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Me
Love me passionately
feverishly
for eternity
please me
satisfy
penetrate
me
seduce me
caress
lick
fuck
me
oh god yes
fuck
me
want me
devour
crave
taste
me
all of
me
suck all
of
me
beg me
ask me
for
it
tell
me
whisper
breathe
smell
me
love me
feverishly
for eternity
please me
satisfy
penetrate
me
seduce me
caress
lick
fuck
me
oh god yes
fuck
me
want me
devour
crave
taste
me
all of
me
suck all
of
me
beg me
ask me
for
it
tell
me
whisper
breathe
smell
me
love me
Published 15th Apr 2013
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15th Apr 2013 4:04am
15th Apr 2013 4:06am
Beautiful as always tommie. It's from the heart, which always makes for great poetry.
15th Apr 2013 11:02am
Anonymous
15th Apr 2013 9:24am
Great tempo tl...strider
15th Apr 2013 11:02am
Anonymous
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15th Apr 2013 12:23pm
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15th Apr 2013 1:01pm
15th Apr 2013 2:07pm
15th Apr 2013 2:38pm
I just wrote another good one but DU was having a problem AGAIN and I went to submit it and lost it :(
Thanks for reading..glad you liked it!
Thanks for reading..glad you liked it!
15th Apr 2013 5:47pm
This one is very hot and passionate Tommie, I enjoy poems like this that make use of few words, yet every word counts. I really liked it a lot! Well done :)
15th Apr 2013 6:32pm
Thank you Deepest_Fantasy!This one was hot in my head..I needed to get it out! :)
15th Apr 2013 8:47pm
16th Apr 2013 1:29am
Mmmmmm yes I will! I will I will!! lol
Mmmmm u smell, taste, feel so so so...
Oops! Uhm did I say that aloud!? lol
excellent visuals, excellent inking!
Mmmmm u smell, taste, feel so so so...
Oops! Uhm did I say that aloud!? lol
excellent visuals, excellent inking!
16th Apr 2013 2:11am
