Poetry competition CLOSED 15th November 2024 4:41am
WINNER
Naajir
Naajir
Beer or Alcohol Senryu/Haiku
Poetry Contest Description
Write a senryu/haiku poem based on beer or alcohol
Write a senryu/haiku poem about beer or alcohol. It can be about the aesthetics of the involvement in lifestyle in general, simply about pouring up a drink, perhaps celebratory tradition or experience involving alcohol, or about inebriation and/or intoxication. You can also write on the topic of alcoholism/addiction. It must be 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the 2nd line, and 5 syllables in the 3rd line. Here is a simple example:
Over-Flowing:
Another cold beer
Pouring inside of the glass
Cascade outwardly
This poem could be taken as pouring up a literal glass of beer, and the carbonation overflowing to the outside of the glass. If you examine the particular language, it could also be about how emotion flows when drinking, in an "outward cascade", like opening up, and talking, and being inebriated, etc. Idk, maybe it could be worded better, but I think this suffices as an example.
Try to be creative and capture the essence of alcoholic consumption in a well-spirited manner. Perhaps an ode to drinking with friends, or even a battle with addiction. Limit one entry per person.
Over-Flowing:
Another cold beer
Pouring inside of the glass
Cascade outwardly
This poem could be taken as pouring up a literal glass of beer, and the carbonation overflowing to the outside of the glass. If you examine the particular language, it could also be about how emotion flows when drinking, in an "outward cascade", like opening up, and talking, and being inebriated, etc. Idk, maybe it could be worded better, but I think this suffices as an example.
Try to be creative and capture the essence of alcoholic consumption in a well-spirited manner. Perhaps an ode to drinking with friends, or even a battle with addiction. Limit one entry per person.
What's the occasion?...
Lost your job? Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
Written by Naajir
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Beer
Drink the bottle down
Feel the warming numbing rush
Diluting the soul
Written by James_A_Knight
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Liquid Echoes Of Despair
chasing shadows lost
inside an empty shot glass
whiskey and false hope
inside an empty shot glass
whiskey and false hope
Written by AspergerPoet56
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Bar Room
Scent of alcohol
Mingled with the smell of smoke
Lingered in the air
Mingled with the smell of smoke
Lingered in the air
Written by Summerrain75
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The Ancient Cheer Song...
Raise a glass of Ale
then drink, to this ancient cheer,
(chorus) raise a glass...
then drink, to this ancient cheer,
(chorus) raise a glass...
Written by Rew
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Drunkard
Depth of lost wisdom
Anonymity’s schism
Splayed in glass prison
Written by Everavalon
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In the Glass
Temptation breakdown
Warmth melts from rock-sold ice cube
Diluted disillusion
Warmth melts from rock-sold ice cube
Diluted disillusion
Written by fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
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When One Gets Drunk At A Bar
Josh gulped a few beers.
He saw Kate's dress sliding off.
Josh woke up naked.
He saw Kate's dress sliding off.
Josh woke up naked.
Written by Green_Arrow
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Overflowing
Bubbles foam and rise
Champers corks, they fill the skies
Bride and Groom, betrothed.
Champers corks, they fill the skies
Bride and Groom, betrothed.
Written by slipalong
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cure for cure
lightly fried proteins
soak up last nights chardonnay
charged shenanigans
soak up last nights chardonnay
charged shenanigans
Written by Detritus
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The Monks Honey Mead
Golden nectar flows,
sacred honey, vats of sun,
blessed in barrels deep.
Echoed praise dance halls
in quietness, we wait for grace,
mead poured like pure sunshine.
Brewed like prayer in cup,
ancient hands the humble craft,
joy steeped in amber rain.
sacred honey, vats of sun,
blessed in barrels deep.
Echoed praise dance halls
in quietness, we wait for grace,
mead poured like pure sunshine.
Brewed like prayer in cup,
ancient hands the humble craft,
joy steeped in amber rain.
Written by MalcolmG
(Malcolm Gladwin)
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