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Valeriyabeyond
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Ingredients said:Yup have a good one.

Hello Ingredients

Its obvious to me Missy is secure in herself and in her work by the way she  accepted your critique as gracefully as she did
Is an example of a true professional.

Missy's poem fit the definition of this thread perfectly

To comment on someone's work is to express how it made you feel
To critique their work is to be critical in regards to the  punctuation, structure, format and word usage.
A critique is meant to help the writer.
This is a thread where we share and discuss dark poetry. We don't critique here.

Ingredients
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Now you know how I feel trying to give input to Free-verse BlackWolf.

Ingredients
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Valeriyabeyond said:

Hello Ingredients

Its obvious to me Missy is secure in herself and in her work by the way she  accepted your critique as gracefully as she did
Is an example of a true professional.

Missy's poem fit the definition of this thread perfectly

To comment on someone's work is to express how it made you feel
To critique their work is to be critical in regards to the  punctuation, structure, format and word usage.
A critique is meant to help the writer.
This is a thread where we share and discuss dark poetry. We don't critique here.


Perhaps you missed the part where I asked if she wanted my personal opinions?

Blackwolf
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Have no idea what you are speaking of...

Though I care not a tittle...

Bluevelvete
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it's definitely time for an art break....

Ingredients
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I don't expound on someone's free-verse poem without asking first and to some degree being reluctantly pushed towards doing so... not sure what Valeryia is talking about? Or what she is trying to defend.

Ingredients
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Valeriyabeyond said:

Hello Ingredients

Its obvious to me Missy is secure in herself and in her work by the way she  accepted your critique as gracefully as she did
Is an example of a true professional.

Missy's poem fit the definition of this thread perfectly

To comment on someone's work is to express how it made you feel
To critique their work is to be critical in regards to the  punctuation, structure, format and word usage.
A critique is meant to help the writer.
This is a thread where we share and discuss dark poetry. We don't critique here.


I think by your description of her she would be more than capable of defending her needs herself. I asked her if she wanted me to continue to explain things as I personally saw them. I don't appreciate being called out for no reason.

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Ingredients
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But what kind of good admin would apologize... for claiming I was doing something outside of what was asked for? And also making it seem as if I was harassing someone.

Valeriyabeyond
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Ingredients said:But what kind of good admin would apologize... for claiming I was doing something outside of what was asked for? And also making it seem as if I was harassing someone.

I was willing to let it go with my comment, but it appears that you enjoy being the burr in the lining,  of what once was
a comfortable garment.
Your judgmental ways have soured the cream
You are more than welcome to join this thread by contributing with poetry, if not  I will say goodbye and have hope you have a good day

Ingredients
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Valeriyabeyond said:

I was willing to let it go with my comment, but it appears that you enjoy being the burr in the lining,  of what once was
a comfortable garment.
Your judgmental ways have soured the cream
You are more than welcome to join this thread by contributing with poetry, if not  I will say goodbye and have hope you have a good day


What did I do exactly? I offered a conversation and personal feelings to someone who asked for it. You are the one making accusations which are false...

Ingredients
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I showed you evidence of them literally asking me to continue...

Ingredients
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I'm not sure what part of this you believe you are right about? Please let me know?

Ingredients
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Also, You call this place a comfortable garment... but check pages 4-6... You do look back at recent messages right?  Just because you don't do anything about it doesn't mean uncomfortable things were not happening...

Ingredients
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Not sure why you are threatening the only real source of discourse in this thread. When all other people have done is say things which add nothing towards helping another writer or argued with each other.

Ingredients
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Miss_Sub said:
I’m off to work. I hope you have a lovely day and submit some poetry of your own to this thread. Apparently meaningful discussion is what the forums are for sometimes. Who’d of thunk it.


But I am the problem...

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