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Hell
Decaying fantasy,
devouring in lights,
demented screams,
and repellent eye,
crawling your skin,
crawling your mind,
no one can hear,
your scream is no longer sound,
confused corpses,
dancing with no rhythm,
crazy and twisted,
pain is their anthem,
retarded children,
biting their limbs,
hunger is a bitch,
you feel on your own,
thousand of teeth,
sharp and dirty,
under your feet,
blood, blood,
ugly monsters,
tearing flesh,
from living bodies,
for dogs to eat,
and you wake up,
sweeting and trembling,
what the hell,
that was just in your head,
u think, but will you dare,
to look under your bed ?
devouring in lights,
demented screams,
and repellent eye,
crawling your skin,
crawling your mind,
no one can hear,
your scream is no longer sound,
confused corpses,
dancing with no rhythm,
crazy and twisted,
pain is their anthem,
retarded children,
biting their limbs,
hunger is a bitch,
you feel on your own,
thousand of teeth,
sharp and dirty,
under your feet,
blood, blood,
ugly monsters,
tearing flesh,
from living bodies,
for dogs to eat,
and you wake up,
sweeting and trembling,
what the hell,
that was just in your head,
u think, but will you dare,
to look under your bed ?
Published 18th May 2013
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Anonymous
18th May 2013 9:44pm
I wanted to like this, but I don't know. I think the manner this was taken in seems kind of nursery-rhymish. I liked some parts, but one thing I didn't like was how it all seemed to be in the head and to check under the bed part. It took away the fact that the poem was in hell and not a hellish fantasy.
