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STRANGE CREATURE

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Sex_on_the_Joe
Joe-D
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Poetry Contest

I would like to know just how my DUP family felt and what they thought when they first joined DUP.. Do you remember when you were just a STRANGE CREATURE... Tell me your experiences... Your battles... Your joys.... Your sorrows...
Only 1 submission needed for anyone brave enough to tell their story.... You can tell me through any kind of poetic view.... But I myself love the rhyme scheme.... This will challenge those who are not great at rhyming... I will share my story first just to give an example.... Do please make it good.... Give me your best shot........  Please donot enter previously written or submitted works... All submissions must be original and newly written... Please nothing old. Lets have some fun!!!!!

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Sex_on_the_Joe
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Strange Creature

 
I am but flesh and blood
Skin and bone
This worldly planet
I dare not call home
My sins are many
My discretions unknown
My intentions insatiable
The DUP is where I roam
Left unfriended at first
Sword and thoughts all alone
I've clawed, scratched and scoured
To kill the coward I've honed
My mission quite clear
Make my name well known
Harvest my intellect
Plant my knowledge till sewn
Give continuous feedback
Till my followers have grown
Manipulate my humanity
Till my insanity has blown
Go toe to toe with other writers
Till my craft is widely shown

These were my goals
That I boasted like a preacher
When lil ole' me
Was just another new
STRANGE CREATURE
Written by Sex_on_the_Joe (Joe-D)
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Nari
Spellbound
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Anonymity

The early onset  
Of a strange creature  
Places the  
Inner workings  
Of this mind    
On trial    
By other bodies    
Who have been      
Here    
Longer    
In cyberspace-    
Herding over    
These
Artifacts    
Of belonging    
Prepared    
To try, convict    
And indict me    
Over    
“One”    
Yet I find    
Myself    
Still    
Surrendering    
All objectivity    
In hopes    
Of rubbing    
Elbows    
Alongside    
The least    
Of you.    
 
(Original)    
     
the anonymity that is 1st introduced        
at the onset of a “strange creature”        
will eventually be devoured by eyes        
who herd over these bodies of writing;        
which means that they can now        
try, convict and even indict me        
in cyberspace      
over these “articles of belonging”        
And I am simply ill        
from surrendering all objectivity...        
longing to rub elbows        
with the least of you.
Written by Nari (Spellbound)
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CasketSharpe
Dangerous Mind
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The Sermon of Mr. Brimstone Pt.1 (The Arrival of Stone)

There's nothing greater than the arrival of armageddon  
causing asses and armpits to start sweatin,  
 When final darkness descends it will never leave  
soul snatching the foolish and making motherfuckers bleed,  
 
 The king of pain following the path of the endtime  
that's why by the millions sinners are dying,  
 Dead motherfuckers everyday guided into the unknown black  
borderline paranoid always watching their back,  
 
 From the moment of my birth-out a slimy pussy I had to slide  
heavenly denied, so to motherfuckin hell I guess-I'll ride,  
 My cremation crossroads leads to an unwanted rest  
now all I've got is a ash filled breath,  
 
 I'm without pity with innocent eyes that's cruel  
putting your trust in my mercy. You a goddamn fool,  
 The weak-willed and power hungry look for elevation  
but all their doing is hasting eternal damnation,  
 
 Those who want eternal peace pray I don't war again  
but killing is in my blood and love is my sin,  
 Because on everyone's grave I'll be pissing  
worldwide genocide. Now you know your future condition,  
 
 Call it pieces of the human puzzle with a dark twist  
our own mutilated burning that will never quit,  
 Like Jesus, my greatness can be put on the list  
while he sacrificed in blood I'm not sacrificing shit.  
 
 
 
   
   
   
   
   
 
Written by CasketSharpe
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Sex_on_the_Joe
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Thank you CasketSharpe for your submission but unfortunately I cannot use it. I need a piece that expresses your experiences and or thoughts of DUP when you first joined as a STRANGE CREATURE. If you don't mind can you submit a different piece that expresses your STRANGE CREATURE experiences.  Thank you

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Sex_on_the_Joe
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Thank you Nari for being the first one to submit a piece to my contest....

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Miss_Sub
- Missy -
Tyrant of Words
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The Ballad Of Ali P

I met him in the very first week
though he’d been here for a while,
I’d see his name light on the left—
it would always make me smile

we ripped apart the establishment
wrote poems on the popular ones
and tainted the deep, dark underworld,
Hell - we used our words as guns

and our collabs were a happy place
where none would get away
from the wicked nature of our pens
that simply had too much to say.

Now Ali P, he up and left,
came back with another name,
we still were collab partners
but it wasn’t quite the same

our pens they weren’t as vicious
the colours weren’t as loud,
as the veil of time descended
and we lived beneath the cloud

but I’ll never forget those moments,
a strange creature, way back when
the words, they didn’t matter as much
and we never questioned the pen

for now I am a Tyrant Of Words
and it’s not the same, you see—
I miss the deep, dark carefree days
of being wild with Ali P.


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Sex_on_the_Joe
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wow thank you Miss_Sub for that wonderful walk through memory lane. Just what I was looking for.. Superb....  

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eswaller
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Steps Forward

I am like a newborn baby taking my first steps into
The wild blue yonder with my green eyes wide open
And taking it in. My once cloudless, quiet and blue

Sky is now cracking like an egg to let all the broken
Pieces come in. I have fault lines that are not linear
Or perfect. It is like my fragmented soul has woken

Up and I am alive. The words holding me prisoner
Let me breathe. They become my friends like those
On DUP. I morphed myself from a strange creature

And evolved into a dangerous mind. A singular rose
That expands and grows into a garden of butterflies.
I bravely toss myself into the fiery flames and throes.
Written by eswaller
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Sex_on_the_Joe
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what an amazing write  eswaller. exactly what im looking for

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JenBug1
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Illusions of the heart

    illusion of the heart
      
   A pretty little thing don't you think
    
 Turn it up side down an see how it can make you
   bleed
  
 You think it has 2 beautiful rounded curves what an
   illusion
      
 There is one part that is sharper than a two edged
   blade
      
  Be careful for wen that pretty little heart turns on
   you
    
It will cut your insides up and rip through your spirit
   like a hot knife through butter
  
 That pretty little heart will leave you with a dark
      empty space
    
 Lets full up the emptiness with a beautiful colorful
     rainbow that will only make you smile again
      
 Let go of that little pretty illusion of a heart it will be
      the death of you
  
      
Written by JenBug1
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PeaceFlpw
Peace Flow
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Strange Creature(ContestEntry)

 
 
 
 
  settling into an unknown place; being a "strange creature"; how long could i hang, cling, bring out something; anything worth while; is it worth while?  
 
 
    it brought forth welcome and smiles; I desperately needed then, much more than now; a towel "wipe yourself down"; a shelter from the storm out there, I've found
 
 
    Deepunderground; I like how that sounds; my resting rate heart pulsates in a place that felt safe....indeed escape....
Written by PeaceFlpw (Peace Flow)
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_Ani_
Papaya
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Strange Creature

~  

might all eyes be on me, i feared  
    a strange creature in a lonely place  
a lonely creature in a strange place  
 
i was no more and no less, noticed  
   than just a girl searching for any place  
 
wanting to be seen and heard  
afraid to reach out  
       afraid of being shut out  
trying too hard  
     and not hard enough  
 
a poet full of doubt is still a poet  
and without a doubt  
i landed where i needed to be  
      on the sidelines, the fringe  
 
a newborn full of words  
not seasoned enough to fit in
but curious as a cat  
     frightened out of her skin  
 
~
Written by _Ani_ (Papaya)
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wow!!!! thank you  PeaceFlow for that wonderful entry.

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thank you _Ani_ for your beautiful submission

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