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Seven Deadly Sins

DrearyAvenue
Niko
Twisted Dreamer
United States 5awards
Joined 15th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 71

Poetry Contest

Which sin are you? Also, write a poem about your sin.
List of Sins
~ Greed
~ Lust
~ Gluttony
~ Sloth
~ Wrath
~ Envy
~ Pride

250 words max (give or take)
Old poems welcome
No Bold or Caps
Two entries per poem

Get creatie people. I look forward to reading your poems! :D

Atropabelladonna
Atro
Fire of Insight
United States 8awards
Joined 30th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 187

7 I want to feel



You can never be too close to me
I need you closer, much more than a hug
Cut my veins open them up and pour yourself in
I need you running all thru my body
Fill every need I have
Consume me with your love
Devoir me with your lust
A kindred love is what I need
I will fill every need you have
Commit all 7 sins inside me
Pride: yourself with your skills
Envy: make our love the best
Gluttony: your hunger for my sex
Greed: take everything that I am and share with no one
Sloth: relax and enjoy my soul
Lust: want my kiss to wet your lips
Wrath: stronghold my heart and crush it against yours
I don't think your still close enough
I must have your pulse, your heart, and your thoughts
PLEASE just  take me
Let me be yours.  
 
 

poet Anonymous

Atropabelladona....what a wonderful poem!
Very much enjoyed....
Kitty

poet Anonymous

I WANT MORE

hair like flaxen strands
of the finest silk
down to my waist
never been cut
anointed with perfume
run your hands though it

skin like rose petals
soft and scented
run your hands over all of me
feel the finest flowers
that grow on my skin

linger on my breasts
cup them, large and heavy
taste my nipples
see they tighten to your touch
knead them lightly
feel their solidity

let your hands wander downwards
feel the slight curve
of a woman’s abdomen
and as you are going down
play with my maidenhair
so fine and light
clean and perfumed
play with the coils
touch the pubis on
which it rests
throbbing, waiting for you

honey drips from my vagina
please taste it
clover honey
so sweet
one mouthful
you will want more

my long and lovely legs
deserve some attention
they will part for your desire
so delicately feel
the inside of my thighs

open me slowly
and touch the petals
of my labia and all
my flowers
then go in to the
mystery passage
magnificent red and round
take your fingers on a trip
up that slippery slope
softly gently feel
what yearns for penetration
by your gorgeous organ

lay me gently down
stretch me a little more
slide your penis in
slide it in some more
as i put my legs around
your back
because i want you to to move in
until i am fully filled

start me gently rocking
to natures gentle sounds
built into our brains
that make us so aroused
when you take me like a man
you make a woman out of me
so ride me as a man
as hard as you can
hurt me a bit
it is a pleasure
i desire

the tension in me is rising
i clutch and scratch your back
the beast in me wants
everything that you have to give
oh please go higher
please go in more
i am starting to plead
i am starting to moan
we come at the same time
but i want more.

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The sin of LUST

tn69
Strange Creature
Joined 4th Oct 2012
Forum Posts: 1

you have what i want
i want what you have
i choke on it,this envy

you have what i want
and i want what you have
i would choke on it

green eyes flash fire
at you
you have what i want
and i would happily choke on it

you have what i want
sate my envy
make me choke on it

Atropabelladonna
Atro
Fire of Insight
United States 8awards
Joined 30th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 187

somelikeithot said:I WANT MORE

hair like flaxen strands
of the finest silk
down to my waist
never been cut
anointed with perfume
run your hands though it

skin like rose petals
soft and scented
run your hands over all of me
feel the finest flowers
that grow on my skin

linger on my breasts
cup them, large and heavy
taste my nipples
see they tighten to your touch
knead them lightly
feel their solidity

let your hands wander downwards
feel the slight curve
of a woman’s abdomen
and as you are going down
play with my maidenhair
so fine and light
clean and perfumed
play with the coils
touch the pubis on
which it rests
throbbing, waiting for you

honey drips from my vagina
please taste it
clover honey
so sweet
one mouthful
you will want more

my long and lovely legs
deserve some attention
they will part for your desire
so delicately feel
the inside of my thighs

open me slowly
and touch the petals
of my labia and all
my flowers
then go in to the
mystery passage
magnificent red and round
take your fingers on a trip
up that slippery slope
softly gently feel
what yearns for penetration
by your gorgeous organ

lay me gently down
stretch me a little more
slide your penis in
slide it in some more
as i put my legs around
your back
because i want you to to move in
until i am fully filled

start me gently rocking
to natures gentle sounds
built into our brains
that make us so aroused
when you take me like a man
you make a woman out of me
so ride me as a man
as hard as you can
hurt me a bit
it is a pleasure
i desire

the tension in me is rising
i clutch and scratch your back
the beast in me wants
everything that you have to give
oh please go higher
please go in more
i am starting to plead
i am starting to moan
we come at the same time
but i want more.

**************************************

The sin of LUST

Wow kitty just Wow very breath taken by this art

DearPoetry
Twisted Dreamer
United States 2awards
Joined 5th May 2012
Forum Posts: 29

"Androphobia"

i was stitched lips and a flightless raven heart-
all sex and a contorting spine;
his own lips engraving 'kiss me's' on empty stars.

& between you and me: i feared his teeth,
& tongue, & honest organs-
with skin that begged, 'please, don't touch me.'

don't touch me.
don't fucking touch me.

i am not soft.

there is a war raging in my lungs,
screaming through the uncharted galaxies
of my wanderlust heartstrings.

i am not soft.

i am lust, & war, & envy—

i am sin,
       
        crooked, misshapen,
& the kind of prosetry yet to be proofread.

—but he wanted to claim my guarded ghost eyes
and crossed legs.

'just—let me hold you.'

his callused hands were cancer,

my still body, a clock.

DearPoetry
Twisted Dreamer
United States 2awards
Joined 5th May 2012
Forum Posts: 29

"Cemetery Cats"


The wolves were out that night—

and all of the hook laden quips
that we concocted
fell upon lips
like a hummingbird's whisper.
Then, they ignited into flames
like burning stars.

That should have been us:
beautiful ash, supernova romance
with tongue and fingers soaked in ink.

We always did find the taste of Heaven
stale, like coffee three days old.

And with that taste still lingering,
you were a walking oxymoron.
A sinner come to save
these easily swayed, glass bones
from smashing into oblivion.

I longed to taste that wild,
untamed energy beneath your skin.
Devour that dragons heart,
and tattoo love along the bruises
I begged you to leave on my arms.

[ The 7 deadly sins wrapped up
 into one nasty little Pisces. ]

You made me violent.

Names come and go,
but the race of these
rose petal hearts
wont easily be forgotten.--

As we spent our nights in graveyards,
with ghosts, in the company of
stone angels and cemetery cats-

Whispering our secrets to the dead.

clio13
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 30th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 86

Beast ass poem.

AlwaysCaliban
Caliban
Dangerous Mind
16awards
Joined 3rd June 2012
Forum Posts: 2408


Seven Deadly Musings

I'm insatiable, I want more, I need more.
Gotta have that crisp and persuasive green
The more I have, the more I can get
And getting whatever I want is what matters to me

On that note, I have an incredible desire,
More selfishness on that note, but I need it
Need to be pleased in between the sheets
taken advantage of, kissed, sucked, and fucked

I supposed afterwords I'll be rather hungry,
I'll take some of that money I have and go to a buffet
I love buffets, more than one plate of food is a must
I always eat until I could bust

Now that I'm nice and full, I feel kinda lazy
I think I'll go back home and snooze in my bed
With the TV blaring my favorites soaps
Ignoring that my puppy whines to be fed

That puppy is so annoying! I hate how he cries!
He makes me want to throw him outside  
And beat him until he screams
I'll teach him for interrupting my dreams

I can't stand all those people that seem to have it together
I wish that I could be organized like them
with perfect lives, and well behaved dogs
With dream jobs and all the money in the world to spend

But in the end I know it's just me, against them
They could never hope to be as smart as me, or relate to me
I'm quite spiteful in my superiority
Blinding myself to the way others see



For you, haha

J_J_Jay_Jr
Fire of Insight
United States 17awards
Joined 20th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 218

Lust

seven deadly sins
lust is mine
because of you

in the morning
at dawn
in the first light
silhouetted against the window
left leg slightly bent
hands gripping the curtains, about to open them
the sun rises between your legs

at breakfast
short robe, loosely tied
front hangs nearly open
off one shoulder
tan skin shows
legs up to there
glimpse of breast as coffee is poured

at noon
straight light brown hair down
tied around your forehead with a narrow ribbon
shirt tail tied in front
only the middle button buttoned
breasts pressed against fabric
jeans worn low and tight
waist button missing, zipper closed

in the evening
shirt knot untied
navel ring flashes
cleavage allows nipple glimpse
zipper part way down
thong shows above jeans
butt sways and wiggles when you walk
glance over your shoulder, wink

that night
ceiling light is off
bed side lamp is dim
bed is turned back
baby doll covers nothing
scent of roses
hand rests on the bed beside you
eyes meet mine
smile beckons

lust

DiamondDustMirror
The White Rabbit
Twisted Dreamer
Malaysia 8awards
Joined 12th June 2012
Forum Posts: 64

Sloth, my mistress,
So lifeless, so sad,
Leaving the world behind,
With cobwebs in your hair, they call you mad.

Is this what they have to say?
About tragedy in its most passive form,
That fell in on itself,
And had its little heart worn.

Her sadness is none of thine,
So what if she chose to drown in self pity,
She destroyeth only herself,
And dies a slow death with her eyes wide open.

Wrap me in thine arms, mistress,
Take me to a world where dreams are real,
Where my body will leave this world for eternity,
Deep below the earth, where it would be sealed.

A place where dreams dance above one's head,
Where struggle and time is none,
The world where you reign as queen,
And where a person's life is never done.






13
Dangerous Mind
India 17awards
Joined 25th June 2011
Forum Posts: 682

Entice or dread

its smarting embrace
enveloping pure desire
it is avarice absolute
it wants the world and more.

swallow ceaselessly
and rot in the bowels
a gluttonous reprise
till everything is lost.

slump to indolence
lackadaisical sloth
unambitious ambitions
idly kicking the air.

ravenous hunger
ravaging the soul
undying lust
consumes us whole.

the blind eye
searching prejudice
malevolence and treachery
incorporate this envy

this wrath is eternal
suppressed till broken
enclosed in thorns
bleeding hate into oceans.

and finally one
the root of all evil
looks down upon them, cold
through eyes burning with pride.

13
Dangerous Mind
India 17awards
Joined 25th June 2011
Forum Posts: 682

DiamondDustMirror said:Sloth, my mistress,
So lifeless, so sad,
Leaving the world behind,
With cobwebs in your hair, they call you mad.

Is this what they have to say?
About tragedy in its most passive form,
That fell in on itself,
And had its little heart worn.

Her sadness is none of thine,
So what if she chose to drown in self pity,
She destroyeth only herself,
And dies a slow death with her eyes wide open.

Wrap me in thine arms, mistress,
Take me to a world where dreams are real,
Where my body will leave this world for eternity,
Deep below the earth, where it would be sealed.

A place where dreams dance above one's head,
Where struggle and time is none,
The world where you reign as queen,
And where a person's life is never done.







very nice :)

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 17048

Our Wrath

Vengeance is ours
For the spit on our face
For the sneer for our  voice
For the prod on our  back
For the mock on our race
Vengeance we seek

For you who come upon our shore
For you who plant a stake
Upon our beach
And claim our land for yours
For you who imposed
Your laws over ours

Vengeance is ours
For the shame of a generation
Kowtowing to your forefathers
Those who held the striped flags
Those who held the orb
On one hand honey, on one, poison
Cowards and Traitors

Vengeance is ours
For those who took lives
On foreign land
For those who buried
Our beloved on sand
Of memories gone
Of visions of the fallen

Leave us within the shore
Of a land that time forgot
For nothing was there except
What was placed by the creator above
No diseases uncured by nature
No hate, just a circle of life
No dying with sores of greed

Our wrath we beseech from nature
Feel nature’s wrath now
Implored by man trodden
By other man that thought
themselves Gods
Of other man who pretended
Their creation sublime unsurpassed

O man whose iron and steel flies
You shall perish from
the cyclone from the sea
the storm from the skies
the waves that leap high
The mountains that spew fire...
Behold the wrath of mother nature!

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