Poetry competition CLOSED 11th July 2015 11:37am
WINNER
ImperfectedStone (The Gardener)
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RUNNERS-UP: Savaja and HHMCameron

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Polyamory

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
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...

you devoured him
then watched me inhale her lips 
reflective orgy 

poet Anonymous

An Orgy of Words

True,
we had an orgy of words
that expanded a comical distance
and now

now you're here
in all your idolized glory
bounded for disappointment
because we've run out of things
to say for all was said
during those countless hours
of induced online-sex insomnia,
hesitant on losing a second,
a minute, an hour, even a day
from one another

So tonight
I wore that infamous dress I boasted about
in my favorite shade of lipstick
and still you refuse
to stick your dick in me

I don't know what to do,
perhaps I should finger fuck myself
until I turn blue?

Hmm. . .
C'mon, Dude, my body is talking to you!

Shit!
Fuck this!
I'm calling it quits.

But instead of walking away
or showing my e-lover to the front door,
I pick up my cell and dial
for additional assistance
since my lover was showing
a bit of monogamous resistance

Within minutes
my front door opens
with three of my girl friends
and two of their boyfriends
casually, yet anxiously walking in

My lover and I both stand to our feet
and greet
my girl friends and their boyfriends
with obvious signs of carnal heat:

'Adam, this is Tommy.  Tommy, this is Adam.'

'Hey.'

'Adam, this is Luke.  Luke, this is Adam.'

'Hey.'

'Adam, this is Rachel, Carla and Beth.
Rachel, Carla and Beth, this is Adam.'

'Hi.'

'So', I began
after the introductions were made,
'where should we start?
Here in the living room
or back in my bedroom?'

Tommy to me:
'Maybe we should talk it out,
since we barely know your friend.
I mean, I want to know the shit he
plans on doing with my girlfriend?'

'I agree,' Luke said, slipping me a wink.

'Who cares how he plans to fuck us,'
Rachel fussed

'Yeah,' Carla chimed in
with a horny grin

'It don't matter to me,' Beth hummed,
'I'm as single as they come!'

Adam to everyone:
'Tom, if you don't mind,
but I want to fuck your Rachel
from behind.

Luke, if it's okay with you,
I want your Carla
to choke on my dick
'til her face turns blue.

And Beth, you have so much grace,
I want your cunt
to lap dance on my face.'

Adam to me:
'And as for you, dirty girl,
I want you stripped
and double-dipped;
your cunt fucked 'til it's loose
and filling with Luke's juice
while your ass is drilled hard
by Tommy's throbbing mass.'

Adam back to everyone:
'You think you all can handle that?'

'Gee,' Rachel blushed,
'You sure got that shit down.'

'Yeah,' Tommy frowned,
'You sure waste no time
fucking around.'

'So,' I said, 'what do you think,
Luke, Carla and Beth,
think you can all handle
Adam's requests?'

neither say a word
neither utter a peep
instead
we each take in a deep
consensual breath of satisfaction
before we all came
to the orgasmic conclusion
agreeing in unison:

'Let's just have us a cigarette
and call it a night!'

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1257

Thank You All

For the fantastic reading matter here...

this is a challenge to judge and that makes it awesome!

please check for final edits... it's closing soon!

Al

ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
Tyrant of Words
United Kingdom 28awards
Joined 10th Oct 2010
Forum Posts: 1347

Found it inspiring, thanks for thinking of the comp. LA

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
United States 34awards
Joined 8th June 2013
Forum Posts: 1625

Some stiff competition here.

HHMCameron
BetaWolfinVA
Fire of Insight
United States 4awards
Joined 17th Oct 2014
Forum Posts: 315

cannot wait to see who won

some rather good stuff...
wonder how my drivel compared...

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1257

Well that was incredibly hard to do...

All the entries in this one were excellent.

Congrats to ImperfectedStone

And HHMCameron and Savaja

Thanks for all the excellent entries guys!

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304

Great entries ... And big CONGRATS! to those chosen by our wonderful host, Alistair Plint.

Savaja
Dangerous Mind
United States 11awards
Joined 30th June 2014
Forum Posts: 186

Congratulations, Leaking Abattoir, on the win, luv! :-* Congratulations HHMCameron, luv, on second place! :-*

Alistair Plint, luv, thank you very much for the incredible contest and the marvelous surprise of being third place! :-* It was an honor to participate with all who entered; as HadesRising indicated, there was, indeed, stiff (and fabulous) competition. ;-*

ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
Tyrant of Words
United Kingdom 28awards
Joined 10th Oct 2010
Forum Posts: 1347

Thank you! It's an honour, competition was fierce here. Thank you again!

HHMCameron
BetaWolfinVA
Fire of Insight
United States 4awards
Joined 17th Oct 2014
Forum Posts: 315

which of my entries got runner up?

was a fun competition for me... and delt with something that matters to me... a lot

loved to read all the entries :)

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1257

I felt, this one did it. However having said that I think had you placed any of your entries here, you would have taken the place. But this definitely afforded the topic exceptionally well.

Thanks Man Mr Cameron, your involvement in this was magnificent!


HHMCameron said:
truth, injurious
to my mind, is that i have
been unfaithful to
the same woman for eighteen
years, some times marrying them
.
not desireous
of children she wants someone
to care for her only
ne'er having had childhood of
her own, her moms caretaker
.
saying she did not hate me
but could not restart friendship
.
she asked why i did not come
to the wake for her mother
.
saying i could not
take seeing her for the first
time nigh on ten years
that i could not hurt my wife
any more than asking had
.
she stopped stalking me
blocked from stalking her twitter
how many more years
is it kindness or cruelty
rejecting my devotion
.
i have betrayed my
lady of red-raven hair
the name behind my
daughters in nightly mantra
how much longer can i live
.
what a drag it is to not
truly "love the one you're with"

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http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/189040-unfaithful-thursday-11-december-2014/

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1257

Miss S

The same applied with you, both your entries would have taken the spot, but I loved this, I really did!

Al






Savaja said:More and more


Last night
Separated by miles
Separated by circumstance
Together in so much more

You
Lying in another woman's arms
Betwixt her thighs
Sampling her delights

I
Without you physically
Yet replete
Complete

Assured of your love

How odd life is
Fraught with twists
And funny little sideways
Meanderings

Our love
Fulfills me
On a level
           I never thought
                          Possible
           I never dreamed
Such total honesty
Complete communication
And trust
I love thee
           More and more
With each day that passes
I find
My soul
Complete
Replete
With you...

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1257

Right having completed saying the above...

I have to say that in any other comp... The stuff from Dev, Missy, Lobo, John and Miss Woman, would have won!
The competition in this one was fierce and such, I had to be hard ass about it.

I thank you all for everything you put in to this. We will most definitely do it again!

Love Al

<3

poet Anonymous

I think you made totally the right choice here out of such amazing entries. Congrats to all the winners!

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