What does freedom mean to you?
JackyIdkk
J. Payan
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J. Payan
Twisted Dreamer
3
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Poetry Contest Description
Write what freedom means to you. Describe the feeling or the way freedom looks to you, What does your freedom have that makes it freedom? Your poem could be about anything and could be any type(Catagory) it just has to somehow relate to Freedom
2weeks
Reposts are allowed
No more than TWO POEMS per poet
Good luck
sopheraephedra
Joined 10th Oct 2011
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Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 5
Freedom to me is being rid of the past, all hurts, scars, rising above any obstacle, loving yourself and staying positive about life! We are only free when we let go of all attachments to money,relationships, and our egos. :)
LyssaMassacre
Lyssa Faith
Joined 29th Oct 2009
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Lyssa Faith
Lost Thinker
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To me, freedom is like a release. It's being set free from all bondage and transgressions. This word doesn't just apply to jail or our country; it also means internal and social. Freedom to be who you are is a major part of this entire concept. It helps a person gain self worth, and be free to love themselves, thus having potential to love others. Inspiring their partner in the same way. Freedom brings along confidence and help, acting as a cycle that will hopefully one day, solve the petty problems of humanity.
rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
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Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
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[font=Courier New][size=2]
< freedom >
FREEDOM IS HAVING MY FUCKING
DELETE BUTTON
BACK!
- -
(just dead serious joking, real entry to follow soon)
< freedom >
FREEDOM IS HAVING MY FUCKING
DELETE BUTTON
BACK!
- -
(just dead serious joking, real entry to follow soon)
siphondarkness
Levi
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Levi
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 6th Apr 2011 Forum Posts: 2026
Freedom...from the binds
inside of my mind
The lunatic is subdued
I am back to
Rebuild the life he destroyed
and sent me into the void
I am back from the brink
where all I could do was think
I have plan my escape well
and that's my story to tell
inside of my mind
The lunatic is subdued
I am back to
Rebuild the life he destroyed
and sent me into the void
I am back from the brink
where all I could do was think
I have plan my escape well
and that's my story to tell
MexicanTaco
Joined 8th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 23
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 23
Freedom is a fallacy
Which no one will ever reach actually
If such a thing would exist
My thoughts of freedom would be
Not being bound by chains
Free from restraint
And being fully awake
Alert to do anything I pleased
Chased and got to any dreams I seized
To be the full puzzle instead of a piece
To be complete, to say the very least
This is what freedom is to me.
Which no one will ever reach actually
If such a thing would exist
My thoughts of freedom would be
Not being bound by chains
Free from restraint
And being fully awake
Alert to do anything I pleased
Chased and got to any dreams I seized
To be the full puzzle instead of a piece
To be complete, to say the very least
This is what freedom is to me.
rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
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Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 4th Dec 2009 Forum Posts: 4409
[font=Courier New][size=2] actual entry:
< pieces of freedom >
"finally, on the ship,
finally, there was hope"
my grandmother tells me
today
pieces of a rain day
pieces of her freedom remembered
pieces of a wet day
not
a crystal sunny day
that traps us
in its joy
no
the freedom of gray
of wet
of shelter
history
is washed
remembered
cleansed
the ship
the wash of waves
the fresh new god
the feel of freedom
grandmother
her new dress
her new shoes
her new hat
she says
"my hope"
"my flight"
"my journey"
my grandmother
free
she tells me
free
- - -
< pieces of freedom >
"finally, on the ship,
finally, there was hope"
my grandmother tells me
today
pieces of a rain day
pieces of her freedom remembered
pieces of a wet day
not
a crystal sunny day
that traps us
in its joy
no
the freedom of gray
of wet
of shelter
history
is washed
remembered
cleansed
the ship
the wash of waves
the fresh new god
the feel of freedom
grandmother
her new dress
her new shoes
her new hat
she says
"my hope"
"my flight"
"my journey"
my grandmother
free
she tells me
free
- - -
Anonymous
Freedom is a place
I will wait
for the rest of my life.
Freedom is a lonely knife.
Freedom is where I was
ten seconds ago
now I'm trapped in this
stuck in this future-thing
everyone keeps mumbling about.
We sang a song for Freedom
under porch-light
one night
and I hope the neighbors heard.
Freedom is where I saw you last.
It's the place we will wait
our whole lives.
Ain't it lovely?
I will wait
for the rest of my life.
Freedom is a lonely knife.
Freedom is where I was
ten seconds ago
now I'm trapped in this
stuck in this future-thing
everyone keeps mumbling about.
We sang a song for Freedom
under porch-light
one night
and I hope the neighbors heard.
Freedom is where I saw you last.
It's the place we will wait
our whole lives.
Ain't it lovely?
Anonymous
[font=Verdana]Freedom
freedom is cash in your account
the ability to buy a steak dinner
a movie ticket with popcorn
bus fare there and home
all without having to work
freedom is cash in your account
the ability to buy a steak dinner
a movie ticket with popcorn
bus fare there and home
all without having to work
Anonymous
Clang.
When I walk,
I will smell real air
feel real grass
on my bare feet.
And a smile
will stretch
the width
of my ears.
When I hear
that resounding
metallic
crashing sound
as
the prison
gates
close
behind me.
I'll know I am finally free.
When I walk,
I will smell real air
feel real grass
on my bare feet.
And a smile
will stretch
the width
of my ears.
When I hear
that resounding
metallic
crashing sound
as
the prison
gates
close
behind me.
I'll know I am finally free.
goodest
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011Forum Posts: 3007
"Freedom"
by: Eric L. Boddie
Similar to the way that Love is a one way street
Freedom is not exactly what the majority may think
Because just as Love asks for nothing in return
Freedom resides entirely on irony's brink
It is ironic that I speak of Love in regards to being free
But freedom has a cost, and Love is the fee
And though there may be some who will surely disagree
It becomes evidently clear if you think of it logically
The body can be confined, but the heart and mind are the key
Only they can bring enlightenment, thus no enslavement for thee
Just as knowledge provided the power to bring an end to black slavery
It also took white compassion for the sake of Black Americans like me
So what exactly then does freedom really mean
And why can't it be accomplished without the presence of Love
Freedom is an experience that can only be known by the Soul
Because the heart feels pain, the mind feels stress, the body feels strain...and that's not free or anything thereof....
by: Eric L. Boddie
Similar to the way that Love is a one way street
Freedom is not exactly what the majority may think
Because just as Love asks for nothing in return
Freedom resides entirely on irony's brink
It is ironic that I speak of Love in regards to being free
But freedom has a cost, and Love is the fee
And though there may be some who will surely disagree
It becomes evidently clear if you think of it logically
The body can be confined, but the heart and mind are the key
Only they can bring enlightenment, thus no enslavement for thee
Just as knowledge provided the power to bring an end to black slavery
It also took white compassion for the sake of Black Americans like me
So what exactly then does freedom really mean
And why can't it be accomplished without the presence of Love
Freedom is an experience that can only be known by the Soul
Because the heart feels pain, the mind feels stress, the body feels strain...and that's not free or anything thereof....
Anonymous
Sitting here alone,
heart hurting, dark and cold
I need to find myself, and find where I belong
I see the sun setting in the distance,
So magnificent and bold
Mesmorised by its beauty
Its gravitation is so strong
I realise this is my place
the place I want to be
No more eerie shadows
Oh darkness set me free.
I find my strength inside me,
rise confident to my feet
No shallow heartless person,
can stop me from being me
I must hurry through the shadows
The sun is setting fast,
but thats where I need to go now,
How will I find my way?
I look up to the heavens,
maybe I should pray
But then I see the twinkle,
I see my guiding lights
My southern cross before me
Brings hope to my bloodshot eyes
I start to see my way through,
the darkness that held me back
Nothings gonna stop me now,
I know I am on track.
I turn around and look at,
all the pain I leave behind
I breath out my exhaustion,
to feel a better life.
The challenges that I face now,
are in myself you see
I need to be more positive,
And have more faith in me.
Im getting even closer,
with every step I take
I see a light house beaming,
light calling to my heart
Atop the sheerest hill top,
waves crashing down below
I am almost at the end of,
the beginning of my new life
Where someone will be proud of,
the love I have inside
No person now can judge me,
they no longer have the chance
Cos I have turned my life around
I will smile and laugh and dance.
I reach my destination
I sit down on the edge
Yesterday I would have plundered,
painfully to my death.
But today I sit a look at,
the beautiful sparkling stars
I thank the angels around me
for keeping me warm and safe
As I see the roundest moon,
shimmering on the water below
How lucky I am today,
Im worth it, now I know!
For the freedom I was seeking
Is exactly what set me free!
heart hurting, dark and cold
I need to find myself, and find where I belong
I see the sun setting in the distance,
So magnificent and bold
Mesmorised by its beauty
Its gravitation is so strong
I realise this is my place
the place I want to be
No more eerie shadows
Oh darkness set me free.
I find my strength inside me,
rise confident to my feet
No shallow heartless person,
can stop me from being me
I must hurry through the shadows
The sun is setting fast,
but thats where I need to go now,
How will I find my way?
I look up to the heavens,
maybe I should pray
But then I see the twinkle,
I see my guiding lights
My southern cross before me
Brings hope to my bloodshot eyes
I start to see my way through,
the darkness that held me back
Nothings gonna stop me now,
I know I am on track.
I turn around and look at,
all the pain I leave behind
I breath out my exhaustion,
to feel a better life.
The challenges that I face now,
are in myself you see
I need to be more positive,
And have more faith in me.
Im getting even closer,
with every step I take
I see a light house beaming,
light calling to my heart
Atop the sheerest hill top,
waves crashing down below
I am almost at the end of,
the beginning of my new life
Where someone will be proud of,
the love I have inside
No person now can judge me,
they no longer have the chance
Cos I have turned my life around
I will smile and laugh and dance.
I reach my destination
I sit down on the edge
Yesterday I would have plundered,
painfully to my death.
But today I sit a look at,
the beautiful sparkling stars
I thank the angels around me
for keeping me warm and safe
As I see the roundest moon,
shimmering on the water below
How lucky I am today,
Im worth it, now I know!
For the freedom I was seeking
Is exactly what set me free!
TheDreamDancer
Joined 17th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 40
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 40
Freedom is being able to love openly, without being judged,
to be able to smile when i come home, without having to lie,
to be able to make her happy, without leaving until she's satisfied...
Freedom is my dream to accomplish before i die, i refuse to till then
the ghosts of the past have already tried to
but look i'm gonna win
to be able to smile when i come home, without having to lie,
to be able to make her happy, without leaving until she's satisfied...
Freedom is my dream to accomplish before i die, i refuse to till then
the ghosts of the past have already tried to
but look i'm gonna win
lexfinesse
Joined 30th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 12
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 12
running than abruptly stopping
only to repeat the action
laughing and crying without a set time
loving and hating creating destroying
compassion ignorance...than knowing
only to repeat the action....to repeat the action
freedom isn't derived from legislation
nor is it a divinely born
i think its tearing away from the norm
and then repeating the action....its right there
when you repeat the action of being different
only to repeat the action
laughing and crying without a set time
loving and hating creating destroying
compassion ignorance...than knowing
only to repeat the action....to repeat the action
freedom isn't derived from legislation
nor is it a divinely born
i think its tearing away from the norm
and then repeating the action....its right there
when you repeat the action of being different
TheAngelWhoFell
Forum Posts: 177
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 13th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 177
Im sorry i dont have a poem,
freedom is being able to love,
with out being judged,
To be happy,
with me.
To smile feely.
Letting the words flow,
right out the window,
letting them splatter and show.
To cry and and let go.
What im saying,
is freedom is shining,
inside,
my heart.
and hopefully yours glows
freedom is being able to love,
with out being judged,
To be happy,
with me.
To smile feely.
Letting the words flow,
right out the window,
letting them splatter and show.
To cry and and let go.
What im saying,
is freedom is shining,
inside,
my heart.
and hopefully yours glows