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Take a Breathe
Blackened thoughts
creative solutions
an outcome to a problem
darkness
breathe
eyes dart sharply to heightened rooftops
perhaps?
curly lines wrap knowingly around my neck
invincible
breathe
a racing mind joins to a moving vehicle
the rush, so close
rage trapped and leaving holes;
hurling objected madness
a voice unheard
breathe
the unsaid past
seeks a pill for a cheap thrill
swimming thoughts, soaking in a tub
breathe
a drunken haze
a questioning blade
breathe
a blackout moment
defying actions
red crimson blood trickles
subconscious tears
terrified screams
too close
a breathing silver lining
a way out
breathe
rise above
the one i love
stop.
creative solutions
an outcome to a problem
darkness
breathe
eyes dart sharply to heightened rooftops
perhaps?
curly lines wrap knowingly around my neck
invincible
breathe
a racing mind joins to a moving vehicle
the rush, so close
rage trapped and leaving holes;
hurling objected madness
a voice unheard
breathe
the unsaid past
seeks a pill for a cheap thrill
swimming thoughts, soaking in a tub
breathe
a drunken haze
a questioning blade
breathe
a blackout moment
defying actions
red crimson blood trickles
subconscious tears
terrified screams
too close
a breathing silver lining
a way out
breathe
rise above
the one i love
stop.
Published 25th Apr 2013
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25th Apr 2013 6:36pm
26th Apr 2013 2:07pm
25th Apr 2013 10:09pm
I also like the tempo here. Very much like some one having an anxiety attack and having to tell themselves to 'breathe' at regular intervals. very well written.
26th Apr 2013 2:08pm
