Poetry competition CLOSED 26th May 2012 7:25pm
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kriticool
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HOW MUCH YOU THINK YOU KNOW A WOMAN?

RSena
Sena
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Poetry Contest

It could written like a poem, or just a comment. just try to describe what do you think that a womman really need to fall in love.
1) write a poem, or comment, about what a woman needs for her to fall in love what do you think is important. what the priorities.

2) no females poets are allowed To post, but if  any of you wants to post, is ok, the only thing it does not count as a competitor, and this is not discriminating ok, is just that females are the ones that votes here, just let us know, who do you think dicribes better what a womman really wants for her to fall in love.

3) no more than 2 entries.

4) females voting ONLY.

5) points from 1 to 5, just make a coment with the points you give, or just write the point. 1 to 5.

6) bi or lesb, are allowed, just say it at the end.

7) only female vote.

thanks lets have a litter fun.

Gg78
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Nice idea ..  Do two one for men

Indie
Miss Indie
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this kind of discriminates against the bi's and lesbians.

BleedingInferno219
Kristyn Ashley.
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No kidding.../: It wouldnt have been too much trouble to make one thread with just a '/' between the words "MAN" and "WOMAN".. or to have spelled it properly.. or to have turned off CAPS..

PhilipWardlow
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She walks on by in her tight skirt,
as my brown eyes drink her in and
I say to myself, so it begans.

She smiles and I smile back,
I say hello in a way so she knows that
she matters in this moment to me.

I’m in engaged in her form, her voice.
Her smell of cinnamon must surely
taste like her lips if I were to kiss them.

I make you laugh as I tell you you’re the
sweetest girl I‘ve ever met and that I might just have
to take you home and put you on my toast in the morning
instead of my blackberry jam.

Would I be to forward if I took you by the hand
and looked into your eyes and told you to trust
me with  your whole heart as I wiped
away a tear from the tale you told
me of your last man.

You see, I see you.
I get you, I see your quirks,
I see your moods, I see your passions
and I’m right there baby

Right next to you and I’m
not going anywhere

Now come over here
and let me show
what love is my
Dear.




I will also put this in my poem collection on here as well. Hope you guys liked it.

Philip

PhilipWardlow
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As a contestant (a straight man) I agree....so put something in if your bi or lesbian....I will vote on it..its only fair...I would love to see that perspective...

Niflheim
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I'm not sure I've ever met a WOMMAN. What are they like?

Gg78
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I give it a three on a scale of one to five. It's cute,  but it sounds player ish to me. I wouldn't believe it if I heard a stranger telling me it. But cute poem Phil!

haertshpdbxxxx
autumn
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nice poem Phil, liked the part about making her laugh  3

Devilish
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Niflheim said:I'm not sure I've ever met a WOMMAN. What are they like?
Lmfao..

IMAGO
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Niflheim said:I'm not sure I've ever met a WOMMAN. What are they like? would sure love to meet one too

freddwzz
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Womman are crazy
Once a month they rage
Mindfuck is their forte
Mainly the cocktease
Anal and possessive
Never reach orgasm with ease

NO OFFENCE INTENDED TROLOLO

RSena
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thanks phillip for your poem, very good. i really liked it.
thanks for the advice base on bi, or lesbian, i did the correction.
SENA

RSena
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thanks kristy for your correction. this is not my primary language, so you guys excuse me. but you can still vote?
SENA

chezz
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Sweet words and promises all devout
I can only guess at how your laid out

So many depths to a woman
Forever lost to man

Even if I study u forever
Phantom cavity's
recesses ,recessed within recesses
Understand u ? Never

There is  no picketed path
To a woman's heart

No play book
Special any wich way u look

I can only promise my heart
And hope its all it took



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