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What If?
What if the creek flowed backwards?
would it change it's beginning and end?
what if the crops grew in opposite season?
would we be affected?
what if the wind blew warm, instead of cold?
would we love it more or less?
what if the rain tasted sweet?
would we dance in it more often?
what if we all changed our perception?
would we begin to see differently?
would it change it's beginning and end?
what if the crops grew in opposite season?
would we be affected?
what if the wind blew warm, instead of cold?
would we love it more or less?
what if the rain tasted sweet?
would we dance in it more often?
what if we all changed our perception?
would we begin to see differently?
Published 11th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 5:08pm
Loved this, and such perception
and thought...
Love these lines: what if the rain tasted sweet?
would we dance in it more often?
what if we all changed our perception?
would we begin to see differently?
These lines are so true..to feel and
be free, and just go into the moment...
and thought...
Love these lines: what if the rain tasted sweet?
would we dance in it more often?
what if we all changed our perception?
would we begin to see differently?
These lines are so true..to feel and
be free, and just go into the moment...
11th Jun 2013 9:43pm
Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate your feedback! I hope you have a great day! :)
13th Jun 2013 10:19pm
Aha. This i truly liked. It shows a kind person who wants good for all. Rain does taste sweet. i dance in it all the time when I'm sad.
15th Jun 2013 8:11pm
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3rd Jul 2013 10:33pm
Very unique perception, and very interesting questions. Keep asking your questions, they will make you an ever better philosipher, and a little philosiphy goes a long way in this world.
4th Jul 2013 3:50am
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