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AfterSexDilemma
Fire of Insight
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Capricorn

1+6=7
7 is God.
16 is Hell.
I'm on fire.  
Extinguishing the pyre.
With a name, 5,  
Freedom of self.
 
Escape reality.  
Take on, duality.
Achieve the manor,
Of wisdom and filth.
A snake in your garden.
Truths that harden,
A heart of energy.
A world that was built.
 
Always on fire.
Out of the ashes.  
Higher and higher.
No cycle can break me.
I'm out of this world.
Life's a satire.
Too much work, and no hires.
Too much weight on my shoulders,
Just for a girl.
 
My moods keep on cycling.  
Melancholy; deciphering.  
Am I just here to make you smile?
Just a joke; I'm inviting.
No bad karma I'm denying.
Just riding the wave,
Of a tilt-a-whirl.
 
Alone at the top.
Horns to stab those who loft.
Fins to swim to my sanctuary.  
Inside a gift shop.
That I have to mop.
Because God gave too much props,
To Mother Mary.
 
Another Pan in the Face.
Those who don't undertake.
Those who laugh at what they don't understand.  
Are on their knees,  
Begging me for eternity.
I'm the God,
Reaching towards their hand.  
 
 
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Ahavati
Tams
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AfterSexDilemma, thanks for an emboldened Cardinal submission!

Look at all this masculine, cardinal energy amassed! Not surprising!

Dualities:

Feminine: 3
Masculine: 7

Quality:

Cardinal: 7
Fixed: 1
Mutable: 2

Element

Fire: 2
Earth: 2
Air: 4
Water: 2

I love how firmly the 'fixed' are standing! Keep'em coming!

AfterSexDilemma
Fire of Insight
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Thank you for the acknowledgement!

Ahavati
Tams
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AfterSexDilemma said:Thank you for the acknowledgement!

You're welcome! It's acknowledge-worthy!


Ahavati
Tams
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Scorpius

What is to give light must endure burning.  
~ Victor Frankl
 
   
Poems like this are thought dangerous  
born of blood, bone  
 and scorched-feathers  
 of smoldering ash    
   stirring the heat  
   striking the sweat    
before spreading wings  
to ascend    
   
Dig up an underworld  
  of hidden truth  
  beneath the rock of its heart  
because poems    
like this are thought dangerous  
their eyes turning    
  to the sun  
surrendering    
  earthen words    
weathered by war  
  following the flight-path  
  of birds  
   
There is a poisonous telson  
attached to our body  
  howling  
  for release  
because poems  
like this are thought dangerous    
born of a deep-water womb  
  they did not create    
but chose nonetheless    
   
Cinder and ocean-drops  
glisten together  
  upon a hard-shelled back  
a shatter of a soul thought dangerous  
  crawling into the dessert    
meeting the cactus  
whose sting burns    
  as its own    
but petaled bloom  
  submits to the sun    
   
We are the in-between  
neither cardinal nor mutable    
  but fixed passion and desire  
an arachnid life  
destined for the pyre  
   
You may think  
a Poem like this is dangerous  
when the only true taste  
of freedom    
is to fearlessly walk    
through a probing portal  
 of burning flesh to reincarnate  
   a phoenix    
   
but any bloom  
will turn back its face  
          only once    
to confirm  
   
No. . .it's truth  
   
before being burned    
at its own stake by the sun  
  reincarnating from a seed  
  it birthed    
              
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This is not an entry! I couldn't stand "fixed" being so obstinately fixed, nor the feminine getting walked on!


Dualities:

Feminine: 4
Masculine: 7

Quality:

Cardinal: 7
Fixed: 2
Mutable: 2

Element

Fire: 2
Earth: 2
Air: 4
Water: 3

Keep'em coming!

ThePalestRider
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"Scorpio"

Red November of Chrysanthemum born

Heralded under desire's thorns

Seeking the chyrsalis tear

Ascendency of the suzerain's lair

Of water bewitching and transfixed

Sign above blazing and fixed

Binaural creation keys

Sacred sounds that aim to please

Stingers path where dark secrets breathe

Of what shall fate weave?

Eighth house reigns with silent might

A symbol shadowed in its own light

AfterSexDilemma
Fire of Insight
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Thank you! I was born on the 16th and I have 6 letters in all 3 of my names. So I love this kind of stuff!

Ahavati
Tams
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ThePalestRider, thanks for such a 'watery & fixed' submission! The feminine is rising!

Dualities:

Feminine: 4
Masculine: 7

Quality:

Cardinal: 7
Fixed: 3
Mutable: 2

Element

Fire: 2
Earth: 2
Air: 4
Water: 3

Keep'em coming!

Ahavati
Tams
Tyrant of Words
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AfterSexDilemma said:Thank you! I was born on the 16th and I have 6 letters in all 3 of my names. So I love this kind of stuff!

666 is one of the most misunderstood and feared numbers in history. But anyone with any knowledge of Greek or Latin ( or both ) would understand it was a coded message.

It's actually considered lucky in Asian culture, and as an Angel number signifies a spiritual journey. You should look into numerology if such interests you.

AfterSexDilemma
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Numerology was the beginning of my poem lol 6 comes from a symbol used before letters were invented. The 3 crosses or the holy trinity.  

Ahavati
Tams
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AfterSexDilemma said:Numerology was the beginning of my poem lol 6 comes from a symbol used before letters were invented. The 3 crosses or the holy trinity.  

Yes, I noticed your focus on numbers. I meant like study/teach if it's your passion, because passionate teachers who love their craft are needed in today's times.

AfterSexDilemma
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I let karma do that. That's what it's there for. xD

Liziantus-Marantus
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Ahavati
Tams
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Hi, Liziantus-Marantus. Thank you for your entry; however, I don't believe that it qualifies for this competition. The guidelines require you write a poem about your astrological sun-sign. This is a lovely poem, but it's more observatory regarding the stars than a sun-sign.

You're more than welcome to replace it with one that meets the guidelines.


Duice
Twisted Dreamer
Jamaica
Joined 16th June 2024
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Aries

Spin the astrology wheel              
see where the compass points            
I’m not the star of one thing            
more of a mixed bag of several joints            
Django unchained born Aries off the cuffs            
I missed the cusp by four days            
Known as passionate and emotional              
I’ll knock you down in 4 ways            
Or albeit Ram in 4 waves            
calculative known to rock a few ships            
A battle plan in mastered hands              
is how fore horns stay equip            
Headstrong response quick as a whip              
integrity towards weak to protect            
Of all celestial signs first              
to gain respect no chin checks            
Only cache on my books              
tightly slid in bound shoulders            
Crowned passionate with my stinger              
clawed folding Scorpio over            
Touch deep in poem I’m a grower              
then afterwards a meat show-er            
King in small circle of goers              
in periods of dominance I belong            
Else repeated to submission              
I’ll speak the point till it's gone            
Aggressive clash of the Titans              
mistake the pen when I’m writing              
Script in infamy those reactions              
from heads roiled reciting              
Better, heads rolled from fighting              
but I left Alice to that            
Winning grin big as the zodiac              
fading from Cheshire cat
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