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My Wandering Soul
Into the river of doubts my poor soul lightly treads--
carefully examining each rock under murky waters
on which my bruised and tired feet slowly set upon...
The farther I go, the more I get lost--
wandering aimlessly in this sea of confusion,
totally disoriented, trying to find my way at all cost...
Now that my mortal soul is weak and weary--
as the sunset of life is waning through the horizon,
the pearly gates of salvation seems dreary...
I solemnly pray to God to grant my final mission:
to bring this chaotic WORLD into ORDER,
so that all nations may have PEACE forever...
Only then, and only then will my soul be set free--
from the shadow of death always lurking, carefree...
WORLD PEACE, that's my wandering soul's RELIGION!
carefully examining each rock under murky waters
on which my bruised and tired feet slowly set upon...
The farther I go, the more I get lost--
wandering aimlessly in this sea of confusion,
totally disoriented, trying to find my way at all cost...
Now that my mortal soul is weak and weary--
as the sunset of life is waning through the horizon,
the pearly gates of salvation seems dreary...
I solemnly pray to God to grant my final mission:
to bring this chaotic WORLD into ORDER,
so that all nations may have PEACE forever...
Only then, and only then will my soul be set free--
from the shadow of death always lurking, carefree...
WORLD PEACE, that's my wandering soul's RELIGION!
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15th May 2013 6:41pm
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20th May 2013 3:59am
Your writes ALWAYS deserve better comments Engr. I am not very good with them my apologies...but Loved this work I TRULY did!!!
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20th May 2013 1:53pm
No need to apologize...I know you mean every word you say at all times! Your name Soul, came into my mind when I actually wrote about peace and order. I was hoping somehow, some lines would be relatable to you, if not the whole piece!
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Re: My Wandering Soul
15th May 2013 7:20pm
The voice of one crying in the wilderness... prepare the way. :)
This ink is stunning, powerful and amazing! Profundity of such a message brings significant reflection of your soul, EngrVV!
Love This! Xo
This ink is stunning, powerful and amazing! Profundity of such a message brings significant reflection of your soul, EngrVV!
Love This! Xo
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re: Re: My Wandering Soul
19th May 2013 9:08am
Thanks for the flattering remarks Rain...and your analysis of the poem, head on!
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15th May 2013 9:04pm
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19th May 2013 9:11am
It's a pleasure to see you always in my small world Grace... pardon me if I'm not as active as you!
Re: My Wandering Soul
16th May 2013 3:14am
Dude are you channeling Bob Marley, George Harrison,and Billy Joel? This is beyond just good! Love the picture.
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19th May 2013 9:12am
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18th May 2013 1:36pm
What a good write mate such a heartfelt desire for peace and so beautifully expressed too.
Well done poet!
Well done poet!
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re: Re: My Wandering Soul
19th May 2013 9:17am
It's a pleasure as always to have somebody like you with similar thoughts and perspectives to be in the same company. Thank you, mate!
How was your vacation?
How was your vacation?
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19th May 2013 11:33pm
I'm not going until Tuesday I've been away for a while publishing a book on Kindle called "Of Love & Lust"
If they ever let me do it I'll be allowing a free download for five days.
Watch this space ;-)
If they ever let me do it I'll be allowing a free download for five days.
Watch this space ;-)
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20th May 2013 1:56pm