Oh, it was definitely you.
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Fallen_Angel_194
Angel.
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Angel.
Thought Provoker
5
Joined 24th May 2014 Forum Posts: 318
wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1871
On Second Thought
But on second thought now a lot of it makes sense,
You used to accuse me of lying and cheating,
It was your guilty conscience under pretense,
How many times did you lie about late work meetings?
Hey, did you think about all those marital vows?
When his cock was up inside you and it felt good,
When you came home late with excuses that somehow
Made sense when you told bold face lies right where you stood.
And when you confessed it was a real fucking mess,
I blamed me for my conduct that led you astray,
I said I forgave you but deep down I regressed,
To a profound anger to explode in a melee.
I can sit here and point fingers at you all day,
But I hope the guilt you feel will eat you alive,
You want to be a bad-ass bitch who doesn’t play?
We’ll let those slammer bars calm down your furious drive.
Still want to come at me right after you made bail?
I can take anything, I have been the bad guy,
You think you’re going to make my life a living hell,
I am the abyss, you done fucked up so girl bye.
But on second thought now a lot of it makes sense,
You used to accuse me of lying and cheating,
It was your guilty conscience under pretense,
How many times did you lie about late work meetings?
Hey, did you think about all those marital vows?
When his cock was up inside you and it felt good,
When you came home late with excuses that somehow
Made sense when you told bold face lies right where you stood.
And when you confessed it was a real fucking mess,
I blamed me for my conduct that led you astray,
I said I forgave you but deep down I regressed,
To a profound anger to explode in a melee.
I can sit here and point fingers at you all day,
But I hope the guilt you feel will eat you alive,
You want to be a bad-ass bitch who doesn’t play?
We’ll let those slammer bars calm down your furious drive.
Still want to come at me right after you made bail?
I can take anything, I have been the bad guy,
You think you’re going to make my life a living hell,
I am the abyss, you done fucked up so girl bye.
LostGirl18
Forum Posts: 105
Fire of Insight
10
Joined 15th Feb 2017 Forum Posts: 105
Who's fault?
I'm wondering why
you NEVER call
AFTER
you
BEND me over the conference table
hammering out a wicked thrill
deep and sharp
PAINFUL
like an electric drill
not once
do you give ANY sign of hesitation
so I spread my legs
in DESPERATE resignation
the very next evening
towards a couples PRIVATE destination
you flew
with your ex
on a TWO WEEK vacation
I came to
during that PERIOD
a hefty realization
REVENGE being the soul proprietor
of my sudden motivation
the joy to IMAGINE
TEARS spit
from your mother's eyes
as she faces the hard fact
of her ONLY child's DEMISE
on bent knee
in PRAYER for your absolution
you beg me to
accept one simple SOLUTION
I decide to have the FINAL say
then out of your pocket did you pay
for the mysterious pregnancy
that came YOUR way
..aren't you grateful for that "fake" abortion?
it was ALWAYS you
so RETURN my voicemails
- -
motherfucker!
Written by LostGirl18
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eswaller
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Dec 2015Forum Posts: 763
Your Fault
You walked away and never looked
Back. Why did you hurt me like that?
Just like everyone else you hooked
Me in and felt like a fool who laid flat
On her back waiting for all the tears
To completely subside. Within your
Promised words I thought my fears
Would vanish, but once that door
Closed they came roaring back and
All I could think is why am I not good
Enough for anyone who could stand
Promising me love. Everything wood
Made has to burn sometime because
They are truly not meant to survive
The harsh storm. The shattered vase
And the fact that you would not dive
Deep into this love is solely your fault.
Fire is in my veins. All I could wonder
Is how dare you! Have it with a grain
Of salt. You said it was a fatal blunder
And misstep on your part. You made
It feel like my whole world was falling
Down. I was putting my whole heart on
The line. You let our love go and fade
Away. You never stayed past the dawn
In the end you messed with the wrong
Girl and I was done with the love song.
Back. Why did you hurt me like that?
Just like everyone else you hooked
Me in and felt like a fool who laid flat
On her back waiting for all the tears
To completely subside. Within your
Promised words I thought my fears
Would vanish, but once that door
Closed they came roaring back and
All I could think is why am I not good
Enough for anyone who could stand
Promising me love. Everything wood
Made has to burn sometime because
They are truly not meant to survive
The harsh storm. The shattered vase
And the fact that you would not dive
Deep into this love is solely your fault.
Fire is in my veins. All I could wonder
Is how dare you! Have it with a grain
Of salt. You said it was a fatal blunder
And misstep on your part. You made
It feel like my whole world was falling
Down. I was putting my whole heart on
The line. You let our love go and fade
Away. You never stayed past the dawn
In the end you messed with the wrong
Girl and I was done with the love song.
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LostGirl18
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 15th Feb 2017 Forum Posts: 105
Congratulations Luna!
Mr. Highly -
will you be commenting on our poems individually as previously stated? I'd like to know my rank on your "scientific" scale.
Yours,
LostGirl
Mr. Highly -
will you be commenting on our poems individually as previously stated? I'd like to know my rank on your "scientific" scale.
Yours,
LostGirl
MadameLavender
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Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5727
Congrats to Luna!
Thanks for hosting & for runner up!
Thanks for hosting & for runner up!