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something different

Posted: 23rd April 2012 8:16pm
Edited: 23rd April 2012 8:18pm
Imagining
Imagining
Glynis
Fire of Insight
United States 8awards
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Worship
Be in love with
Going weak in the knee
Having a thing about your smile
admire



I loved this it was fun!

Posted: 27th April 2012 8:27am
Indie
Indie
Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
Australia 38awards
Joined 3rd Sep 2011
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Imagine
Illusionary perfect
Abysmal edge ecstasy
Floating to glorious heights
Love

Posted: 27th April 2012 9:02am
Devilish
Devilish
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1744
Artist..
Being driven..
Expedition of speed..
For this we can achieve greatness..
Tasty..

Posted: 27th April 2012 3:52pm
kriticool
kriticool
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 596
http://www.electricadolescence.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/90s-genre-hip-hop.png

Old

Hip-hop;

Bass addicted scene

Bronx spirits…polyrhythmic lyrics.

Word.



Posted: 27th April 2012 6:34pm
lepperochan
lepperochan
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
Yemen 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14604
Some great reading on this comp. michelle,Goodest,Devlin impressive Glynis, great use of the three patterns.


Indie< Devilish,Kriticool(cool pic) great additions !




Posted: 27th April 2012 7:36pm
Whitewand6
Whitewand6
Dangerous Mind
India 16awards
Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 2251


Love-

evanescent-ethereal
fulfilling-flowing-sapping
never ever perfect

Unfair.



Posted: 27th April 2012 7:47pm
Jestalessa
Jestalessa
Dangerous Mind
Scotland 35awards
Joined 27th July 2010
Forum Posts: 2329
Form 1

Beginnings
in Gaia -
her womb incubating
life that sings of
stars


Form 2

Lingerie -

smooth, cut
rubbing, slipping, sweltering

Fingers follow

Lace


Form 3

Avast!
Alas, m' luv
The gulls be circlin' low
what sense they sense, Calypso knows...
Best duck.

Posted: 28th April 2012 6:24am
raorrick
raorrick
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 17th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 1590
Pattern #1

writing
emotional displays
tearing my insides
for everyone to see
me

Pattern #2

dark
dangerous, sinister
bloodcurdling, petrifying, chilling
euthanizing all who drink it’s lethal toxins
euphoria

Pattern #3

pleasure
patent leather
gratifying pressure
pull together, common measure
tether



I hope I did this right...it was fun!!!

Posted: 28th April 2012 10:11am
lepperochan
lepperochan
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
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Sumeet   great stuff Sinbad


Jesta     very clever indeed


Rachel   great stuff

Posted: 28th April 2012 10:45am
opheliac
opheliac
Dangerous Mind
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Forum Posts: 2122
Whitewand6 said:

Love-

evanescent-ethereal
fulfilling-flowing-sapping
never ever perfect

Unfair.




loved.

Posted: 28th April 2012 10:57am
Edited: 28th April 2012 10:59am
opheliac
opheliac
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 29th Aug 2009
Forum Posts: 2122
drops of
rain glaze upon
my window with no
end.


paddles of
rain formed on
the side, off the
road.

Posted: 28th April 2012 2:45pm
diddi
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704
Look
at me
I see you
open your violin eyes
please  

Posted: 28th April 2012 2:54pm
diddi
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704
2nd pattern

Life
normal , drab
wishing , dreaming ,wasting  
You can't always get what you want
existance.

Posted: 28th April 2012 3:02pm
Edited: 28th April 2012 3:04pm
diddi
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704
pattern 3

Lifting
endlessly , high
aiming for , forever
drifting towards the big moon
love

Posted: 28th April 2012 3:04pm
diddi
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704
pattern 3

Lifting
endlessly , high
aiming for , forever
drifting towards the big moon
love

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