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Babe
Babe
of my youth
with which tender
looks held truths
giraffes under beds
is what you said
keeping eyes wide
holding your blanket
Oh so tight
wandering rides
in dark of night
you'd fall asleep
soon as we'd leave
horses on the trails
that time
you almost fell
we'd make breakfast
giggle and a mess
Corn fritters pancakes
Eggs and jest
drive to New York
just to roam
turn around
head for home
time...
when You
whispered
I put a bead in my ear
thought I'd die
if you couldn't hear
we watched
each other crawl
crying to life
holding lovingly
till the other one
quieted
cap and gown
loves lost
finally found
searching direction
beating a path
finding perfection
in artistic craft
My Amazon
Gold One
graduated
sensitivity degrees
brought to the world
Babe
making pappy of me
of my youth
with which tender
looks held truths
giraffes under beds
is what you said
keeping eyes wide
holding your blanket
Oh so tight
wandering rides
in dark of night
you'd fall asleep
soon as we'd leave
horses on the trails
that time
you almost fell
we'd make breakfast
giggle and a mess
Corn fritters pancakes
Eggs and jest
drive to New York
just to roam
turn around
head for home
time...
when You
whispered
I put a bead in my ear
thought I'd die
if you couldn't hear
we watched
each other crawl
crying to life
holding lovingly
till the other one
quieted
cap and gown
loves lost
finally found
searching direction
beating a path
finding perfection
in artistic craft
My Amazon
Gold One
graduated
sensitivity degrees
brought to the world
Babe
making pappy of me
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10th Jun 2013 2:33am
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10th Jun 2013 2:53am
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 6:50am
Awesome write soul...strider
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10th Jun 2013 8:31am
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 10:06am
A heartfelt write, nothing is like the love for your children....much enjoyed
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11th Jun 2013 2:08am
Thank You Dear Queen-so true...she'll forever be that Young till I am gone.
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10th Jun 2013 10:39am
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10th Jun 2013 10:54am
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11th Jun 2013 2:10am
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 11:20am
this was vivid and potent..lovely work, soula :-)
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11th Jun 2013 2:12am
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10th Jun 2013 12:52pm
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11th Jun 2013 2:14am
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10th Jun 2013 4:24pm
What a lovely poem soulfully written only a daring soul could possibly conjure! I like it.
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11th Jun 2013 2:15am
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10th Jun 2013 5:17pm
Soulman, such terrific images as "giraffes under beds" and "horses on the trails" really light up this piece. Fine work, my friend!
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11th Jun 2013 2:17am
Thank You Tony:)
putting blankets to the door (Drafts)...she was scared :)
putting blankets to the door (Drafts)...she was scared :)
Re: Babe
13th Jun 2013 6:16pm
Sweet n' tender write, drew a smile out of me.
You write excellent love poems.
You write excellent love poems.
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13th Jun 2013 9:41pm
Glad I could make You smile Dear Scribbler-That gives me one as well:)
Thank You!!!
Thank You!!!