Poetry competition CLOSED 3rd May 2012 3:18am
WINNER
Cinny
Cinny
RUNNERS-UP:
BleedingInferno219
and firedaughter
I caught you.
Happy Valentines Day
It was Valentine's day
I was going to let you love me in every way
So I went into your house
quiet as a mouse
such a huge surprise
what horror met my eyes
you were a tangled mess
intertwined with my best friend none the less
I loved you so much
I missed your loving touch
then I stopped my cries
because everyone of them were lies
I was so filled with hate
I quietly opened the gate
I thought this was going to be fun
So I pulled the trigger on my gun
You were still fucking in the bed
So I seized the opportunity and shot you both in the head
Then I saw all the blood
I finally realized what I had done
So all boys
do not treat your girls like toys
and
Happy Valentines day
It was Valentine's day
I was going to let you love me in every way
So I went into your house
quiet as a mouse
such a huge surprise
what horror met my eyes
you were a tangled mess
intertwined with my best friend none the less
I loved you so much
I missed your loving touch
then I stopped my cries
because everyone of them were lies
I was so filled with hate
I quietly opened the gate
I thought this was going to be fun
So I pulled the trigger on my gun
You were still fucking in the bed
So I seized the opportunity and shot you both in the head
Then I saw all the blood
I finally realized what I had done
So all boys
do not treat your girls like toys
and
Happy Valentines day
I see you
I see you, sister
holding his hands
laughing into his eyes
and he smiling down at you
I see you sister
kissing his pouty lips
simply licking them
as he held you tight
He was my fiance, sister
I dumped him
cos he gave me STD
made me sick for a month!
So good luck sister
have a nice life
don't gloat
he is all yours!
I see you, sister
holding his hands
laughing into his eyes
and he smiling down at you
I see you sister
kissing his pouty lips
simply licking them
as he held you tight
He was my fiance, sister
I dumped him
cos he gave me STD
made me sick for a month!
So good luck sister
have a nice life
don't gloat
he is all yours!
You think its okay?
That I found you this way?!
Entwined in bed,
With my BEST friend?!
HEll no, you are going to pay..
Lets see..I have a game to play..
I'll give you five seconds, down to the count..
And boy you better run, or hope I pass out..
Now lets see where you're hiding, cheating little boy..
Didn't you're mother ever tell you?! Girls are NOT toys!!
But of course..typical..you could give a fuck less..
You threw away all of what we had..to get a peek under that dress..
But now you will pay and no doubt..
To any other men out there..She will find out..
That I found you this way?!
Entwined in bed,
With my BEST friend?!
HEll no, you are going to pay..
Lets see..I have a game to play..
I'll give you five seconds, down to the count..
And boy you better run, or hope I pass out..
Now lets see where you're hiding, cheating little boy..
Didn't you're mother ever tell you?! Girls are NOT toys!!
But of course..typical..you could give a fuck less..
You threw away all of what we had..to get a peek under that dress..
But now you will pay and no doubt..
To any other men out there..She will find out..
She Wasn't Even Pretty.
Oh, I see you've made an addition to our humble abode.
Sit down, let's do the math... Yes, you're sleeping alone.
Boy, I pray she was worth it, all fifty dollars.
Funny I never knew, you had so many callers.
Get out of my house, stay away from our kids.
And when they inquire, I hope you explain this;
How mommy wasn't good enough, mommy couldn't please you.
Shut your mouth, I won't hear it, "Baby, I need you!"
You stained our white sheets, with that filthy whore.
I could burn you both at stakes, you don't deserve much more.
Better start walking, the car's in my name.
Sleeping at your mom's? Isn't that a shame?
Pack up your pillows, sweetie, better be quick.
My grip isn't great, and my Zippo might slip.
Oh, I see you've made an addition to our humble abode.
Sit down, let's do the math... Yes, you're sleeping alone.
Boy, I pray she was worth it, all fifty dollars.
Funny I never knew, you had so many callers.
Get out of my house, stay away from our kids.
And when they inquire, I hope you explain this;
How mommy wasn't good enough, mommy couldn't please you.
Shut your mouth, I won't hear it, "Baby, I need you!"
You stained our white sheets, with that filthy whore.
I could burn you both at stakes, you don't deserve much more.
Better start walking, the car's in my name.
Sleeping at your mom's? Isn't that a shame?
Pack up your pillows, sweetie, better be quick.
My grip isn't great, and my Zippo might slip.
Anonymous
I CAUGHT YOU CHEATING
I caught you cheating with my best friend
In our marriage bed...you both looked at me
I took off my clothes
Then there were three..........
I caught you cheating with my best friend
In our marriage bed...you both looked at me
I took off my clothes
Then there were three..........
Cheat;
I remember walking in,
her on my bed,
you indulging in her sin.
Her legs were open wide,
And your head lowered at the crease,
Your tongue moving inside.
I must admit I was sick to my stomach,
Before I grabbed my pistol out of my drawer,
Aimed it at your head and yelled, "Fuck it!"
I held you at gun point as the girl sobbed,
And I cried as well in sorrow,
For something of mine that had been robbed.
I shoved her out of my door,
Pushed her into my yard,
Watched her face hit the floor.
She's face down in the dirt,
And you're begging to be forgiven,
Begging to not be hurt.
I kick off the safety and aim for your penis,
Put a finger on the trigger and close one eye,
And commit a crime that is so heinous.
Yep, that's right, I removed your heat,
Next time maybe you better think,
Before you go on and cheat.
I remember walking in,
her on my bed,
you indulging in her sin.
Her legs were open wide,
And your head lowered at the crease,
Your tongue moving inside.
I must admit I was sick to my stomach,
Before I grabbed my pistol out of my drawer,
Aimed it at your head and yelled, "Fuck it!"
I held you at gun point as the girl sobbed,
And I cried as well in sorrow,
For something of mine that had been robbed.
I shoved her out of my door,
Pushed her into my yard,
Watched her face hit the floor.
She's face down in the dirt,
And you're begging to be forgiven,
Begging to not be hurt.
I kick off the safety and aim for your penis,
Put a finger on the trigger and close one eye,
And commit a crime that is so heinous.
Yep, that's right, I removed your heat,
Next time maybe you better think,
Before you go on and cheat.
Outside The Light )
You tore out the air
which supplied my heart
then you left me there
to slowly fall apart ,
saturday lies
even week nights
you'd look in my eyes
outside the light
Remembering , wandering
the back streets of our years
my everything , squandering
a reduction to tears .
You turned to cast
like a hollow thing
I burned to ash
in a molten ring
the kids did ask
for you to bring
yourself back home
to hope we'd cling .
Off the wall
so desperately
I did so fall ,
descent , gravity
down I went painfully
to cracked cement , a cavity
you walked , hell bent
away from me
how could you dent
our family
these babies were sent
from the heavens to me
how could you have spent
what comes for free .
You tore out the air
which supplied my heart
then you left me there
to slowly fall apart ,
saturday lies
even week nights
you'd look in my eyes
outside the light
Remembering , wandering
the back streets of our years
my everything , squandering
a reduction to tears .
You turned to cast
like a hollow thing
I burned to ash
in a molten ring
the kids did ask
for you to bring
yourself back home
to hope we'd cling .
Off the wall
so desperately
I did so fall ,
descent , gravity
down I went painfully
to cracked cement , a cavity
you walked , hell bent
away from me
how could you dent
our family
these babies were sent
from the heavens to me
how could you have spent
what comes for free .
Anonymous
I sat in Daytona, feeling bad for leaving.
I knew in those day's , all we did was argue.
I still felt so connected, yet madly neglected.
Sitting on a sun porch-calling your cell phone.
Laughter at dinner, none of it mine
Telling friends I'm okay, we're fine.
Margaritas by the pool, still trying to get hold of you.
Imagining you're hurt or worse
Calling hospitals, slurring my words.
A text from you at 9 O'Clock-upset I see
And again I'm lost.
Midnight brings a sudden shudder-
I love you wherever you are, I mutter.
2 am, try you again-your voice on the message
Is a comfort, I replay it-to hear you say it.
3 am, I send you an e-mail, wishing you would call
because now I don't feel well.
4 am, I am pacing the floor-
Hoping you're sleeping and can't hear the phone.
5 am, you should be up for work-
Yet still no answer, still no word.
6 am, and I'm changing my ticket
dealing with the Airport- never felt sicker
7 am, ready and packed, eyes sore from crying
I just can't relax
8 am, you answer the phone
As it turns out, you were at home.
8:04 I heard her say-
Is your wife coming home today?
I knew in those day's , all we did was argue.
I still felt so connected, yet madly neglected.
Sitting on a sun porch-calling your cell phone.
Laughter at dinner, none of it mine
Telling friends I'm okay, we're fine.
Margaritas by the pool, still trying to get hold of you.
Imagining you're hurt or worse
Calling hospitals, slurring my words.
A text from you at 9 O'Clock-upset I see
And again I'm lost.
Midnight brings a sudden shudder-
I love you wherever you are, I mutter.
2 am, try you again-your voice on the message
Is a comfort, I replay it-to hear you say it.
3 am, I send you an e-mail, wishing you would call
because now I don't feel well.
4 am, I am pacing the floor-
Hoping you're sleeping and can't hear the phone.
5 am, you should be up for work-
Yet still no answer, still no word.
6 am, and I'm changing my ticket
dealing with the Airport- never felt sicker
7 am, ready and packed, eyes sore from crying
I just can't relax
8 am, you answer the phone
As it turns out, you were at home.
8:04 I heard her say-
Is your wife coming home today?
"Street Walker"
I Knew it
Deep down in my heart that he would cheat
But how could he
With a street walker?
Yes I caught her
On her knees
Servicing
The one I Thought was my man...
Don't know what made me
Want to follow him that night
And now I'll never be able to forget the sight
Of his head going back
The look of ecstasy
Plastered on his face...
Street Walker
Was working for her money...
How can I possibly compete with that?
Woman wasn't taking no break
In & out
in & out
in & out
Of her mouth
His dick would appear
Then disappear
ALL of it...
It's really no wonder
Why he was itching
To get away from me...
Street Walker
Is dick sucking
For $20 in the alley...
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written by Tara A. aka LL
I Knew it
Deep down in my heart that he would cheat
But how could he
With a street walker?
Yes I caught her
On her knees
Servicing
The one I Thought was my man...
Don't know what made me
Want to follow him that night
And now I'll never be able to forget the sight
Of his head going back
The look of ecstasy
Plastered on his face...
Street Walker
Was working for her money...
How can I possibly compete with that?
Woman wasn't taking no break
In & out
in & out
in & out
Of her mouth
His dick would appear
Then disappear
ALL of it...
It's really no wonder
Why he was itching
To get away from me...
Street Walker
Is dick sucking
For $20 in the alley...
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written by Tara A. aka LL
Anonymous
As much as I hate plugging my own poetry :P
"An Antagonized, Untitled, Therapeutic Poem."
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9356-an-antagonized-untitled-therapeutic/
Written in the rage of finding out the guy I was with was also trying to get
into my cousin's pants. And then when he hid his 'other' relationship from me
for a good few months. Safe to say I was pretty raging when I wrote it haha!
"An Antagonized, Untitled, Therapeutic Poem."
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9356-an-antagonized-untitled-therapeutic/
Written in the rage of finding out the guy I was with was also trying to get
into my cousin's pants. And then when he hid his 'other' relationship from me
for a good few months. Safe to say I was pretty raging when I wrote it haha!
Grace said:I see you
I see you, sister
holding his hands
laughing into his eyes
and he smiling down at you
I see you sister
kissing his pouty lips
simply licking them
as he held you tight
He was my fiance, sister
I dumped him
cos he gave me STD
made me sick for a month!
So good luck sister
have a nice life
don't gloat
he is all yours!
My sister did the same thing...
I see you, sister
holding his hands
laughing into his eyes
and he smiling down at you
I see you sister
kissing his pouty lips
simply licking them
as he held you tight
He was my fiance, sister
I dumped him
cos he gave me STD
made me sick for a month!
So good luck sister
have a nice life
don't gloat
he is all yours!
My sister did the same thing...
I caught you
With your hand in her pants..
What do you have to say?
Oh wait! You can't!
I have your arms pinned down..
And your mouth taped shut..
I make the rules,
You had better listen up..
Look me in the eyes..
And tell me it's not true!
Fuck you! I know that's a lie
She fed to you!
Don't you dare call me babe..
You're a fucking liar!
Hell, I wouldn't piss on you
If you were on fire!
You know how much you hurt me..
You knew how much I cared!
Highlighting PAST TENSE..
Because I caught you there!
I hope you get herpes..
Or some incurable disease..
Because you couldn't help yourself
To slide between her knees..
With your hand in her pants..
What do you have to say?
Oh wait! You can't!
I have your arms pinned down..
And your mouth taped shut..
I make the rules,
You had better listen up..
Look me in the eyes..
And tell me it's not true!
Fuck you! I know that's a lie
She fed to you!
Don't you dare call me babe..
You're a fucking liar!
Hell, I wouldn't piss on you
If you were on fire!
You know how much you hurt me..
You knew how much I cared!
Highlighting PAST TENSE..
Because I caught you there!
I hope you get herpes..
Or some incurable disease..
Because you couldn't help yourself
To slide between her knees..
You loved me
I love you
You love me
We're as happy as can be
Until you went and found someone new
Why cant you stay and love me too?
I love you
You loved me
We're not what we used to be
Then you went and found someone new
Why cant you stay and love me too?
I love you
You loved me
We were gonna make room for three
But then you went and found someone new
I can't say your son loves you too.
I love you
You loved me
We're a broken family
No father around to raise our kid
If I didnt do it, then what did?
I love you
You love me
We're as happy as can be
Until you went and found someone new
Why cant you stay and love me too?
I love you
You loved me
We're not what we used to be
Then you went and found someone new
Why cant you stay and love me too?
I love you
You loved me
We were gonna make room for three
But then you went and found someone new
I can't say your son loves you too.
I love you
You loved me
We're a broken family
No father around to raise our kid
If I didnt do it, then what did?
With My Own Eyes:
Written by:Phoenix Firebyrd
Your Lies..burned hot against my
Pupils Like Fire white light
searing the image of you ...
and my best friend..
In my bed into my mind
Eternaly...as
Internaly a brew of such anger & Pain
Threatend to well up inside me
With such force
That I would be forced to
Externaly...Extinguish
The both of you..
A rotten little crew
Of Infidels...
As I stand reeling
Wishing that I was peeling
My Corneas back that I might
Reverse what I've seen...
I mean...devastation
Was all I was feeling
And all I can remember you doing was humming
The whole day before
As you bought new bedsheets from the store
and cleaned...you cleaned our house
For the 1st time in your life
You cleaned for your Lover....
Not your wife...
Now this...
torrid sorrdid sight
Before me complete
with my bed as it squeeked
Heaving your sinful bodies
On brandnew ...Bedsheets
My soul Now heavy...
As my thoughts shout..
"How could This Be"
With my Own eyes
I witnessed the end of "we"
Written by:Phoenix Firebyrd
Your Lies..burned hot against my
Pupils Like Fire white light
searing the image of you ...
and my best friend..
In my bed into my mind
Eternaly...as
Internaly a brew of such anger & Pain
Threatend to well up inside me
With such force
That I would be forced to
Externaly...Extinguish
The both of you..
A rotten little crew
Of Infidels...
As I stand reeling
Wishing that I was peeling
My Corneas back that I might
Reverse what I've seen...
I mean...devastation
Was all I was feeling
And all I can remember you doing was humming
The whole day before
As you bought new bedsheets from the store
and cleaned...you cleaned our house
For the 1st time in your life
You cleaned for your Lover....
Not your wife...
Now this...
torrid sorrdid sight
Before me complete
with my bed as it squeeked
Heaving your sinful bodies
On brandnew ...Bedsheets
My soul Now heavy...
As my thoughts shout..
"How could This Be"
With my Own eyes
I witnessed the end of "we"
