My Urban Blues (take1)

A great urban blues Gyspy, wonderful pen dear.

Glad you enjoyed my blues Magda, you're the coolest!

Red

Lovely Blues Red...you are a poet for sure...strider!

Was there ever any doubt?(kidding)lol Thanks Strider!


Red

Urban Blues cut through my soul, my funky hips do have a goal.
To dance the rhythm that you play, move in tempo with your sway.
My eight track player has recorded, pickup lines I have hoarded.
Hear my notes among your jazz, I’ll dazzle you with my pizazz.

Loved your first take......

OH I LOVED YOUR COMMENT!!! It was great,I am thrilled to no end that you enjoyed it and it inspired so. Thank you!!!

Red

Wow, Red, that's good ...no doubt about it.

Thank you my lovely Grace,it's a little something different.


Red

I'm hip to this, it swings and sings Dear Red!!!
Most wonderful write!!!

Hahah Soul you're sweet, glad you liked it.

Red

Loving you Urban blues red

great stuff
Marcus

Glad to hear it music man thank you for stopping by!


Red

Yea baby cum to daddy! lol loved this smooth silky
soliloquy of sweet melodies! lol awesomeness here! :)

Lol Nasty boy! so look out for take two,

It will serenade you
in the promenade,
words coming at you
in a cascade,
a high that takes you
from black to fade.


lol Thanks for stopping by babes
Red  

Hell, it's alright with ME!!! lol...
Woman, you can definitely talk the talk and walk the walk; stepping high in poetic-stilettos!
I blush at your urban blues. Ready for(take2)Xo

I like that"stepping high in poetic-stilettos" I might have to borrow that Ms. Rain,thank kindly for the great comment!

Red