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Love

gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
United States 6awards
Joined 6th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 372

you should just chill

I will speak the truth,  
It may be the only thing that moves,  
Please tell me just what have you been thru,  
Right now I just pursue,
relaxing with you,  
I want to hear your good news,  
I want to see you in a good mood,  
here in this room,  
Blanket cocoons,  
Crunchy grooves,  
And two comfy spoons,  
I say we play it and see what it do,  
All afternoon,  
call me rude,  
But we are too cool,  
Kick it like we were back in school,
So I don't have to move,
till after we snooze,  
We'll wake up at noon,
get some food    
episode two,
high like the moon,
In my astronaut boots...
I'll give you space if you just say to,
But for now let's just chill...

I said let's just chill
And i mean that for real..
I don't want to wish you well,
I'm not into Kiss and tell,
I don't want to wish we fail,
so let's drop the sails,
embrace this fairy tale,
hearts aren't for sale,
but I think you broke my scale

gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
United States 6awards
Joined 6th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 372

A second one you can listen here: http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/230049-angel-recorded/

Silent Killer

So I say look me in the face and say it louder,
It is silence that devours all of these lonely hours,
I put myself out there,
and I got burned,
with no reverse,
I waited my turn,
God damn it this hurts,
I don't know what happened first,
I question what is happiness worth,
and why can't I find my place on earth?
Have I just gone completely berserk?
or are these the symptoms of a larger curse?
please tell me which is worse,
being a monster since birth,
or becoming one mid verse,
some things you just can't rehearse,
i just observe as I slur my words,
hoping it gets heard,
hope I can learn,
so when I return
you won't be so concerned,
your respect I will earn,
I won't neglect what i deserve,
change my perspective,
and pray that it works.

RKX
Lost Thinker
Canada
Joined 18th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 14

You decided that you are defined now by all the things you're not, look below and see how I see you, and what you are to me and in these words.

Your eyes are two deep oceans, they glitter and sparkle on the surface, but within they are deep pools filled with a radiance that I wish to be forever lost in.

Your hair like a sunset, shimmers brightly while flowing gracefully in the breeze, it is a softness upon the wind. framing your face in such perfection that I could stare for hours and not be bored or ever grow tired

your words are a sweet song upon my heart, skillfully weaving their meaning into my very being, creating my existence, calling me unto you like a beautiful melody.

Your lips, a sweetness, full and wet, where I could dive in deeply, or place just a breath of a kiss, reap the same rewards, feeling the fullness of your desire come to the surface, the warmth of their embrace, taking us to ever expanding levels of bliss.

Your hands, a touch of tenderness upon my flesh, dancing lightly upon the surface, evoking passion, electricity. A subconscious reaction that I could never control. A physical connection not to be denied or withheld.

Your body, perfection in my eyes, a rhythm in my heart, sets my soul on fire, and I want to bathe in your sweet softness and inhale deeply your scent. I could die in your arms and be fully alive.

I can and have given up everything in my life to show that I want to be with you, to be yours, forever. To become a future brighter than you have even seen or imagined, and to bring that joy to your every waken moment.

You were, and are all of my life, its why nothing is the same without you here, with me. its why we are in each others head from every morning's dawn to every night's last thought.

I trust my hearts intuition, that we truly belong to each other... Together, to set the world on fire, to light up each others lives with unparalleled love, devotion, passion and desire. To explore the far reaches of our minds, the depths of our fantasies, and come back for more

Until then, I will be here waiting for you, waiting for your silence to break. For every day, I keep breathing for you, my heart beats, and with every beat it whispers but one name.... Yours, it whispers; I love you.

For True love, as is ours... True love is an act of total surrender, and if you will put your hands in mine, I will become a little more perfect, we will become something much more.

...something amazing

RKX
Lost Thinker
Canada
Joined 18th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 14

I've been trying to write a reply to your question for the last hour, and here is what I found....Your question posed as perplexing a question as asking what love is to someone  :)

I agree with you there are many forms of surrender, honestly all of which are powerful, wonderful and freeing. I agree its a powerful thing, makes you think differently, do things you wouldn't normally do. its freeing, for sure, it could easily be compared to a Dom/sub relationship in a lot of ways (the surrender).

Its not just surrender to one of those, its total surrender, taking all the best aspects of each, even being willing to give up everything you have or are, for reasons you may not even fully understand. And still willing to do it.

I saw something online somewhere today and wrote it down, I think its a great answer to love.

She asked, "You are in love. What does love look like?" to which I replied, "Like everything I've ever lost come back to me".




SmookPoeticJustice
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 29th Jan 2016
Forum Posts: 15

You kill a beautiful brain your stupid. Love is powerful it's the ultimate emotion that could never be defined can't be explained or even remotely expressed yet we'll still give our best. Love is the reason our heart's are an involuntary muscle it thrives it push it pulls but more importantly it hustle. Love has no race love has no gender love has no remorse love has no regrets love has no destination just constantly running its natural course. Hate pain grieve envy don't even exist in the same place in fact love puts all things in it's rightful place. I am love you are love and loved are we & only love true love knows what we are blind to see.

Hepcat61
geoff cat
Dangerous Mind
United States 33awards
Joined 27th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 1028

Yours

In this place of lovers' dawning meditations
Which circle still, teasing
Wrapped in godly whispers

My hands having never known
Your touching grace...
Yet they own the lure of your scent

My mouth having never found
Your lips' pressing invitation...
Yet it savors their earthy taste

My body having never felt
The fervent grip of your want...
Yet I am bathed in your sacred release

Never have my eyes
Found your favor...
Yet surely you are ever before me

Your breath in my lungs,
Your blood pumping my heart

Your words call me to answer...

From me only one can come...

…Yours...


HarleyQinn_2
DarkSnake1010
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 26th Feb 2016
Forum Posts: 218

HarleyQinn_2 said:                                                               WHAT IS LOVE?
Love Is When Someone Is Beside You
Love Is When Someone Cares
Love Is When There Beside You Think In Thin
Love Is Pain
Love Can Be Light
Love Can be Trust Working
Love Can Be Beautiful
Love Can Be Scary At Time
Love Can Wholesome
Love Can Be Frightened
Love Is When You Shelter One Another
Love Is When You Keep Them Warm
Love Is When You And Your Other Can Talk About Anything Within It's Self
Love Is Powerful
Love Can Be Hurtful
Love Can Be Crazy
Love Can Hurt
Love Is Something Different
All Way Are Love Have Different Things ,To Know The Right Way In Love Like The Good In Bad,
Or All Above
By: Ashley Evans

Duncan
Duncan Alexander
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 1awards
Joined 4th May 2010
Forum Posts: 2144

Love

A fallic symbol of uncanny certainty
why not worship wonder
a graphic entity portrayayed with much uncertainty
leaving less than is right to ponder

As far as West is from East
as far from naught to knot
as far from heart to head you say
that is how far we have forgotten.

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

Everything worth knowing

A waning sun makes golden
The end to a spring day,
And sends forth the suddenness
Of a breeze from evening’s breath.

As it approaches, it sloughs above,
Through the trees that line the street
Where they walk, hand in hand, in love.
She stops as if she’s lost her way.

He turns and looks down at her,
Smiling, with an expression
That asks if anything’s wrong.
She lifts his hand that she holds to her face

Studying up close every detail,
Turning palm upwards and then down.
”You’re not certain I’m real.
You think I'm a dream” she hears him say.

On the contrary, her mind spins in place
To drink in the fact that she can feel
Every cell of hers in a fusion with his
At the moment of their discovery,

When they return to the flat
Where they live, and walk the five flights
To the room,
To the bed,

To undress,
To lie together,
To explore each other,
To know

Every detail very well about
Everything worth knowing.
Tongues taste and fingers stroll,
Spending long hours lazily delving

From head to toe and in between.
That anywhere, both night and day,
They'll think of each other in ev'ry way.
To daydream of the shadowy valley

Below the pelvis, as one might.
Of parted thighs that shed light
On the tender most regions,
So receptive and so very warm.

To kiss the crook of a soft inner arm,
And the sensual swirl to the shell of an ear.
Planting slow-motion kisses upon the
Archer’s bow of a collarbone,

Across the undulations of flesh
That span the hips, and upon
The navel floating midway between,
And dimples around the bend of a knee.

Taking in the aroma of one’s lover.
Where one nuzzles an armpit,
And is given shelter by an embrace
That makes time stand still until

Nothing more is left but the senses,
And the reflection of them drifting
From their tour of exploration about
Everything worth knowing.


©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.  

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I have removed the awards to allow the host to rectify the situation.

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 90awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5706

Note: please see post above this one from our Webmiss--she has removed the trophies on this competition as they were originally incorrectly assigned. The host does not appear to want to reassign the win, so I'm sending it to vote. You'll find the valid entries above my post here and the Webmiss' post, on which to cast your vote for this comp. Please do not vote for my post as I'm here for informational purposes only--thanks!

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