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Ideally...
Of course ideally…
I would love it if…
We all respect one another
No hurtful words
No boorishness
We all don’t go to war and kill
For power
Or just because
We should not steal from others
But give
And forgive
We should see beyond our skin colour
Not see brown
Or black or white
We should live in perfect harmony
No logging
No mining
Just live off, on and with nature
Ideally….
But of course everyone disagree
about the meaning of perfection.
I would love it if…
We all respect one another
No hurtful words
No boorishness
We all don’t go to war and kill
For power
Or just because
We should not steal from others
But give
And forgive
We should see beyond our skin colour
Not see brown
Or black or white
We should live in perfect harmony
No logging
No mining
Just live off, on and with nature
Ideally….
But of course everyone disagree
about the meaning of perfection.
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5th May 2013 7:46pm
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Anonymous
5th May 2013 7:52pm
therein lies the problem..great write Grace :-)
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Anonymous
5th May 2013 9:32pm
Grace....superb...you hit the nail on the head...This poem could help in a current thread....With admiration, Kitty
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6th May 2013 00:07am
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Anonymous
6th May 2013 2:19am
Nice write grace...such depth
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6th May 2013 3:35am
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7th May 2013 1:39am
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7th May 2013 1:44am
Dear Glynis, of course it would be so good but every individuals have their own perception of ideal.
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8th May 2013 1:21am
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