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Re: Passions Tamed
25th Apr 2013 4:38pm
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25th Apr 2013 5:43pm
lol Soul, careful or you will fall under the Gypsy's spell hahaha Thanks for the great comment, you're very kind.
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Re: Passions Tamed
25th Apr 2013 6:13pm
Be exactly as you are my dear, society has no say in the matter, stuff them lol.
Wonderful pen Gypsy. :)
Wonderful pen Gypsy. :)
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re: Re: Passions Tamed
25th Apr 2013 6:16pm
Re: Passions Tamed
25th Apr 2013 10:26pm
re: Re: Passions Tamed
25th Apr 2013 10:50pm
And yet they have Grace. As long as I can remember I have felt like a wild thing chained or constricted by my people/family's so called moral standard (which was set in a stone age patriarchy)ugh...Thank you dearest.:-)
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re: re: Re: Passions Tamed
26th Apr 2013 1:32am
Thats always the case in traditional society, Red. Born Catholic here, so know that so much. Hugs!!
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26th Apr 2013 1:58am
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re: Re: Passions Tamed
26th Apr 2013 2:37pm
Hahah Let it burn baby! Thanks for stopping by to read, I appreciate the great comment!
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Re: Passions Tamed
26th Apr 2013 4:02am
In framing this as a poem about "self" you give voice to obstacles that other women throughout history have faced. Easy to focus on carnal desires but I think it can be extended even further.
A smashing write from a person with a beautiful spirit.
A smashing write from a person with a beautiful spirit.
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re: Re: Passions Tamed
26th Apr 2013 2:40pm
Jazzy you are always so perceptive. Yes it is in the broad spectrum about much more than sexuality, it is about women's nature and how we as a society try to squeeze a women into a mold that she may not want to be in.Thanks for stopping by.
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re: re: Re: Passions Tamed
26th Apr 2013 4:28pm
Not really, just thinking about my brother's father. Luckily mom got it right the second time around.
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26th Apr 2013 4:54pm
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26th Apr 2013 11:24am
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26th Apr 2013 2:42pm
Your just naughty Gabriel! Ohh how I love to say your name, it rolls of the tongue in such a lovely way, maybe because I say it in Spanish Gabrrrieeel! lol
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Re: Passions Tamed
26th Apr 2013 6:59pm
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26th Apr 2013 7:04pm
Thank you Marcus, Glad you stopped by always a pleasure to read your comments.
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