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Black-blooded
Is it me there
in your pretty little rhyparography?
Seems you had a few misstrokes
while constructing my sordidness
Impress us with your erudition
Your blind ambitions
Your self-conditioned
moral mended
knowledge blending
form
can't create
nor imitate
anything of the scorned
I'm black-blooded
and so you've been warned
but your high-class ignorance
keeps you on your toes
while i'm flat-footed
and surrounded by your friendly foes
The crows
And you...
just keep flipping pages
scrolling for ages
searching for traces
and answers
in which
you cannot learn
Published 31st May 2013
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31st May 2013 4:27pm
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1st Jun 2013 00:50am
Aww thank you so much. You will definitely see more from me.I write like crazy :)
1st Jun 2013 4:09pm
1st Jun 2013 4:11pm
1st Jun 2013 5:08pm
Great poem! I love it as a retort. An injury to whomever insulted you, I presume? You also make a lot of good comparisons and contrasts.
Lines 6-12 are my favorite, great flow in them.
Lines 6-12 are my favorite, great flow in them.
3rd Jun 2013 2:58pm
Thanks! It's sort of a general statement for ones who think they are brighter or more experienced just because they have book smarts, in which, decide to take a jab at me or others who seem lower on the totem pole, and showing them that there is more to it than what they assume in their great big white world.
4th Jun 2013 00:04am
I understand that. I've met many many more people who've been educated by living, TRULY living (not existing, there's a very clear distinction) that are much smarter than formally educated people.
And oh, to have both is a dream.
And oh, to have both is a dream.
