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Say Goodbye.
I didn't want to,
God, I swear.
But it happened.
His words pierced my soul,
Left me incapable of protest.
He wouldn't let me go,
As I struggled against his chest.
His hungry eyes shouted lust and greed,
I knew it was wrong, but please forgive me.
I was overwhelmed with regret, him with need,
I felt an unfamiliar warmth pouring from him to me.
His face had the potential of beauty,
But it's sculptured anger marked it satanic.
His false compliments left me feeling it was my duty,
He told me not to worry, not to panic.
His tongue slid roughly over mine,
His fingers reached to touch my heart.
He made me feel like the world was fine,
But then he had his way with me.
And.
My.
World.
Fell.
Apart.
God, I swear.
But it happened.
His words pierced my soul,
Left me incapable of protest.
He wouldn't let me go,
As I struggled against his chest.
His hungry eyes shouted lust and greed,
I knew it was wrong, but please forgive me.
I was overwhelmed with regret, him with need,
I felt an unfamiliar warmth pouring from him to me.
His face had the potential of beauty,
But it's sculptured anger marked it satanic.
His false compliments left me feeling it was my duty,
He told me not to worry, not to panic.
His tongue slid roughly over mine,
His fingers reached to touch my heart.
He made me feel like the world was fine,
But then he had his way with me.
And.
My.
World.
Fell.
Apart.
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7th May 2013 3:07am
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7th May 2013 3:23am
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Anonymous
7th May 2013 4:11am
Very heartfelt in a sad way....but awesome to read:)
Thanks for sharing & keep smiling:)
Thanks for sharing & keep smiling:)
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7th May 2013 4:15am
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7th May 2013 5:55am
A powerful yet clever poem. You work in the visual, tactile, verbal and moral so well- each separate yet apparently simultaneous.
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7th May 2013 6:24am
Re: Say Goodbye.
7th May 2013 6:05am
I am glad this didn't really happen to you I don't wish to say too much about my past in comments but serenity I'll gladly my past with you in a private message if you want
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7th May 2013 6:25am
Re: Say Goodbye.
7th May 2013 4:45pm
You are so good at tantalizing my sadness/rage factor. I read on in anticipation, although I know by the end it will leave me wishing I was there to do something about it in some weird way. That's powerful to me.
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7th May 2013 11:44pm
Wow thank you I'm so glad I could ignite such feelings really thanks for commenting.
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7th May 2013 11:45pm
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7th May 2013 10:12pm
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7th May 2013 11:49pm
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11th Jul 2013 6:02am
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2013 5:51am
Wow! What an awesome write. Like this! :)
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11th Jul 2013 6:03am