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On This Night
This is a good
strong branch
sitting here
collecting my thoughts
Watching
sol run
those last vibrant
reds out, orange hour
fast approaches
the day ending
Luna takes the sky
arriving
in a wash
purple grey
I prefer the night
you see
life is so
much more
interesting
when the city
sleeps
I hide
away from society
during the light
as much as permits,
it is here
during
the night
I am king
among the lunatics
at least
on this
night
strong branch
sitting here
collecting my thoughts
Watching
sol run
those last vibrant
reds out, orange hour
fast approaches
the day ending
Luna takes the sky
arriving
in a wash
purple grey
I prefer the night
you see
life is so
much more
interesting
when the city
sleeps
I hide
away from society
during the light
as much as permits,
it is here
during
the night
I am king
among the lunatics
at least
on this
night
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Re: On This Night
25th May 2013 6:51pm
Bad news, I'm afraid. According to the Poetry Assessor (http://115.146.95.34/poetry/) this poem scores -.973 which means it does not have the characteristics of a professional poem.
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re: Re: On This Night
25th May 2013 6:58pm
That is very handy to know
professional poet I am not
what is poetic profession?
professional poet I am not
what is poetic profession?
Re: On This Night
Anonymous
25th May 2013 9:32pm
nice write noctem....join the club brotha!
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re: Re: On This Night
26th May 2013 3:07pm
Re: On This Night
26th May 2013 1:54am
re: Re: On This Night
26th May 2013 3:08pm
Re: On This Night
26th May 2013 2:32am
Excellent Read Carpe, I always have lived most within nights, and breathed ease in the dusk hours...I loved this Poem Sir!!!
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re: Re: On This Night
26th May 2013 3:18pm
Re: On This Night
26th May 2013 5:24am
Nice job, Carpe. Like Soulman above, I prefer the night and you do it justice. Lunatics, a perfect word.
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re: Re: On This Night
26th May 2013 3:20pm
Re: On This Night
Anonymous
26th May 2013 1:07pm
hey, I love the night and the lunatics-and WTF is a professional poem score? Pft...
great write, carpe!
great write, carpe!
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re: Re: On This Night
26th May 2013 3:17pm