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How Are You Today?
"Ok"..
now for
those of you
that know "ok"
the type that know
of "it's" broad definition
this is a happy "ok"
the content "ok"
that emotional blanket
deceitfully covering up the "ok"
that as we know
at any moment could be
"ok"
the "ok"
this is as far as I want the conversation to go
"ok" so I hate my self right now
the "ok" of loneliness
"ok" of pain
apathy's child "ok"
now for
those of you
that know "ok"
the type that know
of "it's" broad definition
this is a happy "ok"
the content "ok"
that emotional blanket
deceitfully covering up the "ok"
that as we know
at any moment could be
"ok"
the "ok"
this is as far as I want the conversation to go
"ok" so I hate my self right now
the "ok" of loneliness
"ok" of pain
apathy's child "ok"
Published 22nd May 2013
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22nd May 2013 7:29pm
ok can speak volumes. Glad I'm not the only one to think so! I kind of feel like there should be a part two...
22nd May 2013 7:41pm
The night is young..actually it's 4:10..tomorrow I could wake up hate my self but, disguise part 2 as "I feel fine"..
Thanks mate for dropping by.
Thanks mate for dropping by.
Anonymous
22nd May 2013 9:04pm
your muse worked here noctem...
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24th May 2013 4:06pm
yeah i agree with all of the above ^
if one can take the word okay
and make an entire poem out of it
i reckon they gotta be pretty skilled
loved it,
specially how it get's really serious in the end
=].
if one can take the word okay
and make an entire poem out of it
i reckon they gotta be pretty skilled
loved it,
specially how it get's really serious in the end
=].
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