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SWEET CANDY LOVE

poet Anonymous

Poetry Contest

Write a poem about your favorite candy and compare it to your lover or significant other.
Describe the ingredients, how it tastes, why you like it over other candies, nuts, honey, etc.  Use some vivid sensory imagination.  

Make this poem melt in our mouths!


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Two entries maximum.

Collaborations welcome (credit will be split).

Any length, any style.

Good Luck!

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Strider

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      http://www.hemmy.net/images/arts/chocsculp04.jpg


                   < i call you chocolate >

                        cause i love
       
                         to eat you

                           - - -




grandispoeta
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Strider said:Describe the ingredients, how it tastes, why you like it over other candies, nuts, honey, etc.  Use some vivid sensory imagination.  

Make this poem melt in our mouths!




Two entries maximum.

Collaborations welcome (credit will be split).

Any length, any style.

Good Luck!

Strider

poet Anonymous

Sweet Treat

Milkyway that's my name
once you taste
you'll never be the same
I melt in your mouth
you melt in my hands
Licking me off your lips
erect you will stand
A mouth watering treat
I'm oh so sweet
A savory flavor so divine
once you have tried
you will be mine
I will leave you now
wanting more
I see in your future
the candy store  


P.S.
I am very sad I do not see any Milkyway bars in your picture

poet Anonymous

milkyway said:Sweet Treat

Milkyway that's my name
once you taste
you'll never be the same
I melt in your mouth
you melt in my hands
Licking me off your lips
erect you will stand
A mouth watering treat
I'm oh so sweet
A savory flavor so divine
once you have tried
you will be mine
I will leave you now
wanting more
I see in your future
the candy store  


P.S.
I am very sad I do not see any Milkyway bars in your picture


Okay, I gave you a Milky Way Bar Milkyway!!!  Strider

poet Anonymous

Strider said:[quote-165403-milkyway]Sweet Treat

Milkyway that's my name
once you taste
you'll never be the same
I melt in your mouth
you melt in my hands
Licking me off your lips
erect you will stand
A mouth watering treat
I'm oh so sweet
A savory flavor so divine
once you have tried
you will be mine
I will leave you now
wanting more
I see in your future
the candy store  


P.S.
I am very sad I do not see any Milkyway bars in your picture


Okay, I gave you a Milky Way Bar Milkyway!!!  Strider
[/quote]

You are too kind Strider Thank You

AscensionES
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Like a drip

As it sticks to my finger-tips
the temptation grows too great.
Longing for a taste
of the sweet.. honey.
No longer restricted to me,
I choose to indulge..
licking my finger-tips
it's warm.. tastes of sugar
and everything else,
that tastes sweet
in this world.

poet Anonymous

YOU ARE MY GHIRARDELLI CHOCOLATE

You are my intense dark chocolate bar

All natural, luxuriously deep and velvety

Giving moments of timeless pleasure

I want to savor every kiss, every lick

You are a masterpiece of taste

A luscious filling erupts on my tongue

As I finish every last piece

You are yummy to the last drop.

poet Anonymous

milkyway said:Sweet Treat

Milkyway that's my name
once you taste
you'll never be the same
I melt in your mouth
you melt in my hands
Licking me off your lips
erect you will stand
A mouth watering treat
I'm oh so sweet
A savory flavor so divine
once you have tried
you will be mine
I will leave you now
wanting more
I see in your future
the candy store  


P.S.
I am very sad I do not see any Milkyway bars in your picture


This one brought a smile to my face and made me laugh! Lol. Very naughty, and very creatively worded also. Definitely not your sister's candy bar, eh?

minniejones
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Tic Tac, Ice Breaker, on bended knee my tongue Stride ur Hersey Snicker....

Aroused, as my Chico-Stick limb Twizzlers; My Kit-Kat pulsating, simultaneously ur Milky Way standing at attention in erotic bliss....

Juicy Fruit, Juicy Fruit, as our Butter-Fingers caress one another. Dentyne treasures, Extra Trident pleasures....

Moaning, as both Doves intertwine their Twix. His Skittles Crisp, her Musketeers Wafer....

Milk Chocolate dripping, Reese's cup tilting, M & M vivid, awaiting, stimulated Peanut Butter, ahhhh.... Erotic Starburt.

By; MinnieJ 01/28/2013  

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no nuts
just Carmel
and a soft nugget
covered in chocolate
so satisfying
you're my little secret
that goes straight to my hips
but hits my spot real good
and with each taste I savor you
filling me up until I'm perfectly satisfied
staying quiet as I bite and swallow you
my guilty pleasure
yes I do hide you
but that does not mean I love you less then I love him
we can eat you together
that would be the ultimate sin


poet Anonymous

Gg78 said:



no nuts
just Carmel
and a soft nugget
covered in chocolate
so satisfying
you're my little secret
that goes straight to my hips
but hits my spot real good
and with each taste I savor you
filling me up until I'm perfectly satisfied
staying quiet as I bite and swallow you
my guilty pleasure
yes I do hide you
but that does not mean I love you less then I love him
we can eat you together
that would be the ultimate sin



ohhhh Yaaaa, thats what I'm talkin about ;)

poet Anonymous

Lumina_Starsoul said:[quote-165403-milkyway]Sweet Treat

Milkyway that's my name
once you taste
you'll never be the same
I melt in your mouth
you melt in my hands
Licking me off your lips
erect you will stand
A mouth watering treat
I'm oh so sweet
A savory flavor so divine
once you have tried
you will be mine
I will leave you now
wanting more
I see in your future
the candy store  


P.S.
I am very sad I do not see any Milkyway bars in your picture


This one brought a smile to my face and made me laugh! Lol. Very naughty, and very creatively worded also. Definitely not your sister's candy bar, eh?[/quote]

smiles are always good

NimmieAmee
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Noir Absolu


Coming on so strong and bitter
most can't even handle the smallest taste of you
their faces screwed up in displeasure,
expecting sugary smoothness,
and instead encountering your unyielding
acerbic honesty.

But I just can't get enough;
I eat you whole,
and mix you with my coffee,
pour you over my everything,
savoring every last genuine,
acrid crumb.

You're hardly sweetened at all,
certainly not the one to turn to
for those who like sugar coating,
but for those like me
who not only handle
but relish overpowering
absinthian strength
you're a treat beyond measure.

My Lindt Excellence
ninety-nine percent
dark chocolate.

Noir Absolu <3


poet Anonymous

Will pick a winner soon, promise.

Strider

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