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don't call it anarchy
because it's not the statehouse at stake
it's reality
and I love you enough
to write amorous poems
about improvised explosives
because these barriers have to go
and so does that Starbucks
let's get lost in metaphor
scrape the soapflakes
i'll get the kerosene
lick this toads' belly
i'll pound the rhythm of rhapsody
into every blank canvas
so every painting made
is an homage to infidelity.
See, this marriage ain't working
I have been fucking around with your friend Freedom
and her friend Absolute
and sure, shit can get a bit hectic
but it's well worth it
Ain't not no morning goes by
I don't get my dick wet
because it's not the statehouse at stake
it's reality
and I love you enough
to write amorous poems
about improvised explosives
because these barriers have to go
and so does that Starbucks
let's get lost in metaphor
scrape the soapflakes
i'll get the kerosene
lick this toads' belly
i'll pound the rhythm of rhapsody
into every blank canvas
so every painting made
is an homage to infidelity.
See, this marriage ain't working
I have been fucking around with your friend Freedom
and her friend Absolute
and sure, shit can get a bit hectic
but it's well worth it
Ain't not no morning goes by
I don't get my dick wet
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Re: circle A
1st May 2013 5:20pm
*hooting, hollaring, and happy*
Fuck the crit !
LB
This is just brilliant in my opinion. I wonder if you have any idea how beautifully you stand out in a crowd ;)
Fuck the crit !
LB
This is just brilliant in my opinion. I wonder if you have any idea how beautifully you stand out in a crowd ;)
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1st May 2013 5:36pm
probably most definitely maybe
I changed the double negative to a triple, hope it reads with a lil more sense to its nonsense
I changed the double negative to a triple, hope it reads with a lil more sense to its nonsense
Re: circle A
1st May 2013 5:21pm
this is ill man. well refined. no filler. consistent language. does'nt stray off topic for the purpose of rhyme.way to connect analogies with enough wit to keep the reader completely entertained....
well done brotha..
well done brotha..
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re: Re: circle A
1st May 2013 5:39pm
Thanks my man
my theory is that an anarchist wouldn't call themselves an anarchist, because that's already admitting that a system is in place...first rule of magick, don't ever "wish" for something, you are admitting to your sub/supra conscious that it may not happen
preciate the thoughts homie
my theory is that an anarchist wouldn't call themselves an anarchist, because that's already admitting that a system is in place...first rule of magick, don't ever "wish" for something, you are admitting to your sub/supra conscious that it may not happen
preciate the thoughts homie
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Anonymous
1st May 2013 5:27pm
yep
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1st May 2013 8:40pm
chaotic order sounds a bit how life happens, so imma take that as a proactive roadsign.... i'll take unique,provoke,and react as well.ha
Thank you very much Atakti!
Thank you very much Atakti!
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Anonymous
1st May 2013 9:55pm
metaphorical perfection with unrivaled wit..write on bro ;-)
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