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Roast An Ex
MsRockyJackson
Forum Posts: 318
Dangerous Mind
8
Joined 1st July 2014Forum Posts: 318
Poetry Contest Description
Burn an ex that hurt you the most
Was there that one ex husband/wife or ex girlfriend/ex boyfriend that did you so dirty you could never forget about it.
Was it recent or was it in past?
Whenever it was explain it as you roast them in your piece and talk about why were they bad and why do you remember them for what they did the most.
Let's make this the burning of our ex's!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😈
Rules:
- One Entry Only
- As long as you want
- Don't mention your ex's name please keep it private
- Explain why you broke up and why they hurt you
- Be creative
- Express your hurt
- It doesn't have to be necessarily emotional it can also be fun or downright savage
You got three weeks soooo get started!!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Was it recent or was it in past?
Whenever it was explain it as you roast them in your piece and talk about why were they bad and why do you remember them for what they did the most.
Let's make this the burning of our ex's!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😈
Rules:
- One Entry Only
- As long as you want
- Don't mention your ex's name please keep it private
- Explain why you broke up and why they hurt you
- Be creative
- Express your hurt
- It doesn't have to be necessarily emotional it can also be fun or downright savage
You got three weeks soooo get started!!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Canullia
canulliaqt
Joined 18th Mar 2017
Forum Posts: 49
canulliaqt
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 49
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SamiBmuse
Joined 9th July 2017
Forum Posts: 63
Thought Provoker
Forum Posts: 63
Comfortably Numb
Inspired by Pink Floyd
Drugs
The cold pick of the needle as it enters the vein
Liquid ice cold
Invading your blood stream
Changing your
Personality
Making you scream
Huh
Men
Are drugs
Invading your life
Keeping you captive
Don't dress like this
Don't talk like that
Don't touch me
Don't tell
Me
What I can do
Bend over whilst I
Fuck you
Imagining another woman
Behind your back
The drug entering your life
Like an infestation
Moulding you
Into what they dream
And then
Tossing you aside
When they can no
Longer drain
You
Of what is left
Comfortably numb
As I walk around now
Looking down
Men
Why the fuck
Can't you be normal
Needy
Oh please me
Fuck you
Not if you paid me
Waste of fucking space
Total cunting disgrace
Didn't you know
I faked it everytime
Cock size is not everything
Whilst I held
My hand against your face
Looking over your shoulder
Into outer space
You think your so fucking
Clever
Oh man god damn
Whatever
Fool if you think
I did not know
It was all for
So I gave it a go
Loyalty
Oh bite me
Did you know I had
Three men on the go
Oh no
Each one was inside me
Hah did you think
You was the only one
Dream on sweet geezer
You didn't make me cum
I needed fun
Oh dear does this offend you
Well see what you created
This life is fated
And our path is written
Oops did I do it again
Fuck being loyal
When you did it to me then
Numb
From the drug
You gave me
You made me
Fucking
Crazy
Going wild
You stupid child
Age matters
And you still
Suck your thumb inside
Crying over the past
You stupid ass
And you think
Ignorance is bliss
Well kiss this
Arse as I walk
Away
Dont play
What you can't win
If i got over you this quick
Do you think I really let you in
Ice queen
Glad to meet you
Finally she arrives
Comfortably numb
Inside
I haven't cried
And I never will
As you sit at the bottom of
Your well
Of personal Hell
Do i give a shit
Huh
Not
A
Fucking
Bit
Drugs
The cold pick of the needle as it enters the vein
Liquid ice cold
Invading your blood stream
Changing your
Personality
Making you scream
Huh
Men
Are drugs
Invading your life
Keeping you captive
Don't dress like this
Don't talk like that
Don't touch me
Don't tell
Me
What I can do
Bend over whilst I
Fuck you
Imagining another woman
Behind your back
The drug entering your life
Like an infestation
Moulding you
Into what they dream
And then
Tossing you aside
When they can no
Longer drain
You
Of what is left
Comfortably numb
As I walk around now
Looking down
Men
Why the fuck
Can't you be normal
Needy
Oh please me
Fuck you
Not if you paid me
Waste of fucking space
Total cunting disgrace
Didn't you know
I faked it everytime
Cock size is not everything
Whilst I held
My hand against your face
Looking over your shoulder
Into outer space
You think your so fucking
Clever
Oh man god damn
Whatever
Fool if you think
I did not know
It was all for
So I gave it a go
Loyalty
Oh bite me
Did you know I had
Three men on the go
Oh no
Each one was inside me
Hah did you think
You was the only one
Dream on sweet geezer
You didn't make me cum
I needed fun
Oh dear does this offend you
Well see what you created
This life is fated
And our path is written
Oops did I do it again
Fuck being loyal
When you did it to me then
Numb
From the drug
You gave me
You made me
Fucking
Crazy
Going wild
You stupid child
Age matters
And you still
Suck your thumb inside
Crying over the past
You stupid ass
And you think
Ignorance is bliss
Well kiss this
Arse as I walk
Away
Dont play
What you can't win
If i got over you this quick
Do you think I really let you in
Ice queen
Glad to meet you
Finally she arrives
Comfortably numb
Inside
I haven't cried
And I never will
As you sit at the bottom of
Your well
Of personal Hell
Do i give a shit
Huh
Not
A
Fucking
Bit
Written by SamiBmuse
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Anonymous
13, not one more
Loved did I, the vigin, Di
Senior year, captain cheer
Dodge backseat I recall Brigette
One night drunk, back-doored hunk
Rebound again my childhood friend
All night study turned fuck buddy
Played the fool poor blinded Jewel
Gotta job and sidekick Rob
Year or less, 'til neighbor Jess
Netflix chill with romcom Lil'
Inbetween, c'mon Eileen
Commitment wary is burned Mary
Scraped the well, found Raquel
From another man I stole Joanne
Now to forget the worst I met
Now to dismiss your wayward kiss
Now to deny the swiveling eyes
Now to kickstart a chargeless heart
Arty78
Loved did I, the vigin, Di
Senior year, captain cheer
Dodge backseat I recall Brigette
One night drunk, back-doored hunk
Rebound again my childhood friend
All night study turned fuck buddy
Played the fool poor blinded Jewel
Gotta job and sidekick Rob
Year or less, 'til neighbor Jess
Netflix chill with romcom Lil'
Inbetween, c'mon Eileen
Commitment wary is burned Mary
Scraped the well, found Raquel
From another man I stole Joanne
Now to forget the worst I met
Now to dismiss your wayward kiss
Now to deny the swiveling eyes
Now to kickstart a chargeless heart
Arty78
runaway-mindtrain
Forum Posts: 909
Dangerous Mind
8
Joined 30th July 2017Forum Posts: 909
holy contradiction of terms, batman!
She a walking car alarm,
A high heel flip flop
Pullin' your leg to make sure your hanging dead..
.
A picture slanter
False flag implant-er
The broken leg on the marriage bed...
Bought a watch, to never use it
Was on a rowing machine that sank
Caustic tongue that never bases
Inner child, that needs a spank...
Built like a tank, that keeps a rollin'
Smashing dreams beneath her weight..
An extra arm that's used for milking
Oh God for heaven sake!..
A high heel flip flop
Pullin' your leg to make sure your hanging dead..
.
A picture slanter
False flag implant-er
The broken leg on the marriage bed...
Bought a watch, to never use it
Was on a rowing machine that sank
Caustic tongue that never bases
Inner child, that needs a spank...
Built like a tank, that keeps a rollin'
Smashing dreams beneath her weight..
An extra arm that's used for milking
Oh God for heaven sake!..
Written by runaway-mindtrain
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Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 17013
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 17013
Anger and Disappointment
The smile on your face
the know it all grin, smirk
you know what my dearest
I feel like smacking if off
from your smart face
You said you were free
from shackles you did not want
she left you, o yes she did
to go far away
leaving you alone with your child
Lonely you came to me
I came to you and loved you
I held you in my heart like a warm chick
felt your soul and spirit go free
together, we held hands
On the sand I wrote your name
nay, our name together surrounded
by souls’ kisses, a sand heart
pledge us, laughter life live love
sealed our silent promise
One day she returned from faraway
your fairy princess your Pavlov
She cries out and you ran home
to hold her in your arms
on your knees, you re-worship the altar
The ring stays on your fingers
the roof stays over both your heads
the morning table is adorned by you
a couple, for better or for worse
I am a fly on your curtain
karma lurks at the door
do you know that.
the know it all grin, smirk
you know what my dearest
I feel like smacking if off
from your smart face
You said you were free
from shackles you did not want
she left you, o yes she did
to go far away
leaving you alone with your child
Lonely you came to me
I came to you and loved you
I held you in my heart like a warm chick
felt your soul and spirit go free
together, we held hands
On the sand I wrote your name
nay, our name together surrounded
by souls’ kisses, a sand heart
pledge us, laughter life live love
sealed our silent promise
One day she returned from faraway
your fairy princess your Pavlov
She cries out and you ran home
to hold her in your arms
on your knees, you re-worship the altar
The ring stays on your fingers
the roof stays over both your heads
the morning table is adorned by you
a couple, for better or for worse
I am a fly on your curtain
karma lurks at the door
do you know that.
Written by Grace
(IDryad)
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rabbitquest
Forum Posts: 2051
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 20th May 2012Forum Posts: 2051
If anything makes
Me a man
Its when a Woman
Has some good sides
kriticool
Forum Posts: 596
Fire of Insight
32
Joined 1st Nov 2011Forum Posts: 596
.:My Maybe Baby:.
http://8020.photos.jpgmag.com/594092_15356_922ee534ab_l.jpg
Here again
Probably for the last time.
Trying to situate the situation
Us, how this jus happens to be our fate
The way we can no longer relate
What it is, is you don’t see that trait
But wait... look
I’m not quite sure I’m sayin what I mean.
Might be the pain. The way it’s been OUR Thing
How this could’ve been how we sought the wrong thing
Targeting one another with a half-ass aim
And I’m still quite sure; sure that it’s a case of... You and Your
Maybe Baby
See, you NEED 2 know
That not a one can save us
How those nasty habits enslaved us
True, this is what we do, its what we did
And all of this is about what we have done...
That Blackening out the Sun
The darkness..
How YOU embarked on this
You and Your roam thang
You and your “Never come straight home thang”
Picture that and this. The promises. The errors.
The ones we made with a nerve to insist
But YOU know
Mostly it’s been an absence of trust
Such a bust...the lust
Look, we’re both insane, No wait,
Better said, both of us NEED to reframe
And you, you NEED to heed truth and...work your style out
Because, you should know I’m about to wild out!!
You and your attempts to label my pain
Calling it lame - C’mon, really??
It’s ALMOST Silly - Tell me?
Tell me, who else might set afire to our final stage?
Callin it pacifying the rage?
Then after that? Who then Baby gonna blame?
Seriously, you really wanna drag this out?
Who’s gonna walk them hallways?
You know you’ll still be walkin ‘em sideways.
Searching for soaring HIGH ways while
Goin about life with WHOLE bits of strife
You, the one certifiably insane.
While to you it’s all been a Game
C’mon, let’s make it plain
Who else gonna live it, who’s gonna go thru it?
And who’ll accept it?
The fire, the flame; The Love
The way YOU stained it
Who’s gonna end up done
with how the heart retained it.
Perhaps the same way you framed it
From the way, oh by the way,
The way you faked it.
NO wait...you so damn foul in the way YOU played it.
Look, You’re all but belated,
Just about faded
Living, creeping while in your stilled life sedated.
YOU, you need to admit you’re jaded
No, DON’T even hesitate, really
There is NO debate,
I got past your do or die.
So don’t fake and ask me why.
Look, you once out maneuvered my “Please, Don’t Lie”
Done-in, so long ago, so there’s no need for why
::What::
Were you afraid I’d know.
What, was I supposed to be slow?
You and your other baby daddy and his
bag of blow. How in the hell YOU owed him dough?
See, that’s exactly why YOU had to Go
You -- such an ingrate
You -- always VIOLATE,
And I’m the one to tell YOU so
...
Anonymous
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eswaller
Forum Posts: 762
Dangerous Mind
31
Joined 22nd Dec 2015Forum Posts: 762
Did Me Wrong
My first love… why did you have go ahead and break my heart?
You took it all and tore everything into pieces. Everything was sore
And hurting so much. You knew that everything was falling apart,
But you did nothing, except taking back your promises, your
Words and actions. I was left feeling empty and with a gaping
Hole, but I had to replace you. I could not let the sadness
Wash over me while all of the anger was slowly escaping
From my body. I should have every right to be in the madness
And be pissed off. I am sorry and all the other apologies will
Not be enough. I could have burned everything, but be glad
I am not that kind of ex that is psychotic and crazy. The thrill
And chase of that teenage love is done. We could be friends
Is bullshit. We were down different roads and ends.
You took it all and tore everything into pieces. Everything was sore
And hurting so much. You knew that everything was falling apart,
But you did nothing, except taking back your promises, your
Words and actions. I was left feeling empty and with a gaping
Hole, but I had to replace you. I could not let the sadness
Wash over me while all of the anger was slowly escaping
From my body. I should have every right to be in the madness
And be pissed off. I am sorry and all the other apologies will
Not be enough. I could have burned everything, but be glad
I am not that kind of ex that is psychotic and crazy. The thrill
And chase of that teenage love is done. We could be friends
Is bullshit. We were down different roads and ends.
Written by eswaller
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dejure
vick
Forum Posts: 2880
vick
Dangerous Mind
29
Joined 17th Aug 2015Forum Posts: 2880
to my...
Dear you
and
you
I wanna say
I'm sorry to you..
and to you, I say
thank you...
I'm sorry
for not understanding your love
but I knew it was strong
Thank you
for showing me love
sorry I couldn't love you
the way you want
you tore my darkness violently
made me see the light
I thought I loved you
but I didn't know
how to show it
you showed me
how to show love
your teenage heart
innocently waited
for six years
through adulthood
you didn't wait patiently
you forced me to love you
we were amateurs for love
abandoned emotionally
opened my heart and
turned it inside out
we were passionate
for each other
but you tried to show me
love
life
world
with your eyes
and you forged me into a lover
you made me fearless to love
you made me realise
what a man would do for love
but I went
deep in to the darkness
sulking with my misery
trying to find salvation
and I loved you,
although we knew
we were not gonna
be together
maybe because
it was our first
and maybe I
took you for granted
we gave our selves
some beautiful days
but,
I lead you to cheat on me
I lead you to leave me
I lead you to..
and for that,
I am sorry...
I thank you...
Dear you
and
I wanna say
I'm sorry to you..
thank you...
I'm sorry
for not understanding your love
but I knew it was strong
for showing me love
sorry I couldn't love you
the way you want
made me see the light
I thought I loved you
but I didn't know
how to show it
how to show love
your teenage heart
innocently waited
for six years
through adulthood
you forced me to love you
we were amateurs for love
abandoned emotionally
turned it inside out
we were passionate
for each other
but you tried to show me
love
life
world
with your eyes
and you forged me into a lover
you made me realise
what a man would do for love
but I went
deep in to the darkness
sulking with my misery
trying to find salvation
although we knew
we were not gonna
be together
maybe because
it was our first
and maybe I
took you for granted
some beautiful days
but,
I lead you to cheat on me
I lead you to leave me
I lead you to..
and for that,
I am sorry...
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Forum Posts: 5134
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
Roast an OX
Yah, that's what I called that also-ran
In jest, before he hit the fan,
And that was a long time ago.
He's no EX of mine, not anymo'
After he expired from my list.
But yah, he was a big greasy beast,
Not thinkin' smart at the very least.
I mighta thought with his small head, yo',
And not my own bigger one, y'know?
Sure you do, you've found yourself there too.
But were you one big limpin' body bruise
Every time he was finished banging you?
Like the total idiot I became,
I tried to please him whatever the game,
Just short of having him take my life.
Of course the day came when it hit me.
Yah, the Ox, when I could hardly see,
But could tell that he was off his guard
And hauled off and kneed him super HARD
'Tween his fuzzy dice, OUT for the count!
Oh that was sweet, and was he a whiner!
For years I'd ask myself at a diner
If that one fuzzy still malfunctioned,
'Cause he never felt the compunction,
So he's roastin' slow turnin' on a spit!
MsRockyJackson
Forum Posts: 318
Dangerous Mind
8
Joined 1st July 2014Forum Posts: 318
Thank you all to those that participated in this competition you all did so wonderful - Ms Jackson
eswaller
Forum Posts: 762
Dangerous Mind
31
Joined 22nd Dec 2015Forum Posts: 762
I am quite honored to be runner up with Jade. A huge congratulations to Grace as the winner of this competition. A huge thank you to MsRockyJackson for hosting this competition. Quite an interesting subject and contest to be a part of. Thanks again.
Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 17013
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 17013
Wow! Thank you so Much dear host for naming me the winner...jade and eswaller your writes were awesome! Honoured to be named alongside you two...and the rest of the participants were so talented. Thank you so much.