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Rooted
Brown eyes, penetrated
Revised my passion
his soft kiss
brought sweet bliss
strong hands caressed
and blessed
my wounded heart
The fruits of love
Entwined me in his roots
Intertwined , sinking deep,
Love forged new pathways
within our essence
his ending became my beginning
the core of one soul
Rooted
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Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 8:30am
re: Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 9:02pm
Why thank you Destinydevine
for the blessing
I need to come over to read your work
much love
G
for the blessing
I need to come over to read your work
much love
G
Re: Rooted
Anonymous
11th Apr 2013 8:41am
woooohhh!! rooted is a great thing dear Glynis..this is a sweet read and a beautiful write from you dear. Much love..<3

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re: Re: Rooted
Thank you Miki
It takes time, digging deep, for roots to take hold in good soil doesn't it? :)
Much love
G
It takes time, digging deep, for roots to take hold in good soil doesn't it? :)
Much love
G
Re: Rooted
Anonymous
11th Apr 2013 8:42am
love that pic too...very cool :-)

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Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 12:10pm
re: Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 9:18pm
Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 6:59pm
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Felt.
and so it goes with this piece
even with the mentioned revision
still feel
there hasn't been enuff to
mask or disgard that wounded heart
despite the new newness of it
intellectually to me this poem says passion still remains 2nd to pain...a runner-up, no matter how deep the root
it's aight.
that's my $0.02
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Felt.
and so it goes with this piece
even with the mentioned revision
still feel
there hasn't been enuff to
mask or disgard that wounded heart
despite the new newness of it
intellectually to me this poem says passion still remains 2nd to pain...a runner-up, no matter how deep the root
it's aight.
that's my $0.02
.
.
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re: Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 9:27pm
Kriticool
thanks for the cents
I see your point...perhaps if I had gone futher with the revision or transformation .....perhaps?
enjoy your insights as always
Much love
G
thanks for the cents
I see your point...perhaps if I had gone futher with the revision or transformation .....perhaps?
enjoy your insights as always
Much love
G
re: re: Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 11:13pm
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yo G...glad you see my point
if so you'll know it wasn't a spear, no thrust here. more so justa laid back observation
one.
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yo G...glad you see my point
if so you'll know it wasn't a spear, no thrust here. more so justa laid back observation
one.
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Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 7:21pm
You work is impeccable, faultless, beautiful and meaningful, Glynis!
My soul is always satisfied reading your ink! :)
My soul is always satisfied reading your ink! :)
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re: Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 9:33pm
Rain!
Dear Poet, you are too kind to this fledgling!
I cherish you and your comments dear SIS, so I will always add....Much Love
G
Dear Poet, you are too kind to this fledgling!
I cherish you and your comments dear SIS, so I will always add....Much Love
G
Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 9:22pm
re: Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 9:35pm
Oh Magdalena!
I'm grateful for your visit and your lovely comment
Thank you
G
I'm grateful for your visit and your lovely comment
Thank you
G
Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 9:27pm
I love the way this sounded rolling off my tongue
"Entwined me in his roots
Intertwined , sinking deep,"
Much enjoyed Glynis
and btw - I think your avatar is beautiful :)
"Entwined me in his roots
Intertwined , sinking deep,"
Much enjoyed Glynis
and btw - I think your avatar is beautiful :)
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re: Re: Rooted
11th Apr 2013 9:39pm
Maggie G
I'm honored by your visit and comment on this peice
So very glad you enjoyed this.
I thought the pic was beautiful as well
Thanks G
I'm honored by your visit and comment on this peice
So very glad you enjoyed this.
I thought the pic was beautiful as well
Thanks G
Re: Rooted
20th Apr 2013 1:18am
I'm always amazed when an author can write with so few words and yet, have the biggest impact on the reader. This is delicious, sweet and romantic. I adore the pic...it's perfect for your poem. Excellent write! xo
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re: Re: Rooted
21st Apr 2013 3:15am
The pic inspired the ink. I saw it on Facebook... and said WOW! It popped in, so I inked....
I'm blown away with your comment.....Thank you ryteoutlet
G
I'm blown away with your comment.....Thank you ryteoutlet
G
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21st Apr 2013 5:38pm
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