Cafe Critique 1(Haiku)
eswaller
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Dangerous Mind
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Sound of Autumn
The rustling of leaves
Crunching like ice beneath her
Feet is beautiful
Crunching like ice beneath her
Feet is beautiful
Written by eswaller
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eswaller
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Dec 2015Forum Posts: 763
Autumn Breath
She takes the smell of
Autumn into her lungs as
She breathes a new breath
Autumn into her lungs as
She breathes a new breath
Written by eswaller
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David_Macleod
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Tyrant of Words
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more excellent entries eswaller, thank you so much :-))))))))
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Sabrina Kirk-Caldwell
Thought Provoker
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Desert Rose
Sandy, dry, desert,
Water gone, minerals form
Tan and rust roses.
Water gone, minerals form
Tan and rust roses.
Written by Orc_Pirate_68
(Sabrina Kirk-Caldwell)
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Zaynab_kamoonpury
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Fire of Insight
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Summery muse
When golden orbs of sunshine
kiss your window sill
and sunlight enters
like divine floodlights
and warms you up softly
glinting upon your knick knacks
and the decor then shines
like glittery sequins
you know
it's time you stroll to the sunkissed beach
and let sand and sun combine
in olden golden shine
for holidaying kodak moments!!
Trees offer a background of tinsels
A sunshiny backdrop for snaps[b]
But in tropical places
the heat of the summer
can also be a real big bummer![/b]
Swimming pools a lucky escape
from a scorching parched landscape.
kiss your window sill
and sunlight enters
like divine floodlights
and warms you up softly
glinting upon your knick knacks
and the decor then shines
like glittery sequins
you know
it's time you stroll to the sunkissed beach
and let sand and sun combine
in olden golden shine
for holidaying kodak moments!!
Trees offer a background of tinsels
A sunshiny backdrop for snaps[b]
But in tropical places
the heat of the summer
can also be a real big bummer![/b]
Swimming pools a lucky escape
from a scorching parched landscape.
Written by Zaynab_kamoonpury
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wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1871
A Golden Hue (Haiku)
Over the mountains
the sun comes up gloriously
in a golden hue
the sun comes up gloriously
in a golden hue
Written by wallyroo92
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David_Macleod
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Despite haters and doubters every entry without fail was indeed a Traditional Japanese Haiku. The standard of all the entries was top notch. This is the most difficult Competition I have had the pleasure of judging since joining DU and it was almost too close to call.
Congratulations to souladareatease coming up trumps to scoop the trophy - cold_fusion and PlaydateWithFire commended as runners up. Thank you once again to everyone who entered the quality of your poetry certainly shone through :-))))))))))))
Congratulations to souladareatease coming up trumps to scoop the trophy - cold_fusion and PlaydateWithFire commended as runners up. Thank you once again to everyone who entered the quality of your poetry certainly shone through :-))))))))))))
souladareatease
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David_Macleod said:Despite haters and doubters every entry without fail was indeed a Traditional Japanese Haiku. The standard of all the entries was top notch. This is the most difficult Competition I have had the pleasure of judging since joining DU and it was almost too close to call.
Congratulations to souladareatease coming up trumps to scoop the trophy - cold_fusion and PlaydateWithFire commended as runners up. Thank you once again to everyone who entered the quality of your poetry certainly shone through :-))))))))))))
And a Top Notch Comp. David!!!!
Thank You so much for The Honor!!!
Incredible entries put in by Everyone->!!!
What a Wonderful surprise -A smile on the face to be sure
Congratulations to souladareatease coming up trumps to scoop the trophy - cold_fusion and PlaydateWithFire commended as runners up. Thank you once again to everyone who entered the quality of your poetry certainly shone through :-))))))))))))
And a Top Notch Comp. David!!!!
Thank You so much for The Honor!!!
Incredible entries put in by Everyone->!!!
What a Wonderful surprise -A smile on the face to be sure
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cold_fusion
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Congratulations dear Soula!! well deserved win!!
and awesome entries and effort all..same to PlayDateWithFire... !
honor taking part in the comp Dave! a massive thanks to you!
ps:- apologies for the late awakening to this
and awesome entries and effort all..same to PlayDateWithFire... !
honor taking part in the comp Dave! a massive thanks to you!
ps:- apologies for the late awakening to this