Poetry competition CLOSED 14th December 2019 00:52am
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summultima (uma)
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minimalist comp

Posted: 1st December 2019 6:51pm
LobodeSanPedro
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lepperochan said:Lobo, welcome. epic stuff, shows a real understanding of things which I'm ashamed to say surprised me somewhat


best o luck, man


*Oglaigh

Did an edit to get it closer to the word count

Posted: 1st December 2019 8:07pm
slipalong
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That Mural

The heroine defined
She of everywoman kind
Tigeress emptied every magazine
 Flush of passion on her cheek
Mascara'd lid that did'nt blink
Outlined bullets rained
Written by slipalong
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Posted: 1st December 2019 9:32pm
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Posted: 2nd December 2019 00:29am
lepperochan
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Slip along, welcome, loved it, well done

besta luck

Posted: 2nd December 2019 00:33am
lepperochan
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Ethan, I think you're having way too much fun with this. I'm gonna have to start thinking about sending mi6 an alert

but, more than that, I like that the picture and / or story provoked. good stuff man

Posted: 2nd December 2019 00:34am
lepperochan
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fuckin A, Doc!. impressed

best o luck

Posted: 2nd December 2019 00:46am
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Posted: 2nd December 2019 4:51pm
lepperochan
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AEMelia, welcome

good stuff,  lady.  best o luck

Posted: 3rd December 2019 4:33am
inechoingsilence
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Regal unto Death -Eulogy

Killer queen
leather armor, polka dot gown
Your scepter an assault rifle
endurance your battle cry
Vengeance your holy mission
beloved by all your men
Written by inechoingsilence
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Posted: 3rd December 2019 7:21am
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Posted: 3rd December 2019 2:59pm
lepperochan
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InEchoingSilence, welcome and good stuff, Lady  best o luck

5th Riddler, welcome, also good stuff, man. best o luck.



[ If theres no objections I might close this at the end of the week]  


Posted: 3rd December 2019 4:00pm
Kinkpoet
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https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/366343-battlefield-tragedy/

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