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Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
Dancing the edge of the light
within shadows of the dark
their each step, beats free
with the sound once lonely heart
now glowing sparks, twine time
the songs play, softly
Songs like beating wings of dove
Fluttering against the winds of time
Against cold nights it travels forth
Towards afar and then beyond
Traverse time as yet unknown
Knocks on door, as yet unopened
Sounds that serenade rounds carry couple
Cards in a deck together shuffle
making a break in their way
lips coo on the breeze
Lovers’ lavish lattice layered longing
staking places, they drive nails home
Songs of yearnings keep on yet
Encircling the gold loop
Of bronze and gold
On slender finger holds
Promises of forever
Staked on little coloured cards
To these shapes, tomorrow’s dream
may land of Nod
Spill out upon real,
giving the ghosts chance
back to living
Peace be worthy, infinite days
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Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
Anonymous
8th Apr 2013 2:28pm
Well done Soul and Grace, you two make lovely poetry together..write on! :-)
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re: Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
8th Apr 2013 4:05pm
Thank You Dear Miki, i always enjoy My writes with Dear Grace, Keeps me thinking different:)
Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
8th Apr 2013 4:39pm
Soulfully written and gracefully danced
A meeting of bright minds, I'm so amazed
The two of you surely rock
Can't wait for another collab...
A meeting of bright minds, I'm so amazed
The two of you surely rock
Can't wait for another collab...
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re: Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
8th Apr 2013 6:17pm
Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
8th Apr 2013 4:39pm
A wonderful collaboration indeed,
you write well together.
Enticing write, well done to both of you :)
you write well together.
Enticing write, well done to both of you :)
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re: Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
8th Apr 2013 6:17pm
Beautiful blend of ink
8th Apr 2013 5:16pm
Such a lovely and sensual write!:)
"lips coo on the breeze
Lovers’ lavish lattice layered longing
staking places,"<--really loved that!
You two blend well together!
Poetic Love!
"lips coo on the breeze
Lovers’ lavish lattice layered longing
staking places,"<--really loved that!
You two blend well together!
Poetic Love!
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re: Beautiful blend of ink
8th Apr 2013 6:19pm
Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
8th Apr 2013 5:25pm
Most beautiful as always you two, a wonderful picture too... Well done. :)
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re: Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
8th Apr 2013 6:20pm
Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
8th Apr 2013 8:33pm
you guys have a very graceful(no pun intended) smooth ol school style. i mean no offense by ol school, it's beautiful. you both ride smoothly 2g.
very sexy.
well done sd and grace.........
very sexy.
well done sd and grace.........
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re: Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
Thanx JR that means a lot Man!!!
I love to write that way, and tend to when writing with Her, by myself I have a hard time with that style.
I love to write that way, and tend to when writing with Her, by myself I have a hard time with that style.
Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
9th Apr 2013 1:09am
Soul and Grace this was a perfect poetic dance of wonderous minds..peace Crim :)
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re: Re: Dawn Dancers (A Grace And Souladareatease collab)
9th Apr 2013 1:32am
Thank You Crim:)
I'm humbled!!!
She is the flavor to our every collab!!!
I'm humbled!!!
She is the flavor to our every collab!!!
Re: Dawn Dancers
9th Apr 2013 12:43pm
re: Re: Dawn Dancers
9th Apr 2013 2:11pm
Such praise Humbles me, Ye of the TRUE talent!!!
Thank You for the Beautiful work Dear Grace!!!
Thank You for the Beautiful work Dear Grace!!!