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Poetry competition CLOSED 19th June 2017 2:50am
WINNER
Krosgood (Violence)
Krosgood (Violence)
RUNNERS-UP:
crimsin
and UbiquitousVoid
DROWN ME IN BLOOD
Poetry Contest Description
your best Carnifex inspired poetry
I have recently gotten into the Deathcore band Carnifex. I really dig their sound and it's some heavy shit! If you are a metal fan then check them out. What I want from you is your best Carnifex inspired poetry. If you are not familiar with them then I will provide some links.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQXuq5-638g
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=63gNrhlHLXc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_e1zaJGQz8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kOtgze9J708
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjjhoQWX408
There are plenty more awesome songs.
TWO WEEKS
MAXIMUM THREE POEM PER POET
NEW WRITES
NO COLLABS
EDIT YOUR WORK
WHY AREN'T YOU WATCHING?
WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING?
YOU ONLY GOT TWO WEEKS
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQXuq5-638g
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=63gNrhlHLXc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_e1zaJGQz8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kOtgze9J708
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjjhoQWX408
There are plenty more awesome songs.
TWO WEEKS
MAXIMUM THREE POEM PER POET
NEW WRITES
NO COLLABS
EDIT YOUR WORK
WHY AREN'T YOU WATCHING?
WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING?
YOU ONLY GOT TWO WEEKS
In The Dead Of NIght
come for me motherfucker
when my cunt is bloody
lick at the oozing wounds
crawl inside my soul
fuck it good
in the dead of night
nail me to the wall
pussy pounded
as forked cock digs deep
I am a lost one
feed the phene that is diseased
let me feel your insanity
peel back my skin
reveal my skull
let your demons fuck
my brain
as their cum seeps
through my eye sockets
bleed me dry
let all hope die
with a thousand cuts
as the devil slashes
with his switchblade tongue
lies from the pit
spew from my stitched lips
freed for the this moment
witness my true face come alive
come for me motherfucker
when my cunt is bloody
lick at the oozing wounds
crawl inside my soul
fuck it good
let me feel you this time
slick as sin
thick as blood
drink my wine
as I die a little more inside
bleed me dry
let all hope die
with a thousand cuts
as the devil slashes
with his switchblade tongue
inspired by Drown Me In Blood
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQXuq5-638g
come for me motherfucker
when my cunt is bloody
lick at the oozing wounds
crawl inside my soul
fuck it good
in the dead of night
nail me to the wall
pussy pounded
as forked cock digs deep
I am a lost one
feed the phene that is diseased
let me feel your insanity
peel back my skin
reveal my skull
let your demons fuck
my brain
as their cum seeps
through my eye sockets
bleed me dry
let all hope die
with a thousand cuts
as the devil slashes
with his switchblade tongue
lies from the pit
spew from my stitched lips
freed for the this moment
witness my true face come alive
come for me motherfucker
when my cunt is bloody
lick at the oozing wounds
crawl inside my soul
fuck it good
let me feel you this time
slick as sin
thick as blood
drink my wine
as I die a little more inside
bleed me dry
let all hope die
with a thousand cuts
as the devil slashes
with his switchblade tongue
inspired by Drown Me In Blood
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQXuq5-638g
Stranger danger
Welcome to a place where cruelty's a plague
Selfishness and greed infect the human race
The leopard waits and attacks from the back
But your neighbors...
Your neighbors do it to your face
Peace is just a dream in this hatred fueled nightmare
There's always something picking at your scabs to never let you heal
Throw rocks into a crowd and ask me if I care
I assure you that the hatred is real
Why stand for change
You know you stand alone
A target in the crowd
Or violent drone
Ignorance is bliss
A life without hope
Turn my back
As not to watch you choke
God's not here...
Pray..... for a hero
If your life had value I'd cash it in
If your life had value I'd cash it in
If your teeth are gold then do not grin
If your life had value I'd cash it in
Redness fills the eyes of the masses and blindness supersedes our actions
Stepping on the weak to reach higher factions
Stepping on your face to get better traction
Burn this bitch to the ground
Let's all form a riot crowd
Lighting fires as car alarms sound
Burn it down, down, down
Why stand for change
You know you stand alone
A target in the crowd
Or violent drone
Ignorance is bliss
A life without hope
Turn my back
As not to watch you choke
God's not here...
Pray..... for a hero
If your life had value I'd cash it in
If your life had value I'd cash it in
If your teeth are gold then do not grin
If your life had value I'd cash it in
Welcome to a place where cruelty's a plague
Selfishness and greed infect the human race
The leopard waits and attacks from the back
But your neighbors...
Your neighbors do it to your face
Peace is just a dream in this hatred fueled nightmare
There's always something picking at your scabs to never let you heal
Throw rocks into a crowd and ask me if I care
I assure you that the hatred is real
Why stand for change
You know you stand alone
A target in the crowd
Or violent drone
Ignorance is bliss
A life without hope
Turn my back
As not to watch you choke
God's not here...
Pray..... for a hero
If your life had value I'd cash it in
If your life had value I'd cash it in
If your teeth are gold then do not grin
If your life had value I'd cash it in
Redness fills the eyes of the masses and blindness supersedes our actions
Stepping on the weak to reach higher factions
Stepping on your face to get better traction
Burn this bitch to the ground
Let's all form a riot crowd
Lighting fires as car alarms sound
Burn it down, down, down
Why stand for change
You know you stand alone
A target in the crowd
Or violent drone
Ignorance is bliss
A life without hope
Turn my back
As not to watch you choke
God's not here...
Pray..... for a hero
If your life had value I'd cash it in
If your life had value I'd cash it in
If your teeth are gold then do not grin
If your life had value I'd cash it in
Inspired by CARNIFEX -Innocence Dies Screaming
Cannibal Vampires
Blood and flesh,
Flesh and blood
Feed the devil
And watch him fuck
Virgin pleading
See her bleeding
Satan’s grinning
His stomach’s churning
She is so tender
And very succulent
The master has feasted, and is sated
For a taste we’ve patiently waited
May we please have bite, or a bone to suck
Of a virgin meal sweet as veal?
Uncorrupted flesh, par broil till ideal
Evil cannot drink enough blood
Nor eat enough flesh
That’s been left untouched
So young women
Who choose celibacy
Preserve your purity
For Hell values virginity
More than angels
Value the Holy Trinity
So keep that hymen intact
Because on ‘All Hallowed Eve’
We cannibal vampires
We’ll be back
In search of pure
Wholesome snack!
Cannibal Vampires
Blood and flesh,
Flesh and blood
Feed the devil
And watch him fuck
Virgin pleading
See her bleeding
Satan’s grinning
His stomach’s churning
She is so tender
And very succulent
The master has feasted, and is sated
For a taste we’ve patiently waited
May we please have bite, or a bone to suck
Of a virgin meal sweet as veal?
Uncorrupted flesh, par broil till ideal
Evil cannot drink enough blood
Nor eat enough flesh
That’s been left untouched
So young women
Who choose celibacy
Preserve your purity
For Hell values virginity
More than angels
Value the Holy Trinity
So keep that hymen intact
Because on ‘All Hallowed Eve’
We cannibal vampires
We’ll be back
In search of pure
Wholesome snack!
Inspired by, CARNIFEX - Drown Me In Blood Lyrics
"Drown me in blood
Let me taste the iron of lost love
Drown me in blood
Die a little inside you won't miss much"
DONORS NEEDED
Sanguinarian dehydration
Hematophageous famine
Won’t anyone be so kind
As to make a blood donation?
"Drown me in blood
Let me taste the iron of lost love
Drown me in blood
Die a little inside you won't miss much"
DONORS NEEDED
Sanguinarian dehydration
Hematophageous famine
Won’t anyone be so kind
As to make a blood donation?
snugglebuck said:Inspired by, CARNIFEX - Drown Me In Blood Lyrics
"Drown me in blood
Let me taste the iron of lost love
Drown me in blood
Die a little inside you won't miss much"
DONORS NEEDED
Sanguinarian dehydration
Hematophageous famine
Won’t anyone be so kind
As to make a blood donation?
LOL! True/
"Drown me in blood
Let me taste the iron of lost love
Drown me in blood
Die a little inside you won't miss much"
DONORS NEEDED
Sanguinarian dehydration
Hematophageous famine
Won’t anyone be so kind
As to make a blood donation?
LOL! True/
Gape of jaw
In angst voice flat harmony
Described
In dead light
Of no end
A search for living gr72ave
Grave hearts
March
By heavy foot
Soul soul reprocussion
Heavy beat percussion
Trembling reach for 6 feet
My Dantes peak attained
I hit the volume break
And mind melt
By head beat
Screeeam!!!!!
Shock waves pound the night
A black cat
Tears
Runs my scowl howling
Making tracks and echoes
Needing distance
And perma72nence
Something that lays
Its inky grip on
Around
Beyond this soul suck
Life
In angst voice flat harmony
Described
In dead light
Of no end
A search for living gr72ave
Grave hearts
March
By heavy foot
Soul soul reprocussion
Heavy beat percussion
Trembling reach for 6 feet
My Dantes peak attained
I hit the volume break
And mind melt
By head beat
Screeeam!!!!!
Shock waves pound the night
A black cat
Tears
Runs my scowl howling
Making tracks and echoes
Needing distance
And perma72nence
Something that lays
Its inky grip on
Around
Beyond this soul suck
Life
