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Just one more cut </3
Heart beat pounding in my ear,
just one more cut
turn this water crimson.
just one more cut
turn this water crimson.
Published 12th Nov 2010
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6th Feb 2011 5:29pm
The heart-smiley... is kind of childish and takes some of the serious messages of the poem away (Oh god, that doesnt sounds right.. oh fuck it, english isn't even my first languge...)
But the poem itself...
Is amazing.
But the poem itself...
Is amazing.
