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hugging to home
Upon a ship left
black sail high
burns the time
that's left behind
these the leaves
to infinite days
roll now comforted
in brand new ways
what's new is old
like coming home
where rest is like
living, infinite
and giving, held
in cradle, once again
borne to tomorrow
now energy kin
loved upon a mile
kissed within a see
traveler upon
perfectness
infinite free
black sail high
burns the time
that's left behind
these the leaves
to infinite days
roll now comforted
in brand new ways
what's new is old
like coming home
where rest is like
living, infinite
and giving, held
in cradle, once again
borne to tomorrow
now energy kin
loved upon a mile
kissed within a see
traveler upon
perfectness
infinite free
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Re: hugging to home
9th May 2013 10:11pm
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9th May 2013 11:08pm
Re: hugging to home
Anonymous
9th May 2013 10:12pm
serene and introspective,,great flow..nice work!
I dig this ;-)
I dig this ;-)
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re: Re: hugging to home
9th May 2013 11:09pm
Re: hugging to home
Anonymous
9th May 2013 10:31pm
it swirls rich depth soul
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9th May 2013 11:10pm
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9th May 2013 11:03pm
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9th May 2013 11:04pm
Re: hugging to home
10th May 2013 00:06am
You have such a beautiful way with words Soul
I am in love with your ink!
XOXO
Fire
I am in love with your ink!
XOXO
Fire
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re: Re: hugging to home
10th May 2013 1:46am
Re: hugging to home
10th May 2013 00:07am
A peaceful and innocent flow in this ink to me!
Infinite free, when hugging home! Nice Gabe!:) xoxo
Infinite free, when hugging home! Nice Gabe!:) xoxo
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Re: hugging to home
10th May 2013 2:25am
"loved upon a mile
kissed within a see"
i hope that was'nt a typo and you really meant the vision context cuz thas fn awesome man...
kissed within a see"
i hope that was'nt a typo and you really meant the vision context cuz thas fn awesome man...
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re: Re: hugging to home
10th May 2013 2:59am
Re: hugging to home
10th May 2013 3:04am
these the leaves
to infinite days
roll now comforted
in brand new ways
cool!!!!
to infinite days
roll now comforted
in brand new ways
cool!!!!
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re: Re: hugging to home
10th May 2013 7:04am
Re: hugging to home
10th May 2013 6:23am
Tranquil. A swaying write,
I enjoyed this each word
fits perfectly.
Very well written, Soul :)
I enjoyed this each word
fits perfectly.
Very well written, Soul :)
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re: Re: hugging to home
10th May 2013 7:05am
Re: hugging to home
10th May 2013 7:07am
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10th May 2013 7:15am
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10th May 2013 2:06pm
Re: hugging to home
11th May 2013 10:35pm
YOU DA MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great write Bro. SOUL!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write Bro. SOUL!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: hugging to home
12th May 2013 6:23am
Re. hugging to home
15th Nov 2015 10:17pm
Often we realize too late that the simple act of the journey is more important then the specifics of a planned destination...
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