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Judas Kiss
His kiss ensnared me
Drew me deep into his web
His tongue wove silken ropes around my heart
His teeth etched hope into my soul
His lips promised heavenly ecstasy
His kiss betrayed me
Lured me into his evil web
His tongue tied heavy chains round my heart
His teeth tore the hope from my soul
His lips veiled treacherous deceit
Drew me deep into his web
His tongue wove silken ropes around my heart
His teeth etched hope into my soul
His lips promised heavenly ecstasy
His kiss betrayed me
Lured me into his evil web
His tongue tied heavy chains round my heart
His teeth tore the hope from my soul
His lips veiled treacherous deceit
Published 23rd Oct 2010
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23rd Oct 2010 3:06pm
This is beautiful. I love the switch of perspectives. Well done, my good lady.
23rd Oct 2010 6:00pm
Thank you, Pierre, I have been away from here for so long and to come back to such positive input really makes me feel good :)
24th Oct 2010 7:27pm
yes I like the switch but with all those dark adjectives I think you liked the kiss
24th Oct 2010 10:22pm
Oh I loved the kiss - that is why it ensnared me...that is why it hurt so much that it meant nothing to him.... :)
24th Nov 2010 12:47pm
i love the use of descriptive words,with them i can almost see the kiss happening like a lurker in the shadows somewhere
