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Despite it all
Despite my laugh
My rambunctious roar
Of mirth and happy gurgles
Despite my dancing in
Purple haze of joy
The deeper me
Is just grey
Despite the gaiety of it all
The dancing at the ball
The flirtatious gait
The party fox
Despite it all
I am just
Grace
So judge me not for this
My ever happy laughter
Think me not a clown
Hoping for the applause
from a crowd of revellers
I too have many thoughts
Of me, you and all of them
Despite it all
My rambunctious roar
Of mirth and happy gurgles
Despite my dancing in
Purple haze of joy
The deeper me
Is just grey
Despite the gaiety of it all
The dancing at the ball
The flirtatious gait
The party fox
Despite it all
I am just
Grace
So judge me not for this
My ever happy laughter
Think me not a clown
Hoping for the applause
from a crowd of revellers
I too have many thoughts
Of me, you and all of them
Despite it all
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Re: Despite it all
22nd May 2013 12:00pm
Very relatable Grace, the outside very rarely portrays the inside.
Great expression and pen.
Great expression and pen.
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re: Re: Despite it all
22nd May 2013 12:04pm
Re: Despite it all
22nd May 2013 12:13pm
Think me not a clown .....
directions to the reader are very powerful...
directions to the reader are very powerful...
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re: Re: Despite it all
22nd May 2013 12:32pm
RT, thanks, for reading and commenting. Painted smiley faces are always funny anyway.
Re: Despite it all
Anonymous
22nd May 2013 12:37pm
Honest great write grace...
strider
strider
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22nd May 2013 12:44pm
Re: Despite it all
22nd May 2013 1:24pm
Every now and then we wear a disguise and few ever get to see the real person behind the mask. I can relate to this Grace,it is beautifully expressed. Nice one
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Re: Despite it all
22nd May 2013 2:50pm
Which just goes to show a deeper side of you my dear Grace. You truly are a sweet and gentle creature.
Red
Red
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re: Re: Despite it all
22nd May 2013 3:11pm
And you my dear Red is always such a strength, that I wish I had. Thanks ever so much for all the encouragement you accorded me....
Re: Despite it all
Anonymous
22nd May 2013 4:49pm
Love this one Grace and relate well. So often we are judged entirely wrong and always based on superficial and temporary things..we show lot's of strength when we don a smile although we feel like crying and too bad for those who think it's the entire show! great work here :-)
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re: Re: Despite it all
22nd May 2013 5:09pm
That is so true dear Miki, always others judge us our outlook and seldom to they see us for what we are. Thanks for reading me.