These boots were made for walkin’
MadameLavender
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Guardian of Shadows
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Anonymous
Thanks for the entry ML. Lovely stuff 😊
TIG
Joined 28th Mar 2018
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Fire of Insight
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thanks
Anonymous
Hi Tig - sorry, this comp is for new writes only I’m afraid.
Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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School Shoes
I stood alone In a world of laughter
friends playful glee at my bare feet
my eyes fixed envious on my friends
flaunting their gleaming school shoes
they laughed at my bare feet
as tears streamed down my face
everyday as I walked to school
it was a lonely place
teachers turned a blind eye
knowing my family didn't care
if we were schooled or not
if shoes be the caveat, stay home
my classmates laughed and demeaned
sometimes stamping on my bare toes
school was important to me for the books
so I sobbed in my heart each day
a twist unforeseen fate had a plan
the headmaster's transfer to another school
he sent a box through my brother
the headmaster's treasures were mine
Within the box books aplenty
of strong man and cats, princesses and magic
tales of adventures from far away land
happiness suffused my thin frame
and wonders Cinderella's godmother
paled to my headmaster's generosity
for among those boundless tales,
a pair of white school shoes glimmered
With trembling hands I touched them
tears down my cheeks, smile on my lips
I slipped them on and how it fitted
snug as if it was made for me
I arose feeling the clown cape slide
I walked confident in my stride
no more shall they laugh and deride
the colour of my mud caked feet
I walked with pride, my steps so sure
into the classrooms and silence ensued
I was no longer defined by what I lacked
but through the subjects that I passed
the laughter faded and the tears subsided
my white school shoes was a platform
for me to stand tall and strong
and face the tide of childhood tribulations.
friends playful glee at my bare feet
my eyes fixed envious on my friends
flaunting their gleaming school shoes
they laughed at my bare feet
as tears streamed down my face
everyday as I walked to school
it was a lonely place
teachers turned a blind eye
knowing my family didn't care
if we were schooled or not
if shoes be the caveat, stay home
my classmates laughed and demeaned
sometimes stamping on my bare toes
school was important to me for the books
so I sobbed in my heart each day
a twist unforeseen fate had a plan
the headmaster's transfer to another school
he sent a box through my brother
the headmaster's treasures were mine
Within the box books aplenty
of strong man and cats, princesses and magic
tales of adventures from far away land
happiness suffused my thin frame
and wonders Cinderella's godmother
paled to my headmaster's generosity
for among those boundless tales,
a pair of white school shoes glimmered
With trembling hands I touched them
tears down my cheeks, smile on my lips
I slipped them on and how it fitted
snug as if it was made for me
I arose feeling the clown cape slide
I walked confident in my stride
no more shall they laugh and deride
the colour of my mud caked feet
I walked with pride, my steps so sure
into the classrooms and silence ensued
I was no longer defined by what I lacked
but through the subjects that I passed
the laughter faded and the tears subsided
my white school shoes was a platform
for me to stand tall and strong
and face the tide of childhood tribulations.
Written by Grace
(IDryad)
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wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1874
All the Miles Logged
A long time ago my wife gifted me a pair of shoes
I remember they were my first with memory foam
Now I’m writing a poem to those old blue Sketchers
And honestly, they were the best pair I ever owned
It wasn’t just the comfort, color or style
But they were best pair to have on the road
All the miles I logged every time I jogged
Felt smooth and soft with each step in control
And the times when I didn’t have my music
With just the sound of my breathing and feet
Watching the sun rise over the mountains
It felt like I could accomplish any feat
Until one day in the rain I stepped on a puddle
I felt the old soles had finally met their fate
The Sketchers had surely been worn down
And so I said goodbye to my running mates
Written by wallyroo92
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Anonymous
Thanks for your entries Grace and WallyRoo. Lovely stuff.
Razzerleaf
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 15th Sep 2019 Forum Posts: 525
If football boots could talk
I was there when you had nowt,
as hard as the streets
split dry cracks down the backs
drinking dubbin
like half time oranges.
You where ashamed to take me out
I saw those molded smirks.
The painted laughter of three white stripes
washed away on wet grass,
you left me in the dark, dirty and damp.
I understood the lure of soft and supply,
the flash of colour, always a substitute,
but I had my time,
the speedy tap dance of leather to leather
a trawlers catch bulging in the net.
We both made the most
of those five minute moments.
I know we were cheap and angry
ready to take skin and blood samples
from anyone who stared too long,
but you wanted me that way
and I wanted to see you smile.
as hard as the streets
split dry cracks down the backs
drinking dubbin
like half time oranges.
You where ashamed to take me out
I saw those molded smirks.
The painted laughter of three white stripes
washed away on wet grass,
you left me in the dark, dirty and damp.
I understood the lure of soft and supply,
the flash of colour, always a substitute,
but I had my time,
the speedy tap dance of leather to leather
a trawlers catch bulging in the net.
We both made the most
of those five minute moments.
I know we were cheap and angry
ready to take skin and blood samples
from anyone who stared too long,
but you wanted me that way
and I wanted to see you smile.
Written by Razzerleaf
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slipalong
Forum Posts: 861
Dangerous Mind
43
Joined 1st Jan 2018Forum Posts: 861
Killer Heels (worn by my alter ego)
Vain statements they just lie in wait
Proclaimed platforms doubled as a pair
Their audaciousness won’t hesitate
Firey steps the wearer dares.
Bring power as you strike a pose!
Raised expectations, as your worlds a stage
Makes you walk with a brandished vouge.
For their effect can’t be assuaged
An elevation that is not just physical
From the ground floor up, on the radar
For their effect are somehow mythical
Brave Foothold for the shining crusader
Skyscraper heels make the ego fly
Her red soles by Christian Louboutin
Pain, but the price is never to high
That Homicide style can never be wrong
Written by slipalong
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Anonymous
Thanks so much for the entries Razzerleaf and Slipalong. Appreciated.
Jezkeebs
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Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 26th Dec 2019Forum Posts: 13
D.M
Those lace up boots
Memory of doc martens
I had a black pair
Joe 90 had cherry
I first met him letting off firecrackers in his hand and he told me the secret to having balls was hidden in bohemian rhapsody
I could never work it out
Sometimes we swapped one boot for one
How people stared as we stomped around town with mismatched boots, dressed in black
Getting high on rum and coke
Also from the smoke
Motorbike madness
200 kph what a rush
Then you told me you liked to close your eyes at that moment
Like a slow blink
Just to get even more of a rise
And when you took off those permanently shaded prescription glasses you had large, heavy lidded, vulnerable blue eyes the girls loved
They loved a bad boy
Scoob, you too had the DM's
The uniform of 'the boys'
Hoons, munters, drop outs
Your place was the hang out, the piss up, the party, your mum was never there. The sleepouts, the old caravan, the long drop.
You were the first boy to have a nose ring back in school, you took no shit from anyone and drew the meanest skull tattoo
Jobless wasters, hopefully getting high by midday, drunk as the sun went down over the bay, speeding in a car with a keg of beer. Bonnet surfing, donuts at the lilly ponds, burnouts at the lookout
Joe and Scoob. Yous two didn't grow up, I got a job
I wasn't in the car
You knew the road Joe!
That corner is a killer you pushed it to far
One motto of 'the boy's' was 'No vegetables!'
You know how flesh can be smashed in a car crash?
Never wore seatbelts, not in the remit
Four boys, half men, two dead, one with short term memory loss, another walks with a limp.
Joe 90 and Scoob
Share a grave
Buried in their leather jackets and boots
Love you guys
RIP
Memory of doc martens
I had a black pair
Joe 90 had cherry
I first met him letting off firecrackers in his hand and he told me the secret to having balls was hidden in bohemian rhapsody
I could never work it out
Sometimes we swapped one boot for one
How people stared as we stomped around town with mismatched boots, dressed in black
Getting high on rum and coke
Also from the smoke
Motorbike madness
200 kph what a rush
Then you told me you liked to close your eyes at that moment
Like a slow blink
Just to get even more of a rise
And when you took off those permanently shaded prescription glasses you had large, heavy lidded, vulnerable blue eyes the girls loved
They loved a bad boy
Scoob, you too had the DM's
The uniform of 'the boys'
Hoons, munters, drop outs
Your place was the hang out, the piss up, the party, your mum was never there. The sleepouts, the old caravan, the long drop.
You were the first boy to have a nose ring back in school, you took no shit from anyone and drew the meanest skull tattoo
Jobless wasters, hopefully getting high by midday, drunk as the sun went down over the bay, speeding in a car with a keg of beer. Bonnet surfing, donuts at the lilly ponds, burnouts at the lookout
Joe and Scoob. Yous two didn't grow up, I got a job
I wasn't in the car
You knew the road Joe!
That corner is a killer you pushed it to far
One motto of 'the boy's' was 'No vegetables!'
You know how flesh can be smashed in a car crash?
Never wore seatbelts, not in the remit
Four boys, half men, two dead, one with short term memory loss, another walks with a limp.
Joe 90 and Scoob
Share a grave
Buried in their leather jackets and boots
Love you guys
RIP
Written by Jezkeebs
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Anonymous
Thanks for the entry Jezkeebs :)
Anonymous
Thanks for all of your entries. It was super hard to choose!
Congrats to _isgyppie who really managed to convey emotion and power into their write. It’s the piece that touched me the most.
Congrats also to Jezkeebs who nailed the brief with their narrative and to Razzerleaf who wrote a poem I could identify with as well as both entries stepping outside the box. Pardon the pun.
All of the entries really were great. Until next time :)
Congrats to _isgyppie who really managed to convey emotion and power into their write. It’s the piece that touched me the most.
Congrats also to Jezkeebs who nailed the brief with their narrative and to Razzerleaf who wrote a poem I could identify with as well as both entries stepping outside the box. Pardon the pun.
All of the entries really were great. Until next time :)
Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 17049
Congratulations to all the winners.
Razzerleaf
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 15th Sep 2019 Forum Posts: 525
Congrats to all, esp Isgyppie and many thanks Missy for hosting and encouraging.