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Loving You II
Loving you is beautiful
The beauty in your eyes
Share such love from within
Specks of darker brown on brown
Beauty in loving you
Is you loving me back
Loving you is beautiful
Beautiful in all its little gestures
The smile and looks
The loving wants and desires
The best loving I want
Is the splendour of love
Loving you is beautiful
Angels in dreams
Are not as much as you
From across spheres
I touch your loving
And feel beauty in loving you
Love unconditional
Love pure and honest
Love giving and forgiving
Love taking and receiving
Loving you is beautiful
For you are me and I am you!
The beauty in your eyes
Share such love from within
Specks of darker brown on brown
Beauty in loving you
Is you loving me back
Loving you is beautiful
Beautiful in all its little gestures
The smile and looks
The loving wants and desires
The best loving I want
Is the splendour of love
Loving you is beautiful
Angels in dreams
Are not as much as you
From across spheres
I touch your loving
And feel beauty in loving you
Love unconditional
Love pure and honest
Love giving and forgiving
Love taking and receiving
Loving you is beautiful
For you are me and I am you!
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31st May 2013 3:04am
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Anonymous
31st May 2013 3:13am
another gem grace
good luck
strider...
good luck
strider...
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31st May 2013 3:26am
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31st May 2013 3:46am
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31st May 2013 7:29am
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31st May 2013 1:17pm
Really. Well, the competition did say I have to repeat some things.:)Repetition...thanks Terry for reading and commenting.
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Anonymous
31st May 2013 7:31am
Beautiful, indeed! lovely work, Grace :-)
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31st May 2013 1:18pm
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31st May 2013 1:18pm
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31st May 2013 2:56pm
"Love unconditional
Love pure and honest
Love giving and forgiving
Love taking and receiving
Loving you is beautiful
For you are me and I am you!"
That says it all beautiful as it should be.
Red
Love pure and honest
Love giving and forgiving
Love taking and receiving
Loving you is beautiful
For you are me and I am you!"
That says it all beautiful as it should be.
Red
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31st May 2013 3:22pm
I stretch on the beautiful a lot...:)).didnt I. Thanks Red for reading and commenting.
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