Where I Breathe

nice write ataki!

Thanks, Strider.

Feels like the moments after you swim underwater!

Nothing gets past you, Mike.

;)

Amazing write. A higher frequency of existence depicted marvelously.

Thank you kindly, Elrond. :)

Such a tranquil immersion Atakti.. You breathe in ink beautifully.

Ooh, what a graceful comment, thanks, Magdalena!

Pushed by your subconscious as quick as you could find something to record the flow, just before the ebb took the words back out of sight.  Dig it Ata!  

How did you know...?

:)

Thanks, artky.

This one is truly a gemstone!
Truly, complete!!!

Many thanks, Mourganna... it felt good writing it.

Nothing like piercing the surface and taking in a breath of belonging. Captured beautifully so well done.

Thank you kindly, Deathpuppy.

:)

beautiful!
awesome freaking write
I'm living this right now.

Nikki! Where you at, hmm??

Good to see you, thanks!

A different rhythm and pace for you, languid, almost hazy. I love it. On my reading list.

Thanks for the list add, Aish, and your lovely comment...

:)

Aahhh.....slipping beneath the surface of crazed chaos.... sliding placidly into serenity...breathing in the solace.

Reading restores my soul's tranquility.

Sioch`ain leat,

Enchantress

Thank you, Enchantress, for such a dreamy comment.

:)

Serene, beautiful write, Atakti. A wonderful read! :)

Carlene

Thank you, Carlene!

:)

Happiness in a bubble love it xoxox

Don't pop my bubble...

Thanks, Gigi.

:)

on sheer appearance, I sorta wished the first line was shorter, but so inconsequential

but really is a beautiful little piece... a guided meditation through that lovely space you found yourself in

ha, lb. someone else told me not to worry too much on the appearance, but to concentrate on structure (last words and first words getting emphasis, among other things).

I'm still knocking off a few rough edges...

Thanks for reading and commenting.  :)

Thank you, Kasupuu, yes it holds meaning for me...

Wonderful writing, I love the meanings beneath it,
I especially liked the structure of this :)

Thank you, Scribbler!

Ata