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He Reminds Me Of Benzodiazepine
His emotions are lucent
somnolent
I lay across the bed
and listen as he articulates
life
My head concealed in the Solace of pillows
(he drones on....)
Sun casts over his features
highlighting imperfections..
(he reminds me of benzodiazepine.)
I giggle outloud
burrow my head deeper
into the pillows...
and
Conjure up daydreams.
somnolent
I lay across the bed
and listen as he articulates
life
My head concealed in the Solace of pillows
(he drones on....)
Sun casts over his features
highlighting imperfections..
(he reminds me of benzodiazepine.)
I giggle outloud
burrow my head deeper
into the pillows...
and
Conjure up daydreams.
Published 8th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 00:44am
Love the mood here river lily
strider
strider
9th Jun 2013 3:56am
whomever he maybe I hope the daydreams awoke your heart to Utopias and untold magic!
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9th Jun 2013 11:59am
Nothing like conjuring up those daydreams. Great visual that takes the reader there Lily. Nicely penned.
9th Jun 2013 12:00pm
