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Poetry competition CLOSED 19th June 2017 2:50am
WINNER
Violence (Krosgood)
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trophy
RUNNERS-UP: Unveiling (crimsin) and UbiquitousVoid

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DROWN ME IN BLOOD

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UbiquitousVoid
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WENDIGO : SURREPTION

 
Crimson pours over the divide
I wish to see what festers inside
Soulless wanderer, you'll feel my pain
Thrashing underneath, speak my name


Hell whispers words of power unto me
In which I seek refuge from the filth
The motive slumbers behind the deed
Vivisecting numbness, an urge to fill


Now I must kill
Embrace the venom in my hand
Your flesh girds its will
Pulled into the abyss
Surreptitious, this night
Prefabricated and cold by design
Your soul is mine


I am the phantom slipping through the cracks
Aborted hope, there is no escape
Candle snuffed, the world becomes a cataract
Enclosing darkness turns the page


You ask me what I see in the mirror
A frozen landscape, this godless paradise
Hate corrupted, masticated by horror
On those limbs that beg to be adorned
Let your lust confuse
I'll take from you what obfuscates
I'm the only light you need
This demon freed
A carnal dream, a masterpiece
Choking on blood and vomitus
Waking coma, death denied
All survives here but the hope in your eyes


My heart was blackened by what claims all lives
Profuse, profound, silence was the sound
My lies could torture the weak of mind
Ingest them now, lest my hunger decide


Now I must kill
Embrace the venom in my hand
Your flesh girds its will
Pulled into the abyss
Surreptitious, this night
Prefabicated and cold by design
Your soul is mine
Written by UbiquitousVoid
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Inspired by Carnifex in general, not any particular song, because I've known them for years.


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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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ABORTIONS OF A NIGHTMARE
(inspired by "Angel of Death")

don't think you'll earn your points in death
the only points are knives slick with your life
running bright red to keep you from your race

countless fingernails embedded in the
shower stalls that rain down acid

of every night terror, projected like
the heavily spliced silent newsreels of

bi-plane skylines and Purple Gang massacres
in the bubbled cracklings of deteriorating

nitrate, leaving the blackened outline
of a holocaust victim; the lidless glare

of a strobe filtered through the spider-veined
parchment of its skin, lurching off the

images of a nightmare burning thin, and
chattering sprockets of vertebrae, while

throwing chaos into a clockwork sluice
that sets in motion the next death star cult

where I own you and every piece I
decapitate from your worthless carcass

as I fuck you into a bloodied mess
no longer recognizing you & your worm

don't think you'll earn your points in death
the only points are knives slick with your life
running bright red to keep you from your race

where I own you and every piece I
decapitate from your worthless carcass

as I fuck you into a bloodied mess
no longer recognizing you & your worm

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HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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awesome entries, Void and Jade!

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HadesRising
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"Torn from the heavens
To death she ascended
We are the souls of the unforgiven
War of attrition
Unearthly possession
Love is the song of a dead religion"

Anyone else? The clock is ticking. Time is running out for this shiny new trophy!

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HadesRising
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I just want to say that I am blown away at how well done you, my fellow poets, did. You nailed it and in doing so made this decision extremely difficult. You all deserve a trophy. But alas, in the immortal words of Connor MacLeod, there can be only one.

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crimsin
Unveiling
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thank you my Darkest Lord for choosing me runner up & for hosting a bad ass comp.

Congratulations Krosgood & Void wickedly proud to be next to you

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Krosgood
Violence
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Thank you Sir for the trophy. As always your competitions are always fun

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