Instrumental Challenge
Zazzles
Broomie
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Broomie
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Poetry Contest Description
Write while listening...
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I am looking for poets/poetess to open their minds and listen beyond their comfort zone and discover....
A special shout out to (_Shadoe_) Katja
for inspiring me to create this Competition
THE CHALLENGE,
LISTEN AND CREATE AT THE SAME TIME....
Pick 1 or 2 out of 6 song links posted in this comp.
"my advice, listen to all of them Completely before choosing."
The song names will not be mentioned only the links
I want you to listen in the blind... ")
which ever one drives you to write, choose it...
COMP GUIDELINES..
The poem/poems can be of any topic,
love, hate, happy, sad, anxious, angry,
really any emotion that comes to you, while you listen...
*MUST BE A NEW POEM*
You Must titled your poem,
You must post the link you chose (Music Choice)
and NAME the songs you picked...
You Must write while listening.
Note:I have written some of my best poetry while immersed in Instrumental music...
MUSIC LINKS
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qvglWAHDak
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8YS7sWCG_ZE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8LEWkwvaNcs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIog_7ME_Lw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHioIlbnS_A&list=PLD23362D97B443EB7
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCYk9CRx0g8
NOTE: some of links have more than one song listen to as many as you want....
I am asking for you to listen to at least the first song,
per link...
Up to 2 entries per writer,
one is fine too.
WORD RESTRICTIONS!
Must be At least3 stanzas
No max cap on word usage...
Comp Duration 2 weeks in one week intervals...
GOOD LUCK TO EVERYONE!
First place winner will receive a personal graphic signature tag, from me, with their name on it, a Dup winners trophy
and, A First place Blue ribbon.
Runners up will receive A Red Or White ribbon.
Example
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCYk9CRx0g8
song name.LONG Playlist of Relaxing Soft Piano Music
Title:Forever Enchanted By You
Balloons and Ballerinas,
magic spells and cartoons
deep feelings and happy thoughts...
Calm walks on the beach at night
and you,
you in my arms
I miss you.
I will always miss you,
forever and ever
even in death.
Te quiero para siempre,
incluso en la muerte de mi amor,
eres mi mundo y te extraño ...
Love always your wife.
22nd April 2015
I am looking for poets/poetess to open their minds and listen beyond their comfort zone and discover....
A special shout out to (_Shadoe_) Katja
for inspiring me to create this Competition
THE CHALLENGE,
LISTEN AND CREATE AT THE SAME TIME....
Pick 1 or 2 out of 6 song links posted in this comp.
"my advice, listen to all of them Completely before choosing."
The song names will not be mentioned only the links
I want you to listen in the blind... ")
which ever one drives you to write, choose it...
COMP GUIDELINES..
The poem/poems can be of any topic,
love, hate, happy, sad, anxious, angry,
really any emotion that comes to you, while you listen...
*MUST BE A NEW POEM*
You Must titled your poem,
You must post the link you chose (Music Choice)
and NAME the songs you picked...
You Must write while listening.
Note:I have written some of my best poetry while immersed in Instrumental music...
MUSIC LINKS
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qvglWAHDak
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8YS7sWCG_ZE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8LEWkwvaNcs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIog_7ME_Lw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHioIlbnS_A&list=PLD23362D97B443EB7
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCYk9CRx0g8
NOTE: some of links have more than one song listen to as many as you want....
I am asking for you to listen to at least the first song,
per link...
Up to 2 entries per writer,
one is fine too.
WORD RESTRICTIONS!
Must be At least3 stanzas
No max cap on word usage...
Comp Duration 2 weeks in one week intervals...
GOOD LUCK TO EVERYONE!
First place winner will receive a personal graphic signature tag, from me, with their name on it, a Dup winners trophy
and, A First place Blue ribbon.
Runners up will receive A Red Or White ribbon.
Example
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCYk9CRx0g8
song name.LONG Playlist of Relaxing Soft Piano Music
Title:Forever Enchanted By You
Balloons and Ballerinas,
magic spells and cartoons
deep feelings and happy thoughts...
Calm walks on the beach at night
and you,
you in my arms
I miss you.
I will always miss you,
forever and ever
even in death.
Te quiero para siempre,
incluso en la muerte de mi amor,
eres mi mundo y te extraño ...
Love always your wife.
22nd April 2015
orchestra__moss
Orchestra Moss
Joined 8th July 2015
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Orchestra Moss
Lost Thinker
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avis
sunrise
rose and amber reflections
paint the sky into the waves
gently rolling
empty horizons all around
miles of expanse
no disturbance
fluently soaring -
a streaming hover
subtle life, subtle death
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qvglWAHDak | Ludovico Einaudi - divenire
Zazzles
Broomie
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Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Orchestra Moss
Perfect! Thanks for entering and thank you for kicking this comp off!
Ludovico Einaudi Great pianist for sure..
Good Luck!
Perfect! Thanks for entering and thank you for kicking this comp off!
Ludovico Einaudi Great pianist for sure..
Good Luck!
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
some of the links start in the middle u have to rewind,
sorry ")
sorry ")
MadameLavender
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Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5727
Hoping to get something in here by the end of the week...been nuts busy, but I'll try!
darksighs
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 13th May 2015Forum Posts: 7
song link #5.. Christmas Eve/ Sarajevo [Timeless Version]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHioIlbnS_A&list=PLD23362D97B443EB7
Dark Chiming
Dark bells ring, crisp on snow
as all-fierce chiming grows.
Silky shadows rage tall.
Stumbling 'midst hungry stones,
I falter to break fall.
Hands fending torn tree bark,
I pause for those dark bells..
deep breathing arctic spark.
'Feel sky obey, blizzard reigns
yet the bleak chiming stills,
as I sink, weak.. and fade..
Fade into cruel winter,
sink as pale iced bone..
Fade from time's Forever..
(chilled wish, I have ever)
"I just want to go home"
Home.. to warm loyal arms,
my blazed candle inside.
Ensconced from world charms,
there, faithful, we reside.
Lit up at my center
smoldered balmy and bold.
Home is where my love lies,
home.. is for'never cold.
Knee-deep, ..nearly covered
by purest white storm's fall,
I recall.. 'love left me'..
minus hope granting peace.
Then.. I know nothing at all.
Dark bells commence chiming,
numb emotion spills weep.
I shan't ever sing along,
lain frozen, snowy sleep.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHioIlbnS_A&list=PLD23362D97B443EB7
Dark Chiming
Dark bells ring, crisp on snow
as all-fierce chiming grows.
Silky shadows rage tall.
Stumbling 'midst hungry stones,
I falter to break fall.
Hands fending torn tree bark,
I pause for those dark bells..
deep breathing arctic spark.
'Feel sky obey, blizzard reigns
yet the bleak chiming stills,
as I sink, weak.. and fade..
Fade into cruel winter,
sink as pale iced bone..
Fade from time's Forever..
(chilled wish, I have ever)
"I just want to go home"
Home.. to warm loyal arms,
my blazed candle inside.
Ensconced from world charms,
there, faithful, we reside.
Lit up at my center
smoldered balmy and bold.
Home is where my love lies,
home.. is for'never cold.
Knee-deep, ..nearly covered
by purest white storm's fall,
I recall.. 'love left me'..
minus hope granting peace.
Then.. I know nothing at all.
Dark bells commence chiming,
numb emotion spills weep.
I shan't ever sing along,
lain frozen, snowy sleep.
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Kick ass Entry Dark, thank you from my heart!!!
I love it!!!
Good luck!!!!
Zazzles
I love it!!!
Good luck!!!!
Zazzles
Anonymous
pretend with me
pretend with me.
drift into this blue and amber
dream of everything.
let the pages turn as they will.
a love story in ochre and plum.
where hearts do not break
under the weight of prudence and caution.
where midnight purples are common
in the everyday of your voice
and the freckles on your strong back are
perfect constellations leading me
beyond true north.
into misty valleys and
the down of soft pillows.
do not turn from me.
do not leave me in this beauty all alone.
pretend with me.
pretend that we are unbreakable
that this moment of tears
and broken keepsakes is just
a flight of fancy and that your heart will mend.
that my eyes have not seen the last of your stars
and the sun will rise.
pretend with me.
one last time
before you close the thin pages
and put me on the shelf of your
forgotten conquests.
into shallow pools of warm water,
i will wash away the last memories of your palms
on my hips and how your fingers
played my ivory curves until my skin sang
hymns to the relentless deities.
but before I forget…
one last time,
pretend with me.
inspiration is the last link, first piece that is played. i never caught the name of it, but i am in love with it.
pretend with me.
drift into this blue and amber
dream of everything.
let the pages turn as they will.
a love story in ochre and plum.
where hearts do not break
under the weight of prudence and caution.
where midnight purples are common
in the everyday of your voice
and the freckles on your strong back are
perfect constellations leading me
beyond true north.
into misty valleys and
the down of soft pillows.
do not turn from me.
do not leave me in this beauty all alone.
pretend with me.
pretend that we are unbreakable
that this moment of tears
and broken keepsakes is just
a flight of fancy and that your heart will mend.
that my eyes have not seen the last of your stars
and the sun will rise.
pretend with me.
one last time
before you close the thin pages
and put me on the shelf of your
forgotten conquests.
into shallow pools of warm water,
i will wash away the last memories of your palms
on my hips and how your fingers
played my ivory curves until my skin sang
hymns to the relentless deities.
but before I forget…
one last time,
pretend with me.
inspiration is the last link, first piece that is played. i never caught the name of it, but i am in love with it.
crimsin
Unveiling
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Unveiling
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My Daemons
Anxiety crawling along my spine
striking my core with spiked fingers impaling me
my daemons dig deeper into the dark matter of my brain
feed us they cry
we walk with you talk with you
listen to you when no one cares
give us a taste of white powder, a little liquor and porn
sexually appease us by rubbing your exposed clit
torturous thoughts we walk as one in your soul
sweet little cunt we are legion
we own you collared and chained
reigning in your skin
tasting your sweet cum upon
our awaiting lips
as we fuck your soul
oh you taste so sweet
little treat for the beast
feed us dark thoughts
as we fuel your nightmares
digging ever deeper in your psyche, your body
licking each orifice with probing tongues
knowing you, hating you, loving you
Inspired by Tubular Bells
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8LEWkwvaNcs
Anxiety crawling along my spine
striking my core with spiked fingers impaling me
my daemons dig deeper into the dark matter of my brain
feed us they cry
we walk with you talk with you
listen to you when no one cares
give us a taste of white powder, a little liquor and porn
sexually appease us by rubbing your exposed clit
torturous thoughts we walk as one in your soul
sweet little cunt we are legion
we own you collared and chained
reigning in your skin
tasting your sweet cum upon
our awaiting lips
as we fuck your soul
oh you taste so sweet
little treat for the beast
feed us dark thoughts
as we fuel your nightmares
digging ever deeper in your psyche, your body
licking each orifice with probing tongues
knowing you, hating you, loving you
Inspired by Tubular Bells
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8LEWkwvaNcs
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Daisy!
so glad u entered! Yes the choice you made has often brought me to quite a few written pieces..
I will tell you, U made me cry with this, It is simply awesome!
Good luck!
Zazzles
so glad u entered! Yes the choice you made has often brought me to quite a few written pieces..
I will tell you, U made me cry with this, It is simply awesome!
Good luck!
Zazzles
Zazzles
Broomie
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Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Jeezez take the wheel...
Crim! I loved this so full of fire and demand!!
Excellent choice of music, I am impressed!
Good luck!
Zazzles
Crim! I loved this so full of fire and demand!!
Excellent choice of music, I am impressed!
Good luck!
Zazzles
darksighs
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Dangerous Mind
8
Joined 13th May 2015Forum Posts: 7
Note tucked 'neath my Pillow
Found a note from winter, of some long gone December..
year boasts nineteen sixty-nine.
Unopened, cold hands trembled, when scrawled old words were spoken..
To: my empty heart, From: Time.
It started, "You are not yet borne, but know I ..I am yorn"
and tears glossed my lonely eyes.
Fetally, I curled around this crumpled note without sound-
wounded soul, this bed, and I.
Words, a mere formality, to time.. space.. antiquity,
my love 'lone, has cried and cried.
It continued to say, "Heal.. I'll be at your side one day."
with emotion's wreck, I caved.
"Bleed not, for I already love you. Years from now, you'll see,
so renege your curse on fate."
" I shall find you to beg court, one brisk season- years henceforth,
by fantasies your heart stakes"
"Inside myself already, balm of true delight you be,
think on me, sparing blushed weep.."
"Cannot ask you wait for me but is my soul's fondest plea,
I wither.. 'til our days meet."
Drawn into a tighter ball, I shivered.. teared.. throat convulsed.
Is He of my destiny?
Old note's fade is showing, tucked beneath my pillow's knowing,
one.. one day.. love will find me.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCYk9CRx0g8
#1 "Morning Light"
Found a note from winter, of some long gone December..
year boasts nineteen sixty-nine.
Unopened, cold hands trembled, when scrawled old words were spoken..
To: my empty heart, From: Time.
It started, "You are not yet borne, but know I ..I am yorn"
and tears glossed my lonely eyes.
Fetally, I curled around this crumpled note without sound-
wounded soul, this bed, and I.
Words, a mere formality, to time.. space.. antiquity,
my love 'lone, has cried and cried.
It continued to say, "Heal.. I'll be at your side one day."
with emotion's wreck, I caved.
"Bleed not, for I already love you. Years from now, you'll see,
so renege your curse on fate."
" I shall find you to beg court, one brisk season- years henceforth,
by fantasies your heart stakes"
"Inside myself already, balm of true delight you be,
think on me, sparing blushed weep.."
"Cannot ask you wait for me but is my soul's fondest plea,
I wither.. 'til our days meet."
Drawn into a tighter ball, I shivered.. teared.. throat convulsed.
Is He of my destiny?
Old note's fade is showing, tucked beneath my pillow's knowing,
one.. one day.. love will find me.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCYk9CRx0g8
#1 "Morning Light"
Zazzles
Broomie
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Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Dark you creative witch, U have set the bar with this piece.
Jeezez fucking Christ...
I am in awe in a puddle Smh. This ink is pure as magic...
Good luck
Zazzles
Jeezez fucking Christ...
I am in awe in a puddle Smh. This ink is pure as magic...
Good luck
Zazzles
crimsin
Unveiling
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Unveiling
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Joined 25th Jan 2011 Forum Posts: 2657
Sailor
Take my broken mind
to the quiet places
sailing the ocean
weathered and beaten by the world
we find solace in each other's arms
the sea balm to our soul
sandy beaches beckon
we walk them nude
unashamed and cleansed
sea spray washes over us
bathing in the salty depths
we are renewed
seeing the world through your eyes
empty ports of pleasure
only a temporary fix
treading lightly I come to you in the night like a whisper
a water sprite dancing on the waters
in your minds eye captivated
you embrace me not to claim my spirit
but to make passionate love to it
easing my tension as you do so
coming on slowly
then crashing down on me wave after wave
my curvaceous body melds as one with yours
lying in the surf
touching, tasting, loving
no longer lonely
climaxing with the now tumultuous sea
crashing in on each other
crying out in ecstasy
then lulled to sleep by the whispering winds
in your arms I have found my safe harbor
excitement through the adventures that abound by your side
sailing the ocean blue with you I am at home
inspired by Divenire
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qvglWAHDak
Take my broken mind
to the quiet places
sailing the ocean
weathered and beaten by the world
we find solace in each other's arms
the sea balm to our soul
sandy beaches beckon
we walk them nude
unashamed and cleansed
sea spray washes over us
bathing in the salty depths
we are renewed
seeing the world through your eyes
empty ports of pleasure
only a temporary fix
treading lightly I come to you in the night like a whisper
a water sprite dancing on the waters
in your minds eye captivated
you embrace me not to claim my spirit
but to make passionate love to it
easing my tension as you do so
coming on slowly
then crashing down on me wave after wave
my curvaceous body melds as one with yours
lying in the surf
touching, tasting, loving
no longer lonely
climaxing with the now tumultuous sea
crashing in on each other
crying out in ecstasy
then lulled to sleep by the whispering winds
in your arms I have found my safe harbor
excitement through the adventures that abound by your side
sailing the ocean blue with you I am at home
inspired by Divenire
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qvglWAHDak
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Absolutely beautiful Crim.. loving the soft touch that we rarely see... wonderful song selection!!!
Good luck
Zazzles
Good luck
Zazzles