Love Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
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buddhakitty
Poem Published
Today 4:49am
Today 4:49am
short and sweet
i saw you downtown
from a distance...
and that was good
enough for me
from a distance...
and that was good
enough for me
#apathy
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Today 3:12am
Today 3:12am
attraction
attraction diabolical, full of need
something stirs inside
it's a dare compelling me to answer
seducing the dark, with come hither stares
looking into your danger
your essence challenges
I answer with a growl
temptation in a touch
sinful need, i want you too much
peaking lust enflames, my passion
you can see through to me
and I blush, thrilling desire
captivating charm, escalating
I have to taste your divine
scrying fate, I look to see what's good
flirting with disaster
my mind can't...
something stirs inside
it's a dare compelling me to answer
seducing the dark, with come hither stares
looking into your danger
your essence challenges
I answer with a growl
temptation in a touch
sinful need, i want you too much
peaking lust enflames, my passion
you can see through to me
and I blush, thrilling desire
captivating charm, escalating
I have to taste your divine
scrying fate, I look to see what's good
flirting with disaster
my mind can't...
#lust
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Glaxian
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:05pm
Yesterday 11:05pm
Though my love's Gone
Though my lover's gone
When these frames are but dust or ash in the wind,
Our love will keep working right to the end.
Our love was everything,
An unseen force
Holding our universe together.
In our love we were stronger than the tide
Fear had no hold with you by my side
You were always there:
To pick me up
To dust me off
To give me courage
To make me feel alive
Our love was a primal source:
Older than mountains,
More durable than rocks,
More inviting than
The fragile smile of a kiss. ...
When these frames are but dust or ash in the wind,
Our love will keep working right to the end.
Our love was everything,
An unseen force
Holding our universe together.
In our love we were stronger than the tide
Fear had no hold with you by my side
You were always there:
To pick me up
To dust me off
To give me courage
To make me feel alive
Our love was a primal source:
Older than mountains,
More durable than rocks,
More inviting than
The fragile smile of a kiss. ...
#gratitude
#love
#relationships #TimeHeals
#relationships #TimeHeals
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:25pm
Yesterday 9:25pm
In cased inside of glass
If you could change your life what would you consider, to change about your own life. FOR it's true that we have the ability and power, to alter our lives and further along, the direction of our lives as well, as our dreams. For sure if you could get one thing right, in your own life what would it be, that you have done that you would, want to be truly undone. FROM the deepness of the hurt and pain, that you caused, and left so many levels of feelings, unattended with emotional scars. That still to this day is lingering, in the dark deepness of some people's, heart and mind that you had...
#confusion
#disappointment
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#rejection
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Baldwin
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:36pm
Yesterday 7:36pm
Memory
I tell myself
“Do not indulge in memories
of how, before abandonment,
she musicked ,won,
my Oxford nights
with all the feral whisperings
that she once made
close to my ear
of heated love for me.”
What use is there
in doing so
except to be undone.
“Do not indulge in memories
of how, before abandonment,
she musicked ,won,
my Oxford nights
with all the feral whisperings
that she once made
close to my ear
of heated love for me.”
What use is there
in doing so
except to be undone.
#memories
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Wordsmith
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:40pm
Yesterday 6:40pm
Ah do
Yes, I’d love to tell you that I do
And I'd love to make you my boo; without further ado
Through fire and ice; we’ll see it through
A love reborn; both bold and new
Your touch ignites like morning’s hue
A blaze of passion; fierce and due.
No shadow falls where your light grew
The world revolves; yet rests on you.
With every step; my soul imbues
A rhythm synced; to love’s own cues.
The storms may rise; the winds may bruise
But I stand firm; I cannot lose.
Your voice; a symphony that woos
A melody...
And I'd love to make you my boo; without further ado
Through fire and ice; we’ll see it through
A love reborn; both bold and new
Your touch ignites like morning’s hue
A blaze of passion; fierce and due.
No shadow falls where your light grew
The world revolves; yet rests on you.
With every step; my soul imbues
A rhythm synced; to love’s own cues.
The storms may rise; the winds may bruise
But I stand firm; I cannot lose.
Your voice; a symphony that woos
A melody...
#beauty
#love
#romantic #UnrequitedLove
#romantic #UnrequitedLove
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Lynxxey
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:02am
Yesterday 3:02am
All that matters
Blacked out days from thoughts that race
I swear sometimes things just don’t change
Until I look out to see your face
And all those things they seem to dissipate
All that matters is what you think
I love you like the stormy weather loves the sea
Thinking of the memories you bring
I want to make more, I hope that you agree
Days go by, and seasons change
People come and go, and contribute to our ways
But if you look on out beyond the rain
What I feel for you will always be the same
All that matters is what...
I swear sometimes things just don’t change
Until I look out to see your face
And all those things they seem to dissipate
All that matters is what you think
I love you like the stormy weather loves the sea
Thinking of the memories you bring
I want to make more, I hope that you agree
Days go by, and seasons change
People come and go, and contribute to our ways
But if you look on out beyond the rain
What I feel for you will always be the same
All that matters is what...
#love
#relationships
#support
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PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:14pm
19th Jan 2025 10:14pm
I Found Out Too Late that She Loved Me
I loved Hannah more than I could say,
But I didn’t tell her that I loved her.
I wanted her to see it for herself.
So I came up with an idea that I thought would work.
She read the love poems that I wrote.
The poetic words revealed my true feelings.
She knew that I wrote them for her,
And she realised the depth of my love for her.
I didn’t know that she was in love with me.
She never showed her feelings for me.
Perhaps she tried to attract my attention,
But I was too dumb to realise it.
She wasn’t bold...
But I didn’t tell her that I loved her.
I wanted her to see it for herself.
So I came up with an idea that I thought would work.
She read the love poems that I wrote.
The poetic words revealed my true feelings.
She knew that I wrote them for her,
And she realised the depth of my love for her.
I didn’t know that she was in love with me.
She never showed her feelings for me.
Perhaps she tried to attract my attention,
But I was too dumb to realise it.
She wasn’t bold...
#girlfriend
#hurt
#love
#lust
#marriage
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 4:07am
19th Jan 2025 4:07am
rain
scarlet need within my soul
burns so very hot
no way to contain it
grievous lust, no way to explain it
it's what you do
greedy desire, feed my flame
turn it higher
speaking expletives of passion
fuck but damn
your stoic masculine
greeting you with a blush
I'm bare before you
your touch moves me
creamy essence, is tasting you
my soul melding with yours
your fire has me mesmerized
inside the sex storm, it rains
feelings of ecstasy overcome me
burns so very hot
no way to contain it
grievous lust, no way to explain it
it's what you do
greedy desire, feed my flame
turn it higher
speaking expletives of passion
fuck but damn
your stoic masculine
greeting you with a blush
I'm bare before you
your touch moves me
creamy essence, is tasting you
my soul melding with yours
your fire has me mesmerized
inside the sex storm, it rains
feelings of ecstasy overcome me
#lust
79 reads
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Deadsorrow78
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 2:02am
19th Jan 2025 2:02am
Bottle's Floating in Time
Walking beside the Sea of Time. Shaking a jar of oblong yellow candy in one hand.
Watching the messages in bottles float away. Hoping the Cosmos will deliver them to the Universe.
With another bottle in his pocket to be released.
As he approaches the stairway of stars to the Altar of the Gods.
He steps lightly knowing they owe him know favor. Yet they allow him to shape a star to light for her, as it goes out into the Cosmos.
He returns to the Sea of Time. He runs his fingers through the sands of what is, what was, and what's to come.
His thoughts go back...
Watching the messages in bottles float away. Hoping the Cosmos will deliver them to the Universe.
With another bottle in his pocket to be released.
As he approaches the stairway of stars to the Altar of the Gods.
He steps lightly knowing they owe him know favor. Yet they allow him to shape a star to light for her, as it goes out into the Cosmos.
He returns to the Sea of Time. He runs his fingers through the sands of what is, what was, and what's to come.
His thoughts go back...
#MovingOn
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smackdownraven
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 10:41pm
18th Jan 2025 10:41pm
culted
culted feelings, don't lie you have my honest soul
vulnerable to your darkness, drink my sunshine
inventive little Vixen, amusing herself with her imagination
monsters whisper to me
phantom thoughts entertain
my secrets sacred, my demons keep them private
sanctuary, within hell's dominion
you might not see beauty there but I do
there you can be yourself, no restraint
beguiled temptation, I blow off steam
lusting a Dark Lord
feverish understanding, masohistic,
he's the only one who gets me
uttering enchantments...
vulnerable to your darkness, drink my sunshine
inventive little Vixen, amusing herself with her imagination
monsters whisper to me
phantom thoughts entertain
my secrets sacred, my demons keep them private
sanctuary, within hell's dominion
you might not see beauty there but I do
there you can be yourself, no restraint
beguiled temptation, I blow off steam
lusting a Dark Lord
feverish understanding, masohistic,
he's the only one who gets me
uttering enchantments...
#dark
#love
#lust
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 7:59pm
18th Jan 2025 7:59pm
spell on the air
Sadistic offerings my lust is peaking
salacious need moves with your energy
you love it when I cut you with my tongue
watch me work the whip
devious desires entertain
you're the object of my affections
little need to express myself
entertaining the dark
as we speak they are coming in with a driving force
with a pounding energy
that says enough said
I counter, I have something on my mind
cultivating sin my pink blush speaks for me
saying too much
it's your hard looks that stir me
and when I take note ...
salacious need moves with your energy
you love it when I cut you with my tongue
watch me work the whip
devious desires entertain
you're the object of my affections
little need to express myself
entertaining the dark
as we speak they are coming in with a driving force
with a pounding energy
that says enough said
I counter, I have something on my mind
cultivating sin my pink blush speaks for me
saying too much
it's your hard looks that stir me
and when I take note ...
#lust
62 reads
6 Comments
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