A challenge that will have an end!
violet
Vi
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Vi
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just to let you guys know, i am postponing the judging for two more days. More time for more entrants
thanks for all your contributions so far.. it will be hard to pick!
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thanks for all your contributions so far.. it will be hard to pick!
lashawnscott92
Visual Lyricist
Joined 7th Apr 2011
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Visual Lyricist
Thought Provoker
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Train Tracks
As I walk these tracks each one gets rustier
And on each one is inscribed a number
I have reached track 50 and still going
But the further I get the more tired I become
The older my body gets, until I reach the last track
Death.
Next Title: Hatred
As I walk these tracks each one gets rustier
And on each one is inscribed a number
I have reached track 50 and still going
But the further I get the more tired I become
The older my body gets, until I reach the last track
Death.
Next Title: Hatred
Darkbee
DB
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DB
Fire of Insight
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Hatred
His skin is black, but he has two eyes and a nose
just like me. He smiles a milky white smile too
just like me. He hugs his daddy like he missed him for a month
just like me. He's a lot like me which is why
I don't understand why I should have this hatred
but daddy says we can't trust black people.
Next Title: Caught in the Crossfire
His skin is black, but he has two eyes and a nose
just like me. He smiles a milky white smile too
just like me. He hugs his daddy like he missed him for a month
just like me. He's a lot like me which is why
I don't understand why I should have this hatred
but daddy says we can't trust black people.
Next Title: Caught in the Crossfire
Viddax
Lord Viddax
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Guardian of Shadows
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Caught in the Crossfire
Black, white
Up, down
Left, right
War, Peace
It seems that I'm always in the Crossfire
So I guess I'll become invulnerable
And just put 1 and 2 together
Whether they like it or not
Or better yet have them duke it out
And rise out of their weakening crossfire
While each side falls
I shall rise as a phoenix.
Next Title: A thousand radiances of moons upon the seas.
Black, white
Up, down
Left, right
War, Peace
It seems that I'm always in the Crossfire
So I guess I'll become invulnerable
And just put 1 and 2 together
Whether they like it or not
Or better yet have them duke it out
And rise out of their weakening crossfire
While each side falls
I shall rise as a phoenix.
Next Title: A thousand radiances of moons upon the seas.
flyric
Joined 19th June 2011
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navy blue glitter
you could get lost in it
if you wanted to
Next title: Push back!
you could get lost in it
if you wanted to
Next title: Push back!
lepperochan
CraicDealer
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Joined 1st Apr 2011
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Guardian of Shadows
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for the love of numb
push back
for the rush to run
push back
before its all gone
push back
next; cheap tricks
push back
for the rush to run
push back
before its all gone
push back
next; cheap tricks
jolais
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Thought Provoker
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cheap for you but not to me
they cost my life, my dignity
I turn 'em inside out and leave,
you go back to job and family.
Buy all of me for £50
I'm back to work: the ploughing ground.
Next title: You'll find it eventually
they cost my life, my dignity
I turn 'em inside out and leave,
you go back to job and family.
Buy all of me for £50
I'm back to work: the ploughing ground.
Next title: You'll find it eventually
beautiful_accident
20
Joined 21st June 2011
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Fire of Insight
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I know "I love you" meant
"I love what I can get from you"
Your whispers wore away my defenses
The finger inside me turned into a fist that hit me
Now your cock is wrapped tightly around her bony finger
She sneers back harshly; heartbreak in your grasp
Next title: subterranean
"I love what I can get from you"
Your whispers wore away my defenses
The finger inside me turned into a fist that hit me
Now your cock is wrapped tightly around her bony finger
She sneers back harshly; heartbreak in your grasp
Next title: subterranean
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Subterranean laughter
small and quiet
on Chase's front porch
seems like no one heard it but me
the dirt keeps covering you up
and over and over I blow it away
Next title: minimum wage
small and quiet
on Chase's front porch
seems like no one heard it but me
the dirt keeps covering you up
and over and over I blow it away
Next title: minimum wage
violet
Vi
6
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Vi
Dangerous Mind
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The winner: Jestalessa with 'Riding the bus'
Runner up : TryHarderMartyr with 'Subterranean'
Thanks for playing
i enjoyed reading all but those two stood out.
Runner up : TryHarderMartyr with 'Subterranean'
Thanks for playing
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