into me
with the other hand
Tasting my wet sweet skin
on your lips the rain keeps falling
over us as we lower ourselves
to the ground
Deep in the throws of our
passion with sunbeams through
clouds, rain pouring down
it's just you and I
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Re: Sunbeams & Rain
Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 5:19pm
Very romantic, gives you a lazy,
dreamy feel, in the moment kind of
feeling...I love the descriptive
nature scenes:)
dreamy feel, in the moment kind of
feeling...I love the descriptive
nature scenes:)
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 8:16pm
Sounds like my day. It's been blazing hot and then a thunderstorm moves through. Pretty dang romantic, I guess, making love in the rain.
Nicely written!
Nicely written!
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 8:45pm
I figured as much :)
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11th Jun 2013 9:38pm
Echo lerdgoin. Mildly erotic shades of Sedaka song "Laugher in the rain".
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11th Jun 2013 9:47pm
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 2:35am
Liked the imagery and flow tl...nice write
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Re: Sunbeams & Rain
Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 4:43am
What I wouldn't give to kiss these glistening shoulders
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