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For An Instant
I stood in line abiding my time
Deciding on a latte or regular
when I heard the chime
I turned on a dime, watching him
Enter
Tall , dark and sleek
An ancient Greek, he smiled
And I wanted his lovechild
And just for the briefest of beats
I imagined myself his lover,
his submissive, his Muse
and his friend blended
in passion
For a second I held my breath
and let the tingle run through my loins
like Desdemona, no longer single
till death do us part
I felt out of breath
For an instant
I saw a wild, intense
insane affair commence
filling my days with exotic bliss
my nights with appointed trysts
and I was beguiled
Symbiotic
A split second
This was something unique,
special and raw
sexual, electric
epic, non apologetic
one sixtieth of a minute
he’s the pipeline
to my lifeline
the guideline to
my once-in-a-lifetime
Whose next?
Broken into
my musing
I smiled back
shaking my head
with complete certainty
it wasn’t meant to be
at least not this lifetime
maybe the next
stepping forward
I ordered my latte to go
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Re: For An Instant
29th Apr 2013 11:04pm
Ahhhh fanciful Visions indeed Dear Glynis ...The coffee must be really good to break that hold!!!
Excellent Write!!!
Excellent Write!!!
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Soul
The coffee has it's moments too...he he
Your comment means so much...thank you :)
much love
G
The coffee has it's moments too...he he
Your comment means so much...thank you :)
much love
G
Re: For An Instant
29th Apr 2013 11:07pm
An enjoyable cup of latte Glynis, I enjoy day dreaming... Wonderful write. :)
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re: Re: For An Instant
30th Apr 2013 9:22pm
A good day dream helps ease those nightly blues...Magdalena ;)
Thank you for enjoying mine.
much love
G
Thank you for enjoying mine.
much love
G
Re: For An Instant
29th Apr 2013 11:29pm
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30th Apr 2013 9:23pm
Re: For An Instant
30th Apr 2013 00:13am
Oyes! I had that myself. Poor man passed by and never knew he was my one-minute life partner ! You are so good with speaking me sometimes, dear Glynis, it's almost blew surreal. Love the poem.
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re: Re: For An Instant
30th Apr 2013 9:26pm
They never know do they..;)
Grace you are my spirit heart twin, your poems always speak to me as well dear friend..
much love Sis
G
Grace you are my spirit heart twin, your poems always speak to me as well dear friend..
much love Sis
G
Re: For An Instant
Anonymous
30th Apr 2013 3:20am
Ooo! The sexiest moments come in an instant. Sexy write. Enjoyed Sister G :)
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30th Apr 2013 9:28pm
Flower!
Girl those moments cum so fast don't they..he..he;)
Thanks Sis
much love
G
Girl those moments cum so fast don't they..he..he;)
Thanks Sis
much love
G
Re: For An Instant
30th Apr 2013 4:29am
LOVE THIS GLYNIS i SEE A NEW AWAKWENING RISING OUT OF YOUR WRITING....LOVELY AND HEAT FILLED!
FIRE
FIRE
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re: Re: For An Instant
30th Apr 2013 9:31pm
FIRE!!!
SIS how you be? I'm so glad to see you.
Thank you for that Blessing my SIS....I'm working at this, as you know.
Look for my digits displayed
much love
G
SIS how you be? I'm so glad to see you.
Thank you for that Blessing my SIS....I'm working at this, as you know.
Look for my digits displayed
much love
G
Re: For An Instant
Anonymous
30th Apr 2013 4:30am
Glynis.. so detailed. Gave me goose-bumps, the good kind. Amazed at how much can happen in an average, every day kind of moment. *whew!*
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re: Re: For An Instant
30th Apr 2013 9:37pm
Scat
So please to see that you like this....it means a lot.
Yes, moments in time can pack in a lot that we often miss because of the many hours of boredom in our day.
just wanted to enjoy that moment in time. :)
Thanks G
So please to see that you like this....it means a lot.
Yes, moments in time can pack in a lot that we often miss because of the many hours of boredom in our day.
just wanted to enjoy that moment in time. :)
Thanks G
Re: For An Instant
30th Apr 2013 5:55am
Nubian Queen, you are my inspiration!
This is what AMAZING looks like in ink!
Pen Respect and Poetic Love~
This is what AMAZING looks like in ink!
Pen Respect and Poetic Love~
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re: Re: For An Instant
30th Apr 2013 9:48pm
Rain!
Sis...you got me all Blushing and stuff.
I can't stop smiling....thank you so much
Love you!
G
Sis...you got me all Blushing and stuff.
I can't stop smiling....thank you so much
Love you!
G
Re: For An Instant
Anonymous
30th Apr 2013 9:31am
This is great...I've had similar fantasy but never in a coffee shop because I'm always so mesmerized by my addiction to the bean. You are one of the best at this fantasy type writing-you pen it so well-it's scrumptious to read dear Glynis-much love!
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30th Apr 2013 9:56pm
Miki....
You flatter me.. I'm truly overwhelmed.
We both have the same love/addiction for the bean
I found it hard to pull away from my imagined fantasy to sate my bean need.
much love my Sis
G
You flatter me.. I'm truly overwhelmed.
We both have the same love/addiction for the bean
I found it hard to pull away from my imagined fantasy to sate my bean need.
much love my Sis
G
Re: For An Instant
30th Apr 2013 4:55pm
ha.. yeah
eye loved this G.
starin with the freaky greeky on ya face
reel nice flow.. scene tha whole thang
didnt choose that regular huh?
nice.
.
.
eye loved this G.
starin with the freaky greeky on ya face
reel nice flow.. scene tha whole thang
didnt choose that regular huh?
nice.
.
.
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re: Re: For An Instant
30th Apr 2013 10:01pm
kriticool
Man, isn't it always the case..When you're looking at someone, someone else is looking at you.
After that scene a regular just wouldn't do.
Thank you my Friend
G
Man, isn't it always the case..When you're looking at someone, someone else is looking at you.
After that scene a regular just wouldn't do.
Thank you my Friend
G
Re: For An Instant
8th May 2013 2:59am
Girl...have been there before.:)
For an instant
I saw a wild, intense
insane affair commence
filling my days with exotic bliss
my nights with appointed trysts
and I was beguiled
Symbiotic
Yeah, mind over matter is a powerful thing! Excellent write, I enjoyed. It goes on my list!
For an instant
I saw a wild, intense
insane affair commence
filling my days with exotic bliss
my nights with appointed trysts
and I was beguiled
Symbiotic
Yeah, mind over matter is a powerful thing! Excellent write, I enjoyed. It goes on my list!
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re: Re: For An Instant
9th May 2013 3:43am
I've been there too many times Sis..;)
The mind is where we start everytime, the body often follows.
ryteoutlet, I'm so glad you like this piece of my pondering.
much love
G
The mind is where we start everytime, the body often follows.
ryteoutlet, I'm so glad you like this piece of my pondering.
much love
G
Re: For An Instant
14th May 2013 3:56pm
Sweet reverie. This is realistic. I like the time motif in it; from the briefest of beats to one-sixtieth of a minute. It gives this poem life. It captures a moment. I can see the persona in a line, head turned, abstracted, time passing in a heartbeat. And I can see him too.
This is commendable, G. It's simple, it's vivid, it's practical.
This is commendable, G. It's simple, it's vivid, it's practical.
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re: Re: For An Instant
14th May 2013 10:31pm
Thank you so much Demogorgon!
I'm loving on the adjectives. So glad the scene came across in this one.
G
I'm loving on the adjectives. So glad the scene came across in this one.
G