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Cafe Critique 4 - QUINTAIN

Posted: 4th December 2019 3:15pm
Edited: 4th December 2019 9:02pm - edited 2 times
David_Macleod
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Poetry Contest

A Fiver Squared - (An original form of Quintain by David Macleod)

THE QUINTAIN

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/cafe-critique/discussion/1728/

A Fiver Squared - (An original form of Quintain by David Macleod)

This is a new poetry form borrowing ideas from the form known as quintains (5 line poems)

A Fiver Squared (Creator David Macleod)

A five-line poem
lines strictly must have only 5 syllables
the rhyming scheme is:

aabba

Subject: Festive Holidays - good or bad, happy or sad
Three weeks
New writes
Have fun

Example:
Kids

Christmas is for kids  .............(a)
Naughty he forbids.................(a)
Good girls and good boys......(b)
Reward, candy, toys................(b)
Doll's prams push, car skids...(a)

Posted: 4th December 2019 4:24pm
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This is a really cool idea, David!  I’ll be working on this today.  I love these kinds of exercises, thank you for posting it 💜.  

Posted: 4th December 2019 9:05pm
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LunaGreyhawk said:This is a really cool idea, David!  I’ll be working on this today.  I love these kinds of exercises, thank you for posting it 💜.  

Cool - Thank you

Posted: 5th December 2019 12:16pm
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Sad Santa

if Loneliness
is your Xmas gift
there's no amount of
of charity that
soothes a heartbreak

just an example not a competition entry

Posted: 8th December 2019 2:37pm
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Holiday Decorations

Window, blade, red snow
Decorations glow
Reindeer Boogeymen
Outside looking in
Santa's secret show

Posted: 9th December 2019 1:05am
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excellent first entry russell_snow - :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Posted: 12th December 2019 2:00pm
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Yellow Snow

A gift for teacher
Something to treat her
With some yellow snow
I made gelato
Served in a saucer
With a brown wafer

Posted: 19th December 2019 4:43pm
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The Quintain squared...  

Strap on my snowshoes  
got the, "no tree blues"  
gonna go get one  
decorate...more fun...  
...relax...drink warm brews.  

 
Written by Ely (E.A.Rothwell)
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Posted: 19th December 2019 6:02pm
Edited: 19th December 2019 6:09pm - edited 2 times
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Figurine and photo image by Jade Pandora.

Posted: 20th December 2019 3:38am
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Mom likes roast beast...

While Mom likes roast beast...
and Dad loves a feast,
I could eat a horse...
chicken fried, of course...
in very hot grease.
Written by Ely (E.A.Rothwell)
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Posted: 20th December 2019 10:32am
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Santa is coming

Sound of bells ringing
Wake me from dreaming
Quiet as a mouse
He creeps through the house
Santa is coming

Posted: 21st December 2019 8:13pm
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Looked Out The Window

Looked out the window
and had not seen snow
on the ground and yet,
those weather guys bet
temps will dip below.
Written by berea440oh
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Posted: 23rd December 2019 8:48am
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all wonderful entries thank you snugglebuck, Ely, Jade-Pandora, ManorMyth and berea440oh, all perfectly formed making it a hard decision

Posted: 23rd December 2019 11:57pm
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My Christmas Wish

As I write this piece,
I wish to find peace,
Start with myself first,
Then the universe,
And my mind at ease.
Written by wallyroo92
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Posted: 24th December 2019 1:59am
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Christmas success

Christmas can bring stress,
If your life's a mess.
Let past regrets go,
then regain control.
This will bring success!
Written by Bluelulu
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